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Thread: "From Single Cell To Living Hell"

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    BRB, Jumping Ship Baron Mynd's Avatar
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    "From Single Cell To Living Hell"


    Whether you argue religion conceived us the world that we have
    or particle fission as heat and inertia react.
    The earth was a mass of violent components
    its world uninhabitable by life as we know it.
    Ions and protons were fast to generate
    a seismic commotion of atmospheric change.
    The planetary state reached an extraordinary level
    as its recalescent rage meant no water could settle.
    The core drawing in metals the planet would need,
    but volcanic storms were essential as gas was released.
    A gradual easing of temperature meant
    rainfall began to increase in torrential descent.
    Millennia’s spent as beads then broke from the skies
    until the weather relented, leaving ocean’s behind.
    These components combined and a new cycle dawned
    as we reached a moment in time where life was formed.
    Tiny spores of algae hold bold significance -
    They provide our orb oxygen through photosynthesis.
    A host of primitive flora expand
    on their own initiative from water to land.
    Early forms of a cyanobacteria constantly merging
    in a primordial tapestry of symbiotic convergence.
    With oxygen, Earth became more tenantable still
    but lots of our early ancestors would be killed.
    It lead up to us building on the features that we had
    with the necessary skills life needed to adapt.
    From seas onto the land, cartilage tissue to bone,
    our feet becoming hands as we continued to grow.
    Amphibians honing flight as natural selection endeavoured
    with the proto-wings that we owned developing feathers.
    To weather the elements, fur replaced some scales,
    our genetic antecedents balanced weight on tails.
    Bipedal traits prevail, we rise up to stand,
    as this change unveils an untying of hands.
    Our reach rightly expands, along with the girth of our legs,
    the arrival of mammals sees births without eggs.
    Nature and nurture commence in perfect accord
    simians turn into ‘men’ in our earliest form.
    Learning to talk helps communication increase
    as words replace drawings, we’re able to read.
    The attainment of speech was a masterful step
    in our brains engineering no other animals met.
    With language invented through use of our brains
    man had ascended the evolutionary chain.
    Us humans created; shaping in time
    tools of the trade to aid in our lives.
    These basic designs would lead to the usage
    of our daily devices, touchscreens and computers.
    Our need for ‘improvement’ defied thermodynamics,
    leaving the blueprint that Earth had established.
    Now we’re usurping the planet of its natural resources
    preserving our habitats not a matter of importance.
    But what happens when it’s all been brought up from the ground
    the vast sums are exhausted and a shortage is pronounced?
    We can’t afford to live without it by the time this occurs
    a nuclear war is what’s announced and we fight for reserves.
    As missiles are returned, our own extinction’s a viable path,
    our survival on Earth threatened by the enquiring of man.
    We’re so blind to this fact that we can’t even see
    we’ve paradise in our grasp, yet it’s never seemed so far from our reach…


    WORD P e r f e c t !


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    Re: "From Single Cell To Living Hell"

    This was superb. If this is the same Baron that I remember, you haven't lost your touch. The rhyme scheme was on point through out the entire piece and your vocab was on par with what I expected. I thought it might get a bit boring and matter of fact toward the end, but you switched it up and left us with something to think about. I enjoyed the evolutionary tour, everything was accurate and progressed nicely. All together this was a dope read, and I'm glad to see you're still writing.

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    Re: "From Single Cell To Living Hell"

    wow this truly amazing. you incorporated billions of years of time into this piece flawlessly. vocab is amazing, flow is nice, and you basically wrapped the state were in, in a nice neat nutshell. sorry for the short feed not on a comp. 3 words... HoF

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    Re: "From Single Cell To Living Hell"

    @Sureal

    Check me out

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    Re: "From Single Cell To Living Hell"

    This is super fire.

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    Re: "From Single Cell To Living Hell"

    Was a good read, i can see why u bumped it. You either want to write like that again or currently setting up for your next drop.

    Try a template I learned in college

    Exposition, Persuade, Rising Action, Inform, Climax, Entertain, Falling Action

    Might be fun for you and m9ght be fun for the reader.

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    Re: "From Single Cell To Living Hell"

    You lost me over my head - I read the first paraph and already had to look up 2 words - I wanna read it though maybe at school tomorrow when my client is processing - I know it’s important

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