Ayngel VS jay yayo

[Twizted Ayngel]

...since he didnt do it right to begin wid.

rules are;

8 Bars Max.
No DR, Crew, Hate
Due Tomorrow. Midnight.

[jay yayo]

you've been told faces never lie well yor's lie/
I'm about to murder this fagget so call it homo-cide/
maybe your lazy flow will get my vote/
But i doubt it consider my lyrics your suicide note/
you get smacked, trailed, and fail with good stance/
your idea of pushing envelope involes food stamps/
i'ma shoot you up then come back and leave yo whole crew-slain how's that fo determination call me krazey/
But I think you've acted likea bich like patrick swayze/

[Twizted Ayngel]

I'll choke you with this smoke like a rope around your throat, keepin your rhymes most unknown//
Throw you into a psyclone of notes cuz we both know you deliver your lines in monotone//
You Testin' The Throne? You wanna spit sick? I'll Slip this clip into your lip, thats how you'll have bullets to spit//
Your a faggot with jock itch on your top lip ya shit may be fly, cause your ass is known as the cockpit!//
You gotta jock shit to have hot hits and hot spits cause on top you are not, bitch//
You're suicide coincided with my first rhyme, this battle before your first line was spit//


quick verse.. he wasnt worth anything special.

[The End]

Originally posted by jay yayo
you've been told faces never lie well yor's lie/
I'm about to murder this fagget so call it homo-cide/

Explain how a girl is a faggot... ?

Vote- Twisted Ayngel since it flowed better and was overall a better verse. .

[Twizted Ayngel]

..............................Uppin this
for tha first time so y'all fuckin VOTE.........................

[Toner]

I feel the sister more on this one.......Flow, vocab, structure, punches...kna mean. jay yayo...keeep elevatin or battle me son.

Peace

[Laureate]

Hey yo I can't vote but I'd give this one to Ayngel. It flowed better. The cockpit meta was killa. Jay I like the Homo-cide line. Hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91338

[Twizted Ayngel]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uppin this battle again yo.. for the second time... vote! n do tha poll dun jus type it...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Homicide187]

you've been told faces never lie well yor's lie/
I'm about to murder this fagget so call it homo-cide/

^^ my s/n is "homicide" so ive herad that played out "homo-cide" line like 4 million timez.... wasnt feelin it... plus chix cant b faggots...

maybe your lazy flow will get my vote/
But i doubt it consider my lyrics your suicide note/

^^ u kall her flow lazy then say ud vote for her? weird... and y would ur lyrics be a suicide note? u gon kill urself cuz she beat u so bad?... newayz.. weak line

you get smacked, trailed, and fail with good stance/
your idea of pushing envelope involes food stamps/

^^Food stamps are for da ghetto poor ppl.... they use em to buy food..... ur gettin confused wit postage stamps... weak line..

i'ma shoot you up then come back and leave yo whole crew-slain how's that fo determination call me krazey/
But I think you've acted likea bich like patrick swayze/

^^crazy/swayze rhyme was forced.... 'crewslain' dint rhyme wit nuttin else.... so it makes it sound like a long stretched bar.... weak line.....


Ne wayz... i juss figured id point that shyt out... u dint really have a single real diss to her.... she tore u apart... but this isnt a vote... juss a breakdown... Angelz in my crew so i cant vote...

[Twizted Ayngel]

if u gunna take tha time to post a reply.. and you're not in ijl.. u mite as well take tha time to do the poll!

[SmokaJoka]

^^some people with less than 100 posts can't poll....but...i agree with Homicide and The End....Anyngel took this with all ease...Jay had weak vocab...but a good structure Ayngel had the punches, wordplay, flow, and vocab...just a shitty structure...good read though.....i'm not polling...just giving my opinion with the end and homicide....

peace
4:20

[Twizted Ayngel]

^^i know they gotta have 100 posts.. BUT two ppl wit over 100 posts wrote votes but only one polled.. so yeeeah..

[Twizted Ayngel]

wow... look... im fuckin uppin this again... uh huh.. yeah... 100 chars yet... blah blah blah blah blah

[Homicide187]

damn folks.......... yall see a fine femcee rip a dude n yall get scared or suttin....... juss vote... stop sleepin on dis its her first battle so juss do her a favor n vote fairly...... holla

[The End]

Originally posted by Twizted Ayngel
^^i know they gotta have 100 posts.. BUT two ppl wit over 100 posts wrote votes but only one polled.. so yeeeah..

Hmm, fine.. I poll voted.