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Thread: 32 and im ballin...

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    La Costa Nostra Late Bloom's Avatar
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    32 and im ballin...

    Om right Some shit huh
    I look at this place now like it was duh
    Im not bothered im just writing for this shit if you get me
    But didnt see she wasnt a tree cause trip the real g
    Gonna flip ya aint no mountain to climb
    Its not like that yo you spitting trash on the mic
    Nah aint like that rhymes got stacks
    Land me something u aint even equipped with a jab
    U so whack homie i aint like it cause its too easy
    Okay u stupid fuck nobody wants to hear u or any of shitty ass cds
    U so gay man go rap like a fiend trying to jump in this om piece
    I was like you a french fry he was like nah shes from greece
    This kid couldnt come up with a title
    Im like reading the bible gotta keep them challengers stifled
    Left em leaning like the tower in france kid so goddam eiffel
    Fuck it in a while crocodile you whack like beargrylls gone wild
    Yo quoting battles got some lines even used to jump in cyphers
    It had to be told it wasnt a fuck up its just we keep babies in diapers
    I guess u feel me better keep her tooshy pampered
    Come on kid u such a child right dont expect me to believe this gangster
    I got u hooked like cancer light me up u cant evem dwell on my pastures
    U so whack u dont get it
    This cat right here right is going look at me like what the fuck if u dont get it
    Im not crazy man that dude right hmm looked like a good battle fuck
    Guess i aint make the line up though guess the other cat right had better looks...



    Right...
    a labyrinth of power.....

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    MAD! A Disciple's Avatar
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    Re: 32 and im ballin...

    You’re quirky disses were really good... maybe a strength you can excel at and maybe a trade mark. Good read but some reduntants to your other pieces, maybe just a glitch of mine I hate to twice, ya know... but if you pay attention even the great greats repeat sometimes too. Just an intermediate beginner myself so just an opinion. I think you’re good but I also think you have capacity to do way better on writtens... how does it sound?

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    La Costa Nostra Late Bloom's Avatar
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    Re: 32 and im ballin...

    thanks nah this hasnt gone on a beat yet...
    a labyrinth of power.....

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    Re: 32 and im ballin...

    ya getting better
    more verses like this

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