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checkininiininin ity in
let me go smoke ill be back
1
checki in bitch
an spit
AusRotten
PAK N. HEAT
10-15 lines max
'30 mintes to drop
pc
checkininiininin ity in
let me go smoke ill be back
1
checki in bitch
an spit
ight w/e.... heres ma check in... i will have me shyt up and ready to ur ass........ BITCH........................................
"Aus" here be "pak n heat" under his belt for a win//
i bomb "da illest ville"*, and make way wit ur corpse again//* he says he from da illest ville.
pre-written ur shyt just to "pak" a quick victory//
i "whip" this kid, and he nickname me "hickory"*//**they whip people with hickory sticks.
link ur "fist" to ur "mouth", so u can get a "punch spitten"//
ur shyt is wack so "edit" ur post, think bout it, then "written"//
Dont fuckin think ur badass, or that u hard as "nails"//
if so then call me "MC HAMMER" cause i ram ur shyt till it de rails//
to end this, i conseal "heats" life in "flames" like a weapon//
douse his faggit ass, then send him 6 feet deep he be reppin....
blah......
aus...... outie
aite...
YA newb.i no the truth i merk herbs,l creatin danger//
ill switch my nine wit rhymes an put ten in da chamber//
AUs you can call me the "fire-starter" how i defeat this dead-beat//
Leave ya red-meat, cuz im spittin-harder,flames wit my lyrikal-heat//
I left ya corpse in a hacthet near ya casket, Buried Beneath the floor//
Im blastin verbal vinicular man slaughters,try an a say a punch i havent said be4//
YA net cee record is FAlse homie, i no your a phony cuz your weak an wak//
PLus it hasnt occured to u that ill beat u before the weekend pasts//
My stragegery is savagry as im shottin holow tips at ya team//
YA games rotten.leavin ya brains poppin, wit da infar red beam//
my spits come viscious cuz ill a menace at this rap game//
Ill tear u apart at da stiches winning at the end of this sentence cuz u cant rap mayne//
fuk off bitch
wutvea i came weak
lol...... u try to start beef and i dont even fuckin know u homie....... plus... nvm..... i aint sawin shyt.... let the votes come in......
^^LOL
ok
let da votes begin let em speak for em selfssssssssssssssssss
nugga
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lololololol ya i like what pak said/.....let the votes speak............................................. ..................................
ok this was a good battle for 2 newbs..
Punches= PAK
Flow= Pak
Stucture= Pak
Creativity= Pak
Personals= None
Overall= PAK N. Heat
keep the good shit up mayne..Pz
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i didnt have to read pak's whole verse to kno he got this...
nice verse..
"YA newb.i no the truth i merk herbs,l creatin danger//
ill switch my nine wit rhymes an put ten in da chamber//"
^^ill
altho pak u kinda fell off towards the end.. no hate good verse
aus it was a iight verse.. keep elevating ..
hit this w/ a honest vote plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88602
..Focused...
opener-good shit Pak N Heat
closer-tie
punches-Pak
best line status-Pak...chamber
enjoyment-Pak
originality-Pak
personals-think i saw Pak hit one
just cuz dude took all the categories doesnt mean this was a blowout....good shit by both
vote-Pak
ight its kewl...... nice verse pak n heat...... no hate or anything ma man....... nice job... peace out...
fosho uppin for my first win
thanks man
good battle
it was tite.............................................. .....................holla
Originally posted by PAK N. HEAT
fosho uppin for my first win
thanks man
good battle
it was tite.............................................. .....................holla
Begginin:pak
Finish:aus
Punchs:pak
Volcab:pak
Structur:pak
Wordplay:pak
Over All:pak
this was a tight battle on paks behalf, but aus has some goos shit, just pak's better
Yo check this battle and u post who u think one and shit.
Yaz vs Mc-UsKi
ight thx for da opinion.... ma man....... and nice job heat..........,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.............. ................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,...............................
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