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    How Its Over

    Please please don’t test me, I am no killer/
    Please please I’m going on a rampage like Godzilla//
    My bullets will shoot right through ur soul/
    Ill salute your death by hanging you from a flag pole//
    Im right on that edge/
    Please Please someone push this cat off the ledge//
    Ha, this stuff is straight dirty/
    Kind of like you, maybe you shouldn’t have been so flirty//
    Some of my crew calls me insane/
    Let me know, am I fucking with your brain?//
    I’ll always put on my kind of flare/
    I chop up your limbs, make you choke on a pair//
    Its all humor till it happens to your being/
    You wont be being, nothing will you be seeing//
    What does that mean? You’ll scream/
    Arrest me now!, call in the SWAT team//
    You never read a description so vivid/
    I’m furious now, you made this emcee livid//
    I tried being nice..ahh maybe twice/
    That’s cold. Like your body frozen in ice//
    I’ll use your cubes in my coke a cola/
    Ill send you off a bridge..in a Toyota Carolla//
    I hope you can derive something from nothing.
    I hope your listening to these rhymes/
    I tried warning you.. Zero times//
    Im wicked, you just had to know/
    Why I kept trying to suffocate you in the snow//
    In your coffin, I might hide a bee hive/
    So they can sting you, making sure your not alive//


    I couldn’t leave the game, it’s a shame/
    Our relationship.. I had to maim//
    But its all the same.
    I rock her, you rock me, I see/
    Whats going on, its all on me//
    I know what you be thinking/
    Keep blinking, it’s a dream your linking//
    It up to, Its all lies/
    But it will eventually lead to our demise//
    Im wise, these words break our ties/
    The ones we had based on all lies//
    I played you, you won the match/
    We clashed, you broke our latch//
    Its over, don’t try to makeup/
    Our foundation and coverup, our breakup//
    It happened, let everyone know/
    I SAID LET EVERYONE KNOW!
    Your not intelligent, my words are negligent//
    You cant read between my lines/
    Rhymes, mean something more than our lives//
    Gold mines, see something shining, look behinds//
    Its tough, no doubt first week kind of rough/
    But it appears you had enough, of this stuff//
    That’s what its called, its what it is, are you appauled?/
    My lyrics have left you mauled, In your room crying.
    I know you balled//

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    This was easy to read. Good flow good elevation. This almost seems like it could be a poem or something. God some good skills in that area. Maybe you should come up with a better ending. At the end of every song, there should be the best punch ever. Work on that.

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    Hey, can you post up who you replied to?
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    i wasn't really feelin this much, didnt like the structure, it seemed a bit forced, but it wasnt bad, i just didnt like it........too basic..aight...Pc
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    Thanks for the comments. Sorry about the not posting thing. Thanks

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