The beat is smooth as fuck with the candles in the video super relaxing. You did ok riding the beat, but you should have made this into a proper song the arrangement is fucked. What is this a chorus that plays twice with a few bars in between? The listener is waiting for you to start rapping and you never do lol.
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lol thanks
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Last edited by Toxic AF; January 11th, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Cool beat. The mix on this clean. You got a nice confident flow/delivery and the lyrics are cool. Overall, a pretty solid track.
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“I just fucked my therapist” got me laughing hahaha..this shit was dope though. Beat choice fit the vibe of the vocals for sure. Flow was suuuuper smooth. Bars go off. David guetta bar was cool. I was vibing the whole way threw this one honestly. Can’t complain about a damn thing! Too bad you don’t post here more often and drop more tracks honestly cause you’re on point with it. Definitely drop some more on here if you’re still around to see these comments!!!
Much love
only things that we have lol
ugly sweater wtf haha
fucked my therapist
lmao definitely thought you were going to come in on some sacrificing virgin type of poetry when the beat first dropped but I liked the approach you took