L.L.L. Week 5: Wordz ahgod.(0-0) Vs ODDWAYS(2-1) [WAG WINS

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

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- Extension Request -
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[Ryno]

Long time no see fucker.. If I drop 1st expect 14

[Wordz AhGod.]

Hi, going 10 regardless of what you drop.

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[Ryno]

12. Gl

ya bish a coke head, she'll fuck for it if she sees ya
cuz once the powder goes up, she'll get pumped harder than quicken loans arena
u robbed murda easy, now 1/2 the leagues barely a fan
nigga that dub was such a gag, it came w/ skee masks n a list of demands
u'll get dumped easy, make a noise them bullets flyin
dawg i'll let the mack spit 5 over ur mouth like i was tryin keep you quiet
faggot ur time is up, its always trouble if the shank'll hit
i'll get hype n shove 3 down ur side like russell westbrook off the swish

Yea WAG won a season...

He beat a good number of niggas too, tho I believe.

Like 1.

Rest were Fresh, smog... Fresh, Smog, Fresh, Letterman then Smog and Fresh.

those matches were fucked, now u'll get knocked off ya rocker
dawg u butchered enough highlights that season to shame Sinister 2 out the oscars
this arsenal'll keep ya singin, skills r beyond bonkers
trust me, that blade'll hit you w/ enough slow jams to sell out a patti labelle concert

[Wordz AhGod.]

uughhh, time to waste bars.. / :

u about to get pummeled, I advise u don't beef till ours is settled
listen, my fist'll make u napa lot.. while he keeps shouting at u about my power level.
turn son into an organ donor, merk em in front of his own people
pussy, the way u'll shed on my tools could land me a job at home depot.
champed a season, went to NC n rolled on a firing streak
so ur not just bottom tier fgt, ur the minimum requirement to beat.
the cannon'll send em' flyin, vid'll hit worldstar each quarter
the way kids'll leak ur fall out could boost that games pre-orders.

Loss'll be mad wicked, kid I hope ur doctors in town
Cuz this ailment for u...n it comes w/ a hospital gown

That wordplay tho.. fire!! it must have spelt Lett's doom
I'm ROFLing hard as fuck, n hoping that ailment u'll get better soon.
but I think I see improvement, ur style used to be rancid
so this battle is me paying my respect, n u leaving here empty handed.

[Smog]

Odd

Opener was cool
Gag was iight
Spit 5 over ur mouth man that's Shos Stee.. It was iight tho but those his trademark lines like the 5 behind his ear lije hogan hypin the crowd or 5 in his chest lije the pledge of alligence
Again same as above with the 3 down ur side..
Butchers highlights was ok
I like the closer

Wag

Opener was iight
She'd on tools was nice
Minimum requirement was cool
Leak was ok
Get better soon was nice
Closer was cool too


Iight I dig odds verse I felt he was consistent but the fact I'm seein Shos famous style barz used by u hurt it Imo I just expect those from sho they were iight tho.. Wag was pretty consistent as well n didn't look rusty I just felt he landed the better blows here n took this.. good read tho..


Vote wag

[Red Hood]

ya bish a coke head, she'll fuck for it if she sees ya
cuz once the powder goes up, she'll get pumped harder than quicken loans arena

vs

the cannon'll send em' flyin, vid'll hit worldstar each quarter
the way kids'll leak ur fall out could boost that games pre-orders

v- Odd in a contested battle. I wasn't feeling many punches from either of you two and it became a bar vs bar thing towards the end of it and I liked the quicken loans arena bar more than the fall out just due to wording and a harsher hit. neither came that great though, Wordz's concepts were horrible, while a lot of Odd's bars were horribly worded.

[alphadog]

ya bish a coke head, she'll fuck for it if she sees ya
cuz once the powder goes up, she'll get pumped harder than quicken loans arena

Vs

the cannon'll send em' flyin, vid'll hit worldstar each quarter
the way kids'll leak ur fall out could boost that games pre-orders.
u about to get pummeled, I advise u don't beef till ours is settled
listen, my fist'll make u napa lot.. while he keeps shouting at u about my power level

Close battle and a decent one also, both had good concepts n wording in most parts I got it at two quotes to one in wags favour

Mvgt wordz

[John Noir]

Odd: quicken loans wasn't very harsh.. Ski masks was dope. 5 over mouth was nice.. Russell Westbrook was dope.. Sinister 2 was butchered.. Could of been a lot better.. Patti labelled concert was dope...

