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[RapidFire]

replied to set-ignorance, and angellicalR...+ a few more that I can't remember off the dome...I'll put em up in a minute...

I'm bored...so I felt like doin a quick keystyle...lemme know what u think...the topic is just thinkin of the funniest/siccest shit possible

I make more noise than R Kelly in a room full of 14 year old boys//
my rapskills is harder than tryna get the raspy out of lil jon's voice//
I got kat's shakin like sex toys, when I'm rippin n slittin the wrists of these bitches//
fidget when I'm fuckin a midget, pick up the misfit by the bitches armpits n open the clit n stick my dick in it!//
no wonder man, kids don't understand the siccness in my technique//
when u homo's see guys u squirtin white liquid like bitches that breastfeed//
I put on the best scene, like 2 lesbians on stage humpin each other to death G//
raps so hot I could cover em in dog shit and vomit and ya bitch would still find em sexy!//
like sleepy little children you'll find yaself "kid-napped" wake up, get ya shit clapped//
look in the mirror see that ya face is red from the bitchslaps//
u kid's wack, think u got balls, wind up with a slit-sack//
for fuckin with a rapper tighter than a virgins clit-crack//
I'm conversatin with a female that never heard-of-you-while//
I insert my penis in ya girlfriends VERTICLE SMILE!!!!!

lmao....just some off the head kinda shit....

peace

[.:alliK:.]

hahahahahahaha lol
funniest verse i've ever seen
but elevate your flow a lil!
7/10
keep droppin, you have potentials

[.:alliK:.]

return tha favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89596

[noncentz]

this was helleraious but elivate structure

[MonStar]

yea that was some funny shit...flow was pretty good, structure could have been better....vocab was good....content was good and made me laugh....overall it was a nice drop....just work on your structure some and you should be set....

oh yea if you get a chance could you check out my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89818

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[Ken Dawg]

Your length is a little long..you need to give better hits with shorter ryhmes..keep up the good work..peace

[RapidFire]

^ yea i feel u man that verse wasn't serious at all..I rewrote most of it n turned it into a recorded track today....the flow was off cuz it was written without a beat in like 7 minutes...just a quick key basically...but thanx for the props on the humor n shit...that's basically what I wrote it for was the jokes..I'll hit up ya'lls shit too

peace