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both verses due 20 min. after your check in
dominator
mr.iceman06
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88606
CAn u al close that for me
ILL BE BACK TO VOTE WHEN U ALL DROP PC
::Begin @ 5:30::
Mr ice, tryna Skittle with the elite? Show me your best trick and ill give ya a treat /
Im'a leave you wet and runny like digested chinese food turned to excrete // *
Cuz as soon as I grab the mic I be leavin all the voters with snickers /
Your overplayed lyrics have been posted more than politicians campaign stickers //
Cuz iceman if I built you a stool, you still couldn't stand at my level /
And dawg im gonna burn your whole verse like im the god damn devil //
Dawg whats your crew man, cuz overthrowing a government well thats a revolution/
It must be because you are always overthrown because this is your execution //
The only time you will ever have a real spit is when your in your room jerking /
So you just better go update your dig because [i]youre[/] the latest merking // **
* HaHa.... Chinese food gives ya the shits
** He has his latest merking in there.... haha.... probably isnt updated much
~ HaHa, and I had skittle and snickers in my punches lol and trick/treat in the first line, tought itd fit because last night was Halloween.
::End at 5:46::
aight heres my verse
this dude gets “thanks” for “giving” head once a year..that shit is annual...
he beat off 8 times in 1 day...now he calls himself the king of manual...
dominator is like a retard wit no hands...hes incapable of throwin punches...
damn right he dominates...he fucks faggots in bunches......
dominator says he has all kinds of flow cuz he collects piss in mens urinals...
U HERB<--------look i just hit that bitch wit a personal....
u dyslexic faggot quit tryin to use big words that can barley come out ya mouth...
dominator is always on his knees suckin dick...now he thinks hes from the dirty south...
u claim to be an ill textee....thats hard to believe considering u can hardly read....
like a baby born allergic to water.........you never had a chance to succeed...
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oops my last line is supposed to say
[update your sig]
not dig....
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uppin(1)
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drop a honest vote please
yo
close battle
but mr ice man won that
opening- mr ice man (by alittle)
flow- dominator
punches-mr ice man
ending(mr ice man by alittle)
haha funny shit.... dude.... noone judges opening and ending as the main criteria... ITS THE WHOLE VERSE..... what about wordplay and creativity? haha herb
Uppin for people who know how to judge a battle (1)
ight batttle i think mr iceman got this wit consistancy that otha nigga was off and on wit disses
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Nice Battle
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wordplay-Dom
flow-iceman
creativity-dom
punchs-iceman
personal-iceman
icemans line U HERB<---look i just got u wit a personal (LOL)
close but ice edged this one out
HIT THIS LINK UP PLEASE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88962
dude.... how is that a good line......
You cant put a -------------> in the middle of a verse
that is shit...... that fucks w/ flow, it isnt proper style, and its just plain wack, if you cant come up with 10 lines worth of punches you deserve the loss.....
and that line wasnt even funny....
Explain your votes more...
Uppin
Flow-mr.iceman
Personals-mr.iceman
Metas-tie
Vocab-dominator
Structure-dominator
Finisher-iceman
Pretty good battle, icman came harder tho...Dom is good but needs a lil more of everything.
DUDE..... WHERE IS THERE ONE PERSONAL IN THAT VERSE? NOT HATIN I JUST DONT SEE ONE?
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