*Copy~Righted*
Born To Kill
He called me out specifically...
So, I'm answering this with a big fat yawn...Lets do this Man.....Set up the battle cus i aint know how to....So i'll spit 1st.....20 line max....and lets make this official...U the one thats gonna get killed,'Born-to-kill'......U have to spit the max, mins after i do......aight?.....G-Luck.....Cus u gonna need it....1
Let's see if he can wake me up.
Good luck to ya...
Peace
Picks up mic.....*yawns*.....Lectures Born-to-kill......
Me beating this kid is 'repetitive'......Im a newbie But im telling-u-this,Im a 'veteren' with 'scriptz'//
And your wins are in 'negative' balance....Just like ur 'credit-is'//
Ya "stubborn ass", put a "slug to ya dome", see...he does have an "OPEN~MIND//
I SPOKE~IN~TIME, leave ya ass "speechless" like i was 'CHOKIN~MIMES'//
Ced spits GORE~ISH, lemme take your foot out your Ass, I know you got ISH~SHOES//(issues)
no one's gonna MISS~YOU, My DISS~DUDE, will RIP~THROUGH, like ACID~TO~TISSUES!!!//
I couldnt feel ya lines if i was feelin on 'Brail-Dialectz'//
Sorry Dawg? you aint 'Servin-The-Beef' like vegetarian 'Buffet's'//
Blah.....You're Only 'Coming Off The Dome' Cuz My Tools~Are~Scalpin~Ya//
Dude Thought He Was Thug Until I Blew~The~'Calibre' And Left 'X Alone' Like The 'Rules~Of~Algebra//
Your rhymes coudent impress if they were the worlds longest nails.....and they coudent smell if they were a Rose//
NO joke man......U couldnt flow if u were the nasel congestion coming down my 'Nose'//
Now i know i have a big chance of Winning~this.....The truth~is//
Ive seen ur past battles and the way your style takes a dive....You should join the 'OLYMPICS!!!!!'//
Your turn....No more than 15 lines...1
Him...
Birthday: March 24, 1988
Age: 15
Crew: None
Biography: Young and test~less
Location: Hidden
Interests: none
Occupation: None
So...
Oh my god, he's young and test~less, this kid's a soap opera fan...
How pussy is that? He don't know. That's why he failed my exam.
Do more than test ya, stress ya...have ya lookin for Cliff Notes...
Ya afraid and needin aid with ya Rappin for Dummies quotes.
Ya spit CAPS cuz it's fact, ya shit wouldn't get seen otherwise...
Location: Hidden, fuckin lost...just like the talent ya name implies.
About ya name, fake with game, like anyone would bite off you...
We're dawgs but don't eat shit, despite the fact that you do.
Cuz that would be props, and ya never had a single one...
I coulda no-showed this battle and ya'd still get outdone.
But I didn't, won't act like ya job, kid, my force exists...
So when ya get lonely, hit Closed Battles, you and ya loss can reminisce.
..........................OUR BATTLE IS SET............................................... .................................................. .....GET READY.................
vote=b2k...why?
first off other kid was all over the place
with a structure like that where do you find a flow?
b2k owned punches,personals and metas
other kid used good vocab and creativity but jus dint hit
so ma vote goes to b2k
MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THE FIRST BATTLE IN MA SIG....PZ
1st Uppin...
Peep this please.
Toss votes.
I implore you.
Thanks for tha honesty.
Peace
b2k got in every subject
punches-B2k
flow-B2k
disses-.......damn this is hard...lol..B2k
effort-B2k
Overall:B2k...yo u killed that B2k return da honest votes on tha battles in my sig they gettin slept on thanx yo.....
ok this was simple enuff
b2k easily
copy came very newbish with the "~" and the caps, thats shows
that your are forcing your punches, we see'um dawg,no need for that, besides most of your punches were played anyway
b2k came pretty nice...consistent, wit personals, flow and punches
matter fact this line killt'em
Ya spit CAPS cuz it's fact, ya shit wouldn't get seen otherwise...
Location: Hidden, fuckin lost...just like the talent ya name implies.
best line in the whole battle
anyway...
poll vote =born to kill
out dis biatch
oh yea heres my likn guys please hit this up when you get a chance
thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89553
Uppin for votes...
Let's get this one voted on, please...
Much appreciated.
And...
Peace
obviously that cat wuz sick of getting beat over in scriptz so he wanted to get beat here too. Then he takes on B2K cause he has an illusion of Grandure with that Pre-Write script he came over here with. My vote is BTK
Copy Righted- You Have Good Potential... Not A Bad Spit At All... But Your Structure Is Everywhere Causing Dry Flow... Punches Were Hard But Seemed To Weaken Before It Hit
Born To Kill- More Metas And Less Fillers Could Help... But You Had The Overall Nicer Verse And Harder Hitting Punches
Vote- Born To Kill
Sorry Born, love ya style & you always consistant, but this cat is being robbed... that was one of the tightest verses I have read on the site
copy - you murdered this one, straight up, mayne keep it up you could be one of the best
flow, wordplay, punches all off the hook
vote = copy
no beef born, honest opinion
We're all entitled to our opinions, my man...
No beef...
I'm kinda chuckling over here...
But no beef.
Let's finish this, please.
Peace
Uppin.................................. for tha finisher.......................................... ..........
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