Vs

Wordz: power level wasn't a diss... Home Depot was bad execution wise.. Minimum requirement was nice.. Fall out was meh.. Not really feeling it, too simple of word play.. Get better soon was stupid.. Empty handed wasn't very harsh..

Vote: I got odd winning easily.. Smh @ most of everyone else's votes.. Wordz could of made a lot of his execution more harsher with each line..


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[Notti]

ya bish a coke head, she'll fuck for it if she sees ya
cuz once the powder goes up, she'll get pumped harder than quicken loans arena

vs

the cannon'll send em' flyin, vid'll hit worldstar each quarter
the way kids'll leak ur fall out could boost that games pre-orders.
but I think I see improvement, ur style used to be rancid
so this battle is me paying my respect, n u leaving here empty handed

this battle wasn't that great imo. not because the ideas were bad, but because wording killed alot of the punches. rust is a muh fucka, and wording is tough. WAG closer wasn't that great but it was the deciding line after 1 quotable a piece.

v/ WAG

[yas jeshka yaaas]

Why am Lenox sway in the vote? He am gay for that

[OG Maestro]

ya bish a coke head, she'll fuck for it if she sees ya
cuz once the powder goes up, she'll get pumped harder than quicken loans arena
2.5/4
Not digging this a whole lot, but I see what you did with it & it was creative

u robbed murda easy, now 1/2 the leagues barely a fan
nigga that dub was such a gag, it came w/ skee masks n a list of demands
3/4
Decent personal & it was kinda funny lol

u'll get dumped easy, make a noise them bullets flyin
dawg i'll let the mack spit 5 over ur mouth like i was tryin keep you quiet
2.5/4
Another good concept but I don't like how it turned out

faggot ur time is up, its always trouble if the shank'll hit
i'll get hype n shove 3 down ur side like russell westbrook off the swish
3/4
Good jab

those matches were fucked, now u'll get knocked off ya rocker
dawg u butchered enough highlights that season to shame Sinister 2 out the oscars
2/4
This is pretty soft, for me. Honestly, I'm just not a movie person. So personally it didn't connect for me like it should have.

this arsenal'll keep ya singin, skills r beyond bonkers
trust me, that blade'll hit you w/ enough slow jams to sell out a patti labelle concert
3.5/4
Decent hit but it wasn't a haymaker. Closer still did well though.

vs.

u about to get pummeled, I advise u don't beef till ours is settled
listen, my fist'll make u napa lot.. while he keeps shouting at u about my power level.
3/4
Lmao, I like this. But it didn't pack that much of a punch beyond a jab.

turn son into an organ donor, merk em in front of his own people
pussy, the way u'll shed on my tools could land me a job at home depot.
2/4
It's alright, but this is played. "Shed" being used a slight bit differently than how it's usually been done.
Tool Shed/ Shed on my Tools.

champed a season, went to NC n rolled on a firing streak
so ur not just bottom tier fgt, ur the minimum requirement to beat.
2/4
Self-hype, not too much of a punch

the cannon'll send em' flyin, vid'll hit worldstar each quarter
the way kids'll leak ur fall out could boost that games pre-orders.
3/4
That wasn't too bad, good jab.

That wordplay tho.. fire!! it must have spelt Lett's doom
I'm ROFLing hard as fuck, n hoping that ailment u'll get better soon.
3/4
I like how you used it against him, that's pretty cool. But it wasn't a hay-maker of a hit.

but I think I see improvement, ur style used to be rancid
so this battle is me paying my respect, n u leaving here empty handed.
3/4
Decent hit as a closer.

_________________
Odd Ways: 16.5
Wordz AhGod: 16
MVGT: Odd Ways

At first I had WAG. Then my second read I had WAG. My third read, I gave it to Odd because he reached outside the box more & Wordz had this generic feel to some of his bars that made them good jabs at best, but not all were consistent & creative as Odd's.
And ultimately that's what broke the tie & got Odd in the lead. Thinking outside the box.

