RAW

[Ragian]

I'm a stupid genius and a retarded scientist
I'm paradoxical like slowly getting faster
Fuck a master I'm a walking disaster never pressing backspace cuz I'm the ace and I don't need to own the place fuck a competition it's just me vs myself
And I don't need help you will let me down down shout out to Rise Against Like The Angel I think with my heart and feel with my brain
Yo thas so insane
Pause...
Tick tick tick what shall I say?
I'm so sick what the fuck rhymes with sick?
I don't want to say dick cuz thas gay
Never fucked a faggot but made one suck my dick
Oof
Yes I'm ashamed of it
I guess the truth hurts but hey no one's perfect
I stop and think... why do I need to stop and think again?
Hey YOU do you wanna be my friend?
Cuz right now I only got two friends
My Mom and my Pops
And fuck the cops they can't stop my rhymes
It's not a crime to rhyme like mine
Raw.

[XFVI]

Got to get that vocab up a level or two, bud. Try equalising the length of your bars, it'll make them easier to read. You had some pretty good internals in this though. Multi-syllable rhymes help the flow of the piece as well.

Keep perfecting.

[Lady Poet]

This isn't bad
Well written
Rhyming Scheme