WK3: Exalted vs Desmond Hume (Open 4 votes)

[Bag Mandela]

WK3

Punches due: Tuesday 2nd September

Voting ends: Friday 5th September

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@Exalted. @Desmond Hume

[Exalted.]

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[Desmond Hume]

Word

[Desmond Hume]

i swear i feel like Holyfield... Ex boxer with an ear to the ground for flips quips & mics wit the worst rhymes....
And real deal? - your shit belonged on run of the mills lane and DQ'd when Spree caught you bitin the first time

[Exalted.]

Bag sold the order.. put ur fate in my hands & a soul to torture
The last date w/ Des Tinny sounds like it'll be frequencies picked up on ghost recorders

[Lady Poet]

DH isn't bad had a nice ending
Exaited ending creative compare to DH
vote Exaited

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DH isn't bad had a nice ending
Exaited ending creative compare to DH
vote Exaited

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DH isn't bad had a nice ending
Exaited ending creative compare to DH
vote Exaited

[MV]

I have to ask . Flips, quips and mics? Like Mick or Mc? Someone confirm this is a British ting. your punch was a personal but I didn’t see any angles or wps. It was a very straight forward jab. Exalted was pretty dope here. The concept was a bit of a reach but the payoff for letting that slide was worth it. Good stuff
V/exalted

[B0Z0]

V/ Exalted.

Desmound Hume.
I really like the Boxing concept, although I feel the execution was lacking - I think you messed up with the Flips, quips & mic part. This is a Mike Tyson reference, setting up the punch quite well if rewritten. Also, the Mills Lane part is subtle but doesn't really fit. Again, I think it could be great if rewritten and more obvious that he was the Ref who DQ'd Mike Tyson in the Holyfield fight. The personal was decent; the setup let you down and meant this didn't really land. Shame.

Exalted
I like the concept of this and a cleaner punch overall.

[Blas]

ok personal from hume with not much of a flip but it's ok, exalted i liked the wp and think it was cool

v/exalted

[plethora]

I've been around for a minute & seen many holyfield/Tyson biting references so hurts your punchline. Exalted had a bar that read nicely

V/ Exalted

[Slayerr.]

Yeah I think I may have missed something in des bar either that or he’s missed his haymaker, personal was strong if true and I’m hurt ex is a biter because I’ve always rated his stuff, ex came nice, I’ve seen better from him mind but enough for the w
V/ex