PAK N. HEAT vs Nitemarre

[Nitemarre]

5 line/ 10 bars you know all dat.............

No hate, crew, d/r............................

Spit in the next 25 min after you check in...........

Lez go dawg...............

VOTERS DONT SLEEP, YOU COULD LEARN

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[Nitemarre]

"X" this cat out.....yo....check

Yo Bitch I Flips Clips Quick-I Fuckin 'Hit' Like 'Major Leagers'||
Ya Style is Meeger, Busta 'Picaso' 'Rearange Yer Features'||
Call ME Yo Teacher, Or Da 'Track Coach', Come N 'Get Ran'||
Make U A Patient Fa 'Amputation' Look Like A 'Veggie Tanned'||*
I'm Sendin 'Heat' To Yo 'Bandana' Like 'Mexicans In Da Field'||
It's Real, It Melts A Hole Through ya Pectorial Sheild||*
Spreadin Section 'Shots At Ya Grill' Like A 'Sexual Thrill'||
'Blastin Cavities' Like A 'Dentist Wit 9millimeta' Drills||
I Gotcho Shook Like Im Federal-Come-Get-'Beat'-Like 'Band Drums'||
I'll 'Knock Ya Block Off' Like 'Kids N Legos Havin' Temper Tanrums'||

c'mo boi!!!

*gein green
*chest

For More Of Nitemarres Battles
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=90916

[KeMy$t]

nice spit can't wait to read pak n heat but ya hit this up w/ a vote i will be back to vote when he spits

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90745

[Nitemarre]

yo PAK N.........

Dont tell me you aint gon' battle just cuz a what -Brixton- shited out..........

I aint neva hate on no body............

And It's not like Im one of the newbies, playin around n shit........

So If you aint gon spit............thats filthy, ugh

[.::Narcotics::.]

^^Uve elevated from our last battle..but u still guna gt koed like last time kid..

MAke sure u understand the personals before voting



Ya nitemares make ya pee ya bed.Wut makes u think ya punches been felt//
MY Heats stomache turning.So i no history is due to repeat its self//
Leave my spits defeatin ya help to the fullest cuz ya raps r mediocore//
Got ya sweatin bullets.Cuz beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker//
Try an spit a punch i havent said before, This cat got nine lives//
An im takin then all wit metaphors that are hard to find//
Like ya rap history, u dont belong in the game so quit rap//
Im euqipped wit gats,chance of u bein dope is like Micheal jackson actin black//
Why do get stuck wit average Cats that dont belong in this rap game//
U spits cudnt hit right if u switched a lane, ya spits are lame//
Plus its fact if u wanna spit heat u better bruch up fast bitch//
Ya spit longer bars to fit more played metas an disses in//

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HMm i came weak...i no ..but its shud be a good battle
different styles
an u had a bunch of gay metas ..No personals

Prewrite/????

uppin for honest votes................

[SmokaJoka]

aight...this was a close battle...Nitemarre had some dope wordplay...but it was mostly played...without a doubt it was good...but i've seen it feel me....Pak had some good personals...and punches....but not much wordplay...but what wordplay he did use was pretty dope....

From PAK N. HEAT:
Cuz beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker

that was pretty dope...lol....never seen it before honestly...

here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Nite
Vocab - Nite
Wordplay - Nite (because u had more)
Punches - Pak
Creativity - Pak
Complexity - Tie
Personals - Pak
RhymeScheme - Pak (personals is what does it)
Overall - this is a pretty hard battle to choose from honestly....but i think Pak got it only because he had more ORIGINAL punches...Nitemarre...without a doubt u came good....but ur wordplay was kinda weak....nice battle from the both of u though....good read....no hate....just a vote...

peace
4:20

[KeMy$t]

yo really hard battle to vote on cuz both were completely different.
Pak/game had more punches, good meta, and personals
Nite had better multi's and vocab and little bit better wordplay
Both came decent in this i dont know man it all depends on what u want to hear and personally i like punches and personals so i have to give this to Pak cuz punches and personals are what freestyle battles are all about so vote goes to pak and thanx both of u for the votes but pak u forgot to poll vote so here is the link so i can get my win
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90745

[mista raedar]

Multis - Nite
Vocab - pak
Wordplay - Nite
Punches - Pak
Creativity - nite
Complexity - Tie
Personals - Pak
RhymeScheme - Pak
Overall - overall...pak barely got it by the skin on his ass..that michael jackson line qwas sicc

[Yaz]

ok nite always hates on the people he battes with and trys to kill them in other battles but ima keep this shit honest iight

flow-nite
punchs-pak aka tech(nite make your shit to him not to a random person)
structur-nite
begginin-tech
end-tech(nite like i sed strait to him, not to some random bitch)

my vote goin to tech

and props to da new name cuz

Keep it real cuz
Peace (\1/)

[Emerge]

Originally posted by SmokaJoka666
aight...this was a close battle
BREAKDOWN
Multis - Nite
Vocab - Nite
Wordplay - Nite (because u had more)
Punches - Pak
Creativity - Pak
Complexity - Tie
Personals - Pak
RhymeScheme - Pak (personals is what does it)
Overall - this is a pretty hard battle to choose from honestly

/\ yeah close battle though i disagree with the others in that you won
opener-tie
closer-nite because pak's says something about long bars though his bars were longer in this battle...plus it was weak
punches-pak...though it was close
personals-pak...good ones
wordplay-nite
creativity-pak
vocab-nite
sustainment-nite overall more consistent
overal-nite but just barely like really really just barely

[.::Narcotics::.]

uppin
on sum more honest voters............................................ ...
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[-uski-]

Flow-Nite
Multies-Nite
Structur-Nite
Punchs-PAK
Personals-Nite
Volcab-PAK
Opener-Nite
Finisher-PAK
Wordplay-PAK
Enjoyment-both
Overall-Nite

No hate PAK but i thought Nite Verse was better but it was close real close aiight Peace (v)

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