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[K.I.D.]

i dont need one mic, I don't even need a beat,
my lyrics make a quadrapalegic stand on his feet,
it could be be 20 below my flames still heat,
and tell the devil take a hike bitch your in my fuckin seat,
im a city born nigga, and a killa to da heart,
baseball bats strapped to backs for fights start,
most rappers are like work their bests the last part,
but when i spark turn daylight to ass dark,
ill take any emcee from the vets to the rooks,
but win or lose they gon put me in the history books,
cause im a fearless nigga most spots already been took,
you best believe im bout to leave the whole forum shook,
so holla at him.

[Blaze 1]

holla that shit was flame cuz 10/10

[Rob D]

this was alright,
flow was on point,
structure and rhymescheme was good,
good vocab,
overall good drop just next time try and write to a topic,

peace

[sILLable]

yea this wasnt bad,flowed well,structure was aiight, good vocab, kinda short but still on point, just try and make a topical piece next time,keep elevatin.~1~