Lenox vs Mr.Write (Write wins 5-0)

***ILLunatic*** · November 30th, 2014, 07:30 PM

10-16 lines, agree in your check-ins.
Due by 11:59 PM EST TONIGHT!

Winner get's to change loser's usertitle

**Spoken** · November 30th, 2014, 07:32 PM

Let's get it and as usual I'm dropping first lol

Lenox · November 30th, 2014, 07:33 PM

Due by tonight?

***ILLunatic*** · November 30th, 2014, 07:36 PM

Just under 5 hours....

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**Spoken** · November 30th, 2014, 08:49 PM

@Lenox I'll have my verse in a hour heading out right now be back to post it

Lenox · November 30th, 2014, 08:49 PM

I'll be posting in 1 maybe 2

**Spoken** · November 30th, 2014, 10:22 PM

Say you'll swing for the fences and get ur jaw tapped till u hit the pavement
Fist'll do damage ur dentist will require a bank account statement
This a breeze, no need to over think cause I'm a savage,
^^that filler was meant to happen unlike the birth of this faggot.
Ur set to make ur future but u've chosen to elope,
Cause we don't know what's worse..
ur record or the fact that u think ur concepts are dope.
u flipped DNA and DIZAZTER bars... shitty ones at best
But put 2 n 2 together it's how we feel about ur drops in text.
Ur horrible with ur flex but we decide to give u a chance,
My bars are looked straight in the eye while urs are given a glance.
You put fat jokes in ur lines.... that's so 0-6
But go figure ^^^ since that'll be ur record before gaining ya first win.
Lenox is improving also dope and getting better by far
Your short stint of fame^^ has ended after I finished writing that bar.
Fuck it this bar is a throw away... I'm thru...
Might lay low for a few cus I don't deserve daps or claps for destroying u.

Lenox · November 30th, 2014, 10:25 PM

Wait I'm pretty sure your supposed to have 16 lines? That's 17.. I might be mistaken though

Lenox · November 30th, 2014, 10:27 PM

Talks shit for a soft battler, he's beyond bad, have this cock sucker dealt,
One right'll knock em, & have money spinning quicker than the Million Dollar Belt,
You're name sucks donkey balls, in general you were fucked up anyway,
only time ya hear "Mr, write!" is in English, when the teach tells em to construct an essay,
Hop off my dick you faggot, that shit gets annoying fast,
He thinks my junk is some kind of amusement ride, now he's askin his boys for cash,
When dropping bars write, your fluency is off beat, like a portion of u is afraid,
The flow ya distribute is so choppy, it could knock heads with tour boat waves,
I'll have dude murked & dead to a groovy beat, his funeral is properly set,
Make his death go down in style,
have more tap dancers on his grave then the rockettes,
He isn't what he's thought out to be, clapping gats & shooting it up till he isn't sterile?
That's why my click caught him at an abortion clinic singin Christmas carols,
Ya suicidal twat, quick to enter one bullet from the clip into his head,
Fella made a name for himself before BestGore.Com even hit the web

***ILLunatic*** · November 30th, 2014, 11:32 PM

Originally Posted by Mr.Write

This a breeze, no need to over think cause I'm a savage,
^^that filler was meant to happen unlike the birth of this faggot.
Ur set to make ur future but u've chosen to elope,
Cause we don't know what's worse..
ur record or the fact that u think ur concepts are dope.

Vs

Originally Posted by Lenox

Hop off my dick you faggot, that shit gets annoying fast,
He thinks my junk is some kind of amusement ride, now he's askin his boys for cash,

Lenox could have took this one had he of reworded some of his bars. Conceptually he had it, but execution lacked bar after bar.

Vote - Mr.Write

**Fresh** · December 1st, 2014, 08:45 AM

Say you'll swing for the fences and get ur jaw tapped till u hit the pavement
Fist'll do damage ur dentist will require a bank account statement
This was weak
This a breeze, no need to over think cause I'm a savage,
^^that filler was meant to happen unlike the birth of this faggot.
ehh not very creative.
Ur set to make ur future but u've chosen to elope,
Cause we don't know what's worse..
ur record or the fact that u think ur concepts are dope.
Not creative enough either
u flipped DNA and DIZAZTER bars... shitty ones at best
But put 2 n 2 together it's how we feel about ur drops in text.
Ok
Ur horrible with ur flex but we decide to give u a chance,
My bars are looked straight in the eye while urs are given a glance.
Not feelin this
You put fat jokes in ur lines.... that's so 0-6
But go figure ^^^ since that'll be ur record before gaining ya first win.
I guess I can give u a jab for the personal, but still pretty weak and not very creative
Lenox is improving also dope and getting better by far
Your short stint of fame^^ has ended after I finished writing that bar.
Nahh
Fuck it this bar is a throw away... I'm thru...
Might lay low for a few cus I don't deserve daps or claps for destroying u.
not feelin it

vs

Talks shit for a soft battler, he's beyond bad, have this cock sucker dealt,
One right'll knock em, & have money spinning quicker than the Million Dollar Belt,
Ehh if his name was money it could have been a jab..
You're name sucks donkey balls, in general you were fucked up anyway,
only time ya hear "Mr, write!" is in English, when the teach tells em to construct an essay,
Not feelin this
Hop off my dick you faggot, that shit gets annoying fast,
He thinks my junk is some kind of amusement ride, now he's askin his boys for cash,
man u coulda have connected with this one,, not feeling the askin his boys for cash part tho, that ruined it.
When dropping bars write, your fluency is off beat, like a portion of u is afraid,
The flow ya distribute is so choppy, it could knock heads with tour boat waves,
Again, so much potential here, but fell flat because of the "knock heads with tour boat waves" The knock heads part really screwed u over here. I'ma give a jab for this tho cause I liked the concept
I'll have dude murked & dead to a groovy beat, his funeral is properly set,
Make his death go down in style,
have more tap dancers on his grave then the rockettes,
nahh
He isn't what he's thought out to be, clapping gats & shooting it up till he isn't sterile?
That's why my click caught him at an abortion clinic singin Christmas carols,
nope
Ya suicidal twat, quick to enter one bullet from the clip into his head,
Fella made a name for himself before BestGore.Com even hit the web
weak

Fucking close battle here.. Mr write not a lot going on in your verse, felt a couple were ok but other then that it was mostly misses. Lenox, you had a couple dope concept but failed to execute them properly which really held u back here. You should have won this, but u failed to connect due to rally bad wording.

I've got Mr write taking this by one. I suppose it could go either way, depending on whos feeling what.. But from where I'm sitting I've got Mr write winning.

v/Write

**Harmcity** · December 1st, 2014, 11:32 AM

This a breeze, no need to over think cause I'm a savage,
^^that filler was meant to happen unlike the birth of this faggot.

Vs:

I'll have dude murked & dead to a groovy beat, his funeral is properly set,
Make his death go down in style,
have more tap dancers on his grave then the rockettes,

Vote: Mr. Write

Reason: Came with a few more consistent bars. I feel Lenox would have taken this if he stayed consistent, cut down some of his wording and executed more thoroughly.