LLL Prime - The Revival: Season 1 Chat

[Lay Doubt.]

RAO the sauce boss can do as he pleases.

[Blas]

It can be enlightening to have the insight of what specifically could be tweaked or adjusted within a concept/punch/bar, in order to improve it and have one’s writing go over better with readers/voters in the future.

The point of that (at least imo) vote/breakdown style has historically been to assist with elevation. Generally speaking, battlers wouldn’t know what to improve upon or how to do it unless they were given real feedback on the bad lines along with the good.

It might be kinda moot here in 2025, when text battling as a space/realm isn’t what it once was or whatever. But I still think it’s a good thing to not be lazy with votes. I personally will try to be more constructive and less harsh sounding when I vote on everything this week. If anyone gives a shit lol.

i care, also props to u for pm'ing/discussing w me about stuff in a normal manner and caring. trust me, the other few ppl i tried to PM did NOT want to discuss it LMAOOOO

[R A O]

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Here's some more ammo on me lol

[Axe.]

It can be enlightening to have the insight of what specifically could be tweaked or adjusted within a concept/punch/bar, in order to improve it and have one’s writing go over better with readers/voters in the future.

The point of that (at least imo) vote/breakdown style has historically been to assist with elevation. Generally speaking, battlers wouldn’t know what to improve upon or how to do it unless they were given real feedback on the bad lines along with the good.

It might be kinda moot here in 2025, when text battling as a space/realm isn’t what it once was or whatever. But I still think it’s a good thing to not be lazy with votes. I personally will try to be more constructive and less harsh sounding when I vote on everything this week. If anyone gives a shit lol.

I feel like thats fair, I sometimes see my own flaws after I submit my lines on how one word or punctuation could have made it resonate better with what I was going for...but also I know my writing style isn't for everybody so the feedback I get I take, but I also don't try to cater to too much to the criticism of my lines because that would take away the uniqueness of each person battling shit would get stale fast as hell. I think in the past a lot of votes used to be done before the battle started, don't really see that going on anymore so that's refreshing.

[Baron Mynd]

I got a question for you bro generally curious. How does Good Year, tread lightly, shredded, and reTIRE not equal a concept in your book? Was meaning to ask you that but was waiting for the battle to be closed

It was certainly a concept, just not a good one

[Axe.]

It was certainly a concept, just not a good one

??? You in the league?

[Lay Doubt.]

It was certainly a concept, just not a good one

Respect my new buddy Axe murderer.

[R A O]

We rep Firestone and hankook round ere.

[bare ryu]

gonna vote on more battles throughout the day, trying to go by the order they opened

[Blas]

gonna vote on more battles throughout the day, trying to go by the order they opened

whats ur alias, pm me it i'll keep a secret dont worry

[John Noir]

@Zunto good fucking shit my nigga, mad battles going on week 1. Can’t sign up right now I’m making music in studio 247 locked in.

[Zunto]

Good shit bro lmk when you notice we’re in week 2

[Exalted.]

gonna vote on more battles throughout the day, trying to go by the order they opened

Were you in that tag tourney on nc w/ answer vs me/res?

[$pitacular]

Good shit bro lmk when you notice we’re in week 2

LOL

[Unfukwitable]

Dropping votes today once I get free time