Uh. Ok. I think Barcotic's wordplay is very, very forced. I didn't love Blue Bayou's bar. In fact, I really liked Barctotic's bar when I first read it. But when I went back through the bars a second time, I realized how forced he wordplay is.
That, for me, is enough for me to vote Blue Bayou.
like i said
lmao
u watching these leafs @Blue Bayou ? ima be there vs philly this sat.
I'm pretty happy my vote got cleaned so I can actually vote on this.
Blue --
Your bar was cool. But that's it. Bar Illa is a cool wordplay. But I don't love the way you word the punch.
And it's just kind of out of nowhere, considering the setup. There's just a random dick.
This isn't that fire.
Barcotic --
I read your bar and I was like shit, that's fire. But something bothered me.
I read it a second and a third time. And I realized it was the wordplay that bothered me.
Normally, I do not care about slant wordplays THAT MUCH. However, if you actually read the wordplay as written, you have to assume it's a cue stick. If you say it out loud, it doesn't work.
If the wordplay doesn't work, then my favorite part of your bar goes away. And... in that case... I prefer Blue Bayou's bar.
This is what I assumed you guys had figured out, from my first vote.
Sorry that I didn't write you a thesis on it. But here you go.
Jesus fucking christ...
It's like everything I post turns into two pages of all chat in whatever league I post it in.
I made my points in the new vote. You can take the vote or not.
@Barcotic / @Kill Spree - It's obvious you guys hate me. That's cool. I apologize for trying to make my voting an interesting experience. It's one goddamn bar. There's not much to say. (But you can read my revote if you want to know what I think.)
@Blue Bayou -- You wrote the bar that you wrote. I'm not going to write my thesis on it.
Good luck boys. I'm ditching this chat for the week.
i dont hate u
ur annoying but i dont hate
ur a dumb troll
&& u drop troll trash
im pretty sure ur "the great father" or w/e his name was
I'm literally no one else you've ever said I am.
What I am is so confused by who is upset with me where that I posted my vote in this thread, instead of the actual battle.
@Kill Spree this was an accident. Any way you could delete it for me? It's just a few posts earlier. I made a more in depth vote in the main thread.
Apologize for the inconvenience.
tbh iont even kno how ppl are supposed to get thru a paragraph of urs w/o scratching their head
do they actually ghost this place tho is the real q.