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Thread: Corrupted Mind

  1. November 19th, 2003, 03:43 PM #1
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    Corrupted Mind

    R.I.P. Crossroads by Lulon
    Truth Hurts featuring Rhythmic Tendicies by Fgee
    A Lesson in Love by ROb D


    BEAT= "One Day At A Time"

    Throughout my life, all I've seen is misery and blood//
    suicidal with my life, I dont want to live anymore cuz//
    i won't be flowin with the wind, and I know that I can't win//
    for fuckin with the devil and I have lost too man kin//
    and I have lost too many friends, cant deal with the loss//
    and some friends is turnin on me and it's pissin me off//
    and in my eyes I wonder why I see red//
    and why I have a mindful of demons that stay roamin in my head//
    and I sit by my bed, prayin to God I will fly//
    cuz my violent visions tell me that soon I will die//
    what the hell am I ognna do in this world?//
    consinplatas got me trippin and paranoid to lose my girl//
    and it's everyday my girl is in fear for my well being//
    cuz she cries at the thought of when my death clock will ring//
    caught in the middle of being dda original hellspawn//
    on an everlasting struggle from dusk till the dawn//
    but continuously I try to keep myself from goin loca//
    cuz in my eyes, I'm a mutha fuckin soulja//
    and lord I hope you see me, I'm prayin to you to keep me blessed//
    cuz I don't want to see the fire when I'm in the eternal rest//
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  2. November 19th, 2003, 06:05 PM #2
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    uppin why yall sleepin
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  3. November 19th, 2003, 07:20 PM #3
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    Nice drop, your flow was pretty nice, and you had some pretty good quotables around there. This is what I like to see from fam.Good drop Withers..
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  4. November 20th, 2003, 02:20 PM #4
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    Uppin. Yo why yall sleepin
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  5. November 20th, 2003, 05:43 PM #5
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    Nice flow, and some nice use of Vocab. I was really feeling this piece. niiiice man. good imagery in it
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  6. November 20th, 2003, 05:44 PM #6
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    best line was the end
    and lord I hope you see me, I'm prayin to you to keep me blessed//
    cuz I don't want to see the fire when I'm in the eternal rest//
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  7. November 20th, 2003, 07:02 PM #7
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  8. November 21st, 2003, 04:22 AM #8
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    nice drop,
    flow was good,
    some nice lines,


    and lord I hope you see me, I'm prayin to you to keep me blessed//
    cuz I don't want to see the fire when I'm in the eternal rest//

    ^ dope right there.

    anyway overall good piece
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  9. November 21st, 2003, 09:20 AM #9
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  10. November 21st, 2003, 12:25 PM #10
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    come on yall STOP SLEEPIN!!!!!!!!
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  11. November 21st, 2003, 01:46 PM #11
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    damn...reall deep..good flo..8/10
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  12. November 21st, 2003, 07:53 PM #12
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  13. November 21st, 2003, 08:07 PM #13
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    It was an alright drop, you could have used a better rhyme scheme and more vocab. But you had some pretty Ill lines in there. I think it would sound alot better with that beat your talkin about, so thats straight. Its was pretty good.

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  14. November 21st, 2003, 08:21 PM #14
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    Same Shit as Rob D Said.. That Line Was Dope..
    The Rest Was Above Average.. Overall Nice Drop

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