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Great job picking up on the typo. Congratulations, "Krucial".
Not all short bar can be transferred over a beat. No.
Delivery and execution means everything - whether audio or text, on a beat or off a beat. Over wording or complicating concepts will hinder the impact.
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If people dislike you, they will find any reason to vote against you. That is how it has always been. Don't compare me to anyone. I vote for the better bar regardless of who you are. I also try and leave as much constructive critique as possible, sometimes. I find it - no one takes advice and continues writing garbage to which lately - I have given up on trying to help. Take it for what it's worth and do as you please. You have potential and I see that which is why I'm trying to leave you CONSTRUCTIVE feedback. I will NOT beat around the bush and tell you like it is. If your bar is ass, I will say it's ass. If it's fire, I will say it's fire. It's black and white with me.
Also, please do not compare LIVE BATTLE RAPPING TO RAPBATTLES text battles. 2 different worlds. It's like Football and Soccer, Hockey and Lacrosse, Wrestling and MMA, Boxing and kickboxing... etc... You get my point.