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Thread: change of heat and mind

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    change of heat and mind

    3 mutherfucking links

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...583#post909583
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...616#post909616
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91899
    called change of heart and mind
    its like a collab with my self kinda long tho most free written

    this is the story, of a young boy, with torn sides
    divorced perents, who has no choice but to go for the ride
    his mind decides on 1 truth and cant open up for anything else
    thet say follow ur heart, and i will reveal what was once on the shelf

    corus 1 (1x)
    mind- i remember the boy askin, if theyed ever get a divorce
    heart- Ok you have my attention, is there any more?
    mind- they lied to us, whay cant you see this?
    heart- shit happens, shit like this i just seem to miss
    mind- pussy you allways ran when things got fuerry
    heart- calm down, just let me hear your story

    mind-
    Well rumor has it, at birth i came out to their objection
    corection, she didnt treat me well, so crammed into her intestines
    wouldnt budge, so they resorted to a c-section
    came out heart broken, now can u see the conection
    my perents learned their lesson, askin to many questions
    so now there testin my judgment of life, but i aint sweatin
    they dont pay for my protection, but yet want my affection
    since birth, ive headed in the wrong direction
    droped a few times but i knew they didnt mean it
    theyve done worst stuff, so dont think im being leinient

    heart-
    your wrong son, like this song you think youve been forgotten
    say you got no friends, your just a kid, and you treat everybody rotten
    you say youre perents dont diserve you, and they hurt you
    well boo hoo, i see things differently, get the que?
    you say you got to houses, and youll never have a home
    if its the divorce you cant get over, then ull allways be alone
    except me, im here but still u need that bone thrown
    you except to be grown, then take a step up to the throan
    i know you love your perents, i know you cherish them
    why do you deny it when i know youed give up a limb

    corus 2 (1x)

    mind- i cant hold on or stay strong, dont know what i gotta do
    heart- jus hold on stay strong, allways stay true
    mind- you forgot about me, and i live how i wanna live
    heart- No i was here, i was watchin how your love gives
    mind- well it doesnt, well atleast not any more
    heart- cmon man, you gotta get over that divorce
    mind- they hurt me, so now i hurt them
    heart- you were never like this, and you used to have friends

    mind-
    Never tell me what i have, and now what i had
    you should jus be glad, your not the one im mad at
    cant you tell im changed, its amazing that you pulled through
    you got guts dude, or shouled i say muscle and tissue
    i controll this boy, if im depressed hes depressed
    and if i wanna kill myself, ill leave his body lifeless
    my feelings a mess, to bad you controll his emotion
    keeping him from crying has to take some devotion
    leaving his feelings bottled up inside has to be a bad idea
    cuz when you let go, im gana get outa here

    heart-
    Its you who controlls his thoughts, why cant you be satisfied
    to make him happy i settled down, i jus had to try
    i told you, hold on and stay strong, do what you gotta do
    i respect you mind, but im not liken your attitude
    your sad i see this, but this is somethen you gotta relise
    its over, instead of lookin through his, look through your own eyes
    they jus want to love us, and for us to atleast like them
    and thats somethen i can settle for, so swollow the flem
    in your kids throat, and swollow your pride
    were on different views, but im still on your side

    corus 3 (1x)
    mind- i see it all, its like i see the light
    heart- na hes jus lookin into the sun, someone needs to slap this kid right
    mind- well anyways i apoligise, i guess this fued was my last try
    heart- dont apoligise to me, lets talk to the people who love us tonight

    thats the story of a boys mind and heart at fued
    pass this on, im sure this has happend to you
    now you the science between all of this
    but all the fighting you seem to miss
    wonder why ur paralyzed from the mind down
    its cuz u allways turn ur smile, into an ugly frown

    jus tell me if this ish is good or not took me 30 min to write so i spent some quality time with while whackin off in between allways seems to rejuvinate the mind
    Last edited by Topic; November 15th, 2003 at 05:42 PM
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    that is amazin, the hole concept was ll very unique i liked the emotion and how you made it out tobe like an internal fight, very good flow and wordplay nicely done keep it up pz
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    thanx man uppin
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    i agree this was some ill shit dawg, unusual, but worked a treat......nuthin more to say really.......keep droppin em.....Pc
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    thanx for the responses more please
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    Just registered bro .. This is madd unique .. Definetly feelin' the creativity of this bro .. Like how you put a struggle between the mind and heart .. Straight drop son .. Keep up the good work ..

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    thanx uppin for some critique
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    nice unique piece here dawg. nice wordplay and flow.

    hit my rhyme called 'time bomb'

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    thanx uppin
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    dat was hott it was on point

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    that shit was madd vicuis yo

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    Yeah this was pretty good man.....It was worth the read....You structured this pretty good i thought just watch some lines they were kinda shorter than the other ones but other than that it was pretty good....the flow to this was pretty good as well.....overall this was a good piece.

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