[Ill Finesse]

I don't know what criteria you use to vote, I'm just gonna say that the Wordz guy who went second had the better verse.
BUT, that both verses were below par, and most people have already touched on that
The reason I went with wordz over the other guy? Man, I cant even give a direct reason other than it was easier to read
I should be saying "because his verse was hittin here/there" but I'm not gonna lie.

Just an opinion, but its mine...

[A. Diction]

ya bish a coke head, she'll fuck for it if she sees ya 
cuz once the powder goes up, she'll get pumped harder than quicken loans arena
--- this is dope
u robbed murda easy, now 1/2 the leagues barely a fan
nigga that dub was such a gag, it came w/ skee masks n a list of demands
--- didn't like the word gag here but I know what u meant. This is cool
u'll get dumped easy, make a noise them bullets flyin
dawg i'll let the mack spit 5 over ur mouth like i was tryin keep you quiet
--- ehhh decent. Smooth wording.
faggot ur time is up, its always trouble if the shank'll hit
i'll get hype n shove 3 down ur side like russell westbrook off the swish 
--- too simple. And u just did a basketball reference. Still decent tho.
those matches were fucked, now u'll get knocked off ya rocker
dawg u butchered enough highlights that season to shame Sinister 2 out the oscars 
--- this is aite personal but I don't understand the sinister 2 out the Oscars as sinister 2 would a never been shown at the Oscars. Coulda gone with a better way to include it or picked a diff reference. Its aite tho. Maybe american horror story/Emmy's. Idk.
this arsenal'll keep ya singin, skills r beyond bonkers
trust me, that blade'll hit you w/ enough slow jams to sell out a patti labelle concert
--- lol this is cool.

Vs.

u about to get pummeled, I advise u don't beef till ours is settled
listen, my fist'll make u napa lot.. while he keeps shouting at u about my power level.
--- lol aite
turn son into an organ donor, merk em in front of his own people
pussy, the way u'll shed on my tools could land me a job at home depot.
--- aite
champed a season, went to NC n rolled on a firing streak
so ur not just bottom tier fgt, ur the minimum requirement to beat.
--- this is nice. Simple yet effective.
the cannon'll send em' flyin, vid'll hit worldstar each quarter
the way kids'll leak ur fall out could boost that games pre-orders.
--- this is nice.
That wordplay tho.. fire!! it must have spelt Lett's doom
I'm ROFLing hard as fuck, n hoping that ailment u'll get better soon.
--- nice personal flip
but I think I see improvement, ur style used to be rancid
so this battle is me paying my respect, n u leaving here empty handed.
--- this is nice. Simple yet effective yet again.

Overall: this is a helluva battle. Neither verse had any misses and a lot of nice bars. But wag had a smoother verse with better wording and executions. A couple of odd's punches suffered from the execution and he had two basketball punches which hurt his verse too IMO. This is a close battle and on the first read i thought odd got em but after breaking it down its obvious wordz verse was smoother and put together better.

V. Wordz ahFag

[Unfukwitable]

u robbed murda easy, now 1/2 the leagues barely a fan
nigga that dub was such a gag, it came w/ skee masks n a list of demands
faggot ur time is up, its always trouble if the shank'll hit
i'll get hype n shove 3 down ur side like russell westbrook off the swish
this arsenal'll keep ya singin, skills r beyond bonkers
trust me, that blade'll hit you w/ enough slow jams to sell out a patti labelle concert
-quicken loans was a dope concept but the wording let the bar down to me.


vs.

the cannon'll send em' flyin, vid'll hit worldstar each quarter
the way kids'll leak ur fall out could boost that games pre-orders.
That wordplay tho.. fire!! it must have spelt Lett's doom
I'm ROFLing hard as fuck, n hoping that ailment u'll get better soon.
but I think I see improvement, ur style used to be rancid
so this battle is me paying my respect, n u leaving here empty handed.
-thought the nappa line was creative but it was also a bit corny.

this was a real good battle to me alot of nice shit but one just edged it to me, I enjoyed his bars a bit more tbh...v/Odd