(CONTENDERS MATCH) Wordz AhGod. vs Smog [Smog wins KO]]

[Fresh]

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@Smog

@Wordz AhGod.

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10 - 16 lines.

ALL FL RULES APPLY

[Smog]

14... Only chance I got to write will be Saturday so ill be droppin on the day it's due..

[Wordz AhGod.]

here lol.

[Wordz AhGod.]

not writing no more then this. listen bro..




My knuckles been fiending to hurt u bro, Im tired of hearing u talk fickle
pussy, that'll be an easedrop.. n da fall'll put u next to ur pops in the hospital.
I roll with military goons, these patriots make sure bullets never stray
so while I pull the iron n bust, this nerd would be contempt having Pepper spray.
If I was smog I'd just pause.. n let my days be suicidal
son, everyone knows ur name.. as a punchline I used to win a real season title.
ur last bout was forgettable, plus ur job leaves ur girl howling thru dawn
that's why Im the wolf, wallstreet.. I'll fuck her anywhere in between while ur gone.
I'm in my prime, no subliminals ur wack, even worst ur old bro
I'll shoot at this bitches legs n make em pitch tent, they'll be callin him virgin mobile.

[Smog]

Being zoned in the gamer life left this lame no wife, it's plain ur kids cursed..
U should smash ur ps4 but first, wordz ..show ur daughter WTF made u miss hers..
I break jaws like laws..this fake thug ain't committing sins..
In fact he'll go by the book............ Titled 'how to be a perfect citizen '
A trained killer? C'mon yo, U couldn't figure how to clap by urself..
WTF goods a target?when ur in this choke hold, gat to the back a ya scalp..
Built a rep bashin rookies, can someone get this fag a cookie..
To say that's a bitch moves polite...for being the ways of ur average pussy..
Props on all ur medals..so in honor of them i'll bash this soldier..
See dawg... After i come-end ur career, ill salute to the fact it's over..

[Packed Graves]

Words had- opener, pepper spray after the first 2 though it seems you fell off or started rushing. Not the Wag I'm use to seein, seems like you got bored with the battle & lacked any real motivation.

Vs

Smog had- ps4, commend. You started & finished decently other then that everything in between came over very statementish. I can understand why you didn't put fourth a great effort with the given circumstances.

Vote WAG, his wording came off a little bit better, even though smog had line of the battle with the closers his misses really held him back.

[Fresh]

My knuckles been fiending to hurt u bro, Im tired of hearing u talk fickle
pussy, that'll be an easedrop.. n da fall'll put u next to ur pops in the hospital.
Wasn't much substance to this. Just correlated ease drop with fall and used his dad in the hospital to make it seem personal
I roll with military goons, these patriots make sure bullets never stray
so while I pull the iron n bust, this nerd would be contempt having Pepper spray.
I think u meant to say content?? Either way this was weak to me
If I was smog I'd just pause.. n let my days be suicidal
son, everyone knows ur name.. as a punchline I used to win a real season title.
Ok
ur last bout was forgettable, plus ur job leaves ur girl howling thru dawn
that's why Im the wolf, wallstreet.. I'll fuck her anywhere in between while ur gone.
Not feeling this
I'm in my prime, no subliminals ur wack, even worst ur old bro
I'll shoot at this bitches legs n make em pitch tent, they'll be callin him virgin mobile.
Ehh not feelin it.. worse* ur old bro does not rhyme with virgin mobile also... even less so then egyptian resorts / centrifugal force hahahahaha

vs

Being zoned in the gamer life left this lame no wife, it's plain ur kids cursed..
U should smash ur ps4 but first, wordz ..show ur daughter WTF made u miss hers..
damn that was harsh
I break jaws like laws..this fake thug ain't committing sins..
In fact he'll go by the book............ Titled 'how to be a perfect citizen '
ehh little weak here
A trained killer? C'mon yo, U couldn't figure how to clap by urself..
WTF goods a target?when ur in this choke hold, gat to the back a ya scalp..
not feelin it
Built a rep bashin rookies, can someone get this fag a cookie..
To say that's a bitch moves polite...for being the ways of ur average pussy..
Not feelin it
Props on all ur medals..so in honor of them i'll bash this soldier..
See dawg... After i come-end ur career, ill salute to the fact it's over..
This was decent

I wasn't feeling much of wordz material. season title was decent but other then that it seemed lackluster. Smogs opener was dope, and his closer was pretty nice. Smog gets the dub here.

v/Smog

[Fresh]

@Wordz AhGod. @Smog 2 voting links

[Smog]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post8637865
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...OPEN-FOR-VOTES

Yeah this was very rushed... We'll do it again someday

[Amen]

My knuckles been fiending to hurt u bro, Im tired of hearing u talk fickle
pussy, that'll be an easedrop.. n da fall'll put u next to ur pops in the hospital.

Could of brushed up on the wording/execution, but I still liked it.

If I was smog I'd just pause.. n let my days be suicidal
son, everyone knows ur name.. as a punchline I used to win a real season title.

This was good.

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Being zoned in the gamer life left this lame no wife, it's plain ur kids cursed..
U should smash ur ps4 but first, wordz ..show ur daughter WTF made u miss hers..

I think he owns an XBOX, but this was still good.

Props on all ur medals..so in honor of them i'll bash this soldier..
See dawg... After i come-end ur career, ill salute to the fact it's over..

Solid, LOTB for me.

OVERALL: Wack battle tbh. I was expecting more from both. I do think SMog edges this battle, tbch which is shocking but at the same time, I can see why Wordz doesn't give a shit and the lack of motivation and/or desire to write showed and definitely hurt him and costed him a victory as well as why Smog rushed his. Smog's misses were just slightly better and it came down to the LOTB. IMO, that bar was solid and won the battle for me.

v/Smog - A little more consistent and his misses weren't as bad.

[Attack of the Muff]

honestly..i wasnt feelin this battle that much at all

wag had season title

the rest was weird

the first 4 were ehhhh

contempt didnt mk sense

closer was bad

iono one of ur weaker showings


smog had first words which was dope af

and commend

the rest were ok to eh

but smogs misses werent as bad

v/smog

if we keepin it 100

[Attack of the Muff]

lol my vote was the same as amens basically. fuk u i didnt read that shit

[Fresh]

Smog wins KO.