10
@
Meth
seal the coffin
Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
0: Scheme - Can't give you the point with that end rhyme if I'm not giving it to the other dude.
0: Concept - This is pretty weak tbh. Even the concept itself. It's just a stating the obvious punch. I tried reading five every way I could but I don't see anything super clever here.
0: Wordplay - None
1 Execution - I really didn't love this bar. There was no twist. It was just like yeah, a hurricane happened. You could say this after any hurricane, to any battler and it wasn't set up to be that enjoyable on it's own.
1: Total bar score - This bar got hit really hard by the rating system. I don't know if it's a 1 but it def isn't a great bar. I'll find some way to sneak a point back to you somewhere else in this verse.
Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
1: Scheme - Here is your gimme point.
0: Concept - I mean, I literally don't know Why bible and melon are Capitalized. I even googled bible, melon and ellen to see if I was missing something. I do not understand this bar and I'm saying that right to you. If it carries some really deep weight, I don't see it.
0: Wordplay -
1: Execution - Man. Fuck. I have to give you a point because of the rhyme scheme but I honestly found nothing here to enjoy.
2: Total bar score
I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
0: Scheme - Idk man.
1: Concept - Oh look. It's the obligatory sports bar. This does nothing clever except to point to a player who retired. Even hyenas v coyotes wasn't wrapped in
0: Wordplay -
1: Execution - This was so fucking lazy. I just feel really guilty giving you a 1 point bar again...
2: Total bar score
Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
0: Scheme - End rhymes were chunky. Flow sucked and the inners were choppy.
2: Concept - Dude. Baby what you reading is sick. Ok. So I get to give you good points here.
0: Wordplay -
1: Execution - You did literally the bare minimum you could, with a dope concept. Setup does nothing for the punch. The wording of the punchline sucks. This was a big bar concept executed in a small bar way
3: Total bar score
Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
0: Scheme -
0: Concept -
0: Wordplay -
0: Execution -
0: Total bar score - This was the laziest fucking bar I've ever read. Don't fucking disrespect my time like this.