cough..i mean herbal
ok homo
ur rules
no dr
no hate
no pmin to vote iight then lets go
^^thats all my rules show me sumin
HERBAL
Aprentice²
cough..i mean herbal
ok homo
ur rules
no dr
no hate
no pmin to vote iight then lets go
^^thats all my rules show me sumin
20 lines no more no less
none of ure dick riders can vote
other than that quit acting like a bitch yo
goodluck and post ure shit by midnight i dont care when as long as its by midnight ill probably drop a lot earlier than then but thats the time i always set for battles
also voting as follows:
opener-
closer-
creativity-
punches-
personals-
vocab-
originality-
overall-
thats it yo goodluck....peace
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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so im spittin first??????????blind spits lets spit like now............................................... .................................................. .......
how long from now?? ait then if u want to i had to do something but i can key something up real quick if thats wat u want??
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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I'll set this Apprentice will confess my boundless mind/
Flawless rhyme design, verbals that confine//
Spits are glorified, no lie you'll be cooked and fried/
Right before your eyes... when you criticize//
Much to your demise I elevate and rise/
Life without knowledge is death in disguise//
So everytime u grab a pen your pulse goes flat/
Once the KID now it’s squared? and you're twice as wack//
By vain ambition I make my punches profuse/
You lose couldn't sustain if ya had help from the muse//
You choose...remain on RB but what's the use? /
Call me sire cuz my fire left you a burnt out fuse//
you? merk me? U couldn't hurt me or work me/
only way ud beat me if I was your Dick and u jerked me//
2 KOs ima bout to make it three seriously u missin me/
I’m da G.O.A.T....cuz i eat eat eat emcees//
Predicting what you’ll say,”herb is fag and he is gay”/
look son dissin on my name has been done and played//
for reals my rhymes penetrate roughly like sodomy/
Instead of a verse apprentice is sure to post an apology//
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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his name used to be APPRENTICE THA KID now its APPRENTICE2 -- squared simbol
alright quick key up cuz u wanted it now and shit now its ure turn homie
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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IIght Herb lets get this started :Wit
Highly potent, venemous shit/
toatin punches...and blendin in kicks/
if u think u hott, ima heetseeka-ya the ultimatum bitch, u get hit/
against me if u think u flow cold/
ur spits will freeze and choke, before they even leave ur throat/
Rings of Merkin....uve now seen the "O"/(the ring)
How can u ponder to battle me....the aftermath will verbally haunt ya/
ya stick to try to feed ma lines, like users...to the rb sponser/
Speed it up:
Enter this death pool..of spits/
the waters fine...like bacteria.....to immune deficiency kids/
now if this herb continues to creep/
countdown 12 nocturnal flows will have u scared to sleep/
fuck a crew, and fuck 2 peeps/
me and ma aprentice is rollin tooooo deep/
Get into it:
now that im blunderin on, im inplodin inner ears...and humblin wrong/
so my rhymes stay right, like ur rhymes is hopless/
like excuse me and move over miss lisa lopez/
i cant let u get ripped by the aprentice in me/
my verse will make u feel like an invisible mcee/
Finish
Have u wish ur spits was never seen, like Monica Lewinsky/
My text is rippin out ya eye sockets, ya essence is all wack stop it/
Herbal moanin in the shower, wit shampoo bottles leaned and prodded/
(prodded:leaning against)
^^^^not bad of a drop but ur whole shit was kinda played that name diss was hott but aprentice 2 means aprentice 2 the arts anyway nice drop
ummmmmmmmmm i said 20 lines not 22!!!
i knew u were gonna some some "shampoo" shit haha its all good
even though its played anyway
its time to vote people and please do it honestly
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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Aprentice² got this one easy man/ i think its just the
that he has a better knowledge of flow/
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apprentice u will agree wit me that that vote dont count right??
i know we both dont like it when people do that shit so ama go report that alright?? anyway nice drop not my style but it was ku
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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opener-Aprentice²
closer-Herbal
creativity-Aprentice²
punches-Aprentice²
personals-Herbal
vocab-Herbal
originality-Aprentice²
overall-Aprentice²
VOTE=Aprentice² I FELT HE HAD A BETTER VERSE OVERALL BUT GOOD JOB TO BOTH OF YA
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Originally posted by Talon
opener-Aprentice²
closer-Herbal
creativity-Aprentice²
punches-Aprentice²
personals-Herbal
vocab-Herbal
originality-Aprentice²
overall-Aprentice²
VOTE=Aprentice²
La La, you know, you need to stop reading my mind, it just aint cool.
Please hit this up, noobs need love to:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=87268
Aprentice is DQ'd from this battle. You don't go in threads saying to 'hit this up and ill return the favor'. Read the rules. If I see you do this in another post.. You are banned.
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