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due sunday midnight
3 mins
Letterman
daveDILLY
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due sunday midnight
3 mins
In, make it due Monday.
I recorded two days ago dude...
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I'm high and drunk but...
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@Fresh @Smash @Slayerr. @KnowP @Killing Spree somebody drop a vote
Letterman had: clean house, demarco, bases, other then that your flow was straight some shit came off a little forced & to be honest when you pause an say the word "and" you sound slightly feminine just saying.
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Dilly had: breaking bones, check out men. Other then that your accent doesn't dit your flow nor vibe feel like one of them is coming off forced. I can hear that its a free style it comes off obvious with the stuttering and shit but you didn't have any real punches at all just shit talk.
3 quotes to 2 Letterman wins
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
Let's get some votes
Dilly: why everytime you drop a video it has to be only 1 minute 40 seconds long and a freestyle?? If u took more effort in your drops you'd be dope because u had a couple good metaphores like the men's warehouse line and the break bones line. Other then that u underestimated thought u was gonna do this easy and didn't even give a fuck. Straight up waste of time if ur not gonna put effort into ur shit.
Letterman ur quality sucks man sup with the Bruce Lee movie effect lmao. Other then that ur flow was better punches usual self filler misses couple hits like Don Demarco Clean House and the black crime multi display line. I thought u had the slightly more presentable video longer timing but u need to come with more hard hitting punches. Told u many times before.
V/Letterman
Letterman, his flow was blahh, he had wordplay like thats the "Cosby/cause b" .. mentioned miracle too much, intro didn't show any confidence, flow was on and off and the self hype man adlibbing thing didn't work for me. Seems like he tried to be too much of a smack style rapper, even with the gun talk while sitting in his moms kitchen lol.
DaveDilly, had that caught body line but slipped up a lot.. hated his voice beyond anything I ever heard while being on this earth but I felt his overall presentation was better then Lettermans here.. his bars came out clearer and seemed to have more content without some much filler and attempted twists.
cool battle, gonna vote DaveDilly on this one.
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This battle was pretty bad, tbh.
Letterman: You are one nerd faggot, bro. Who buttons their button downs all the way up tho? Aren't you supposed to AT LEAST leave the top button, undone? Terrible, but enough about your no swag having faggot ass. Your quality sucks. Your reactions had like a 15 second delay. Not sure wtf? LOL Bar wise, you were decent. Had a few cool bars but your presentation and delivery of those bars were awful. Nothing WOW'd me...
Dave DILLY: You look like trailer scum, tbh lol. All good, tho hahaha. What's good with recording half of your face, bro? Especially seems as if you were outside in the cold and shit, lol. Overall, I think your presence was bad... You just appeared to be reading something off of a piece of paper in front of you or something. I just think your presence wasn't there at all. Conceptually, you lacked haymakers, had a few jabs but nothing hard hitting. Lol @ the sway his hips bar, that got a chuckle out of me actually.
OVERALL: I'd have to say, Dave took this. I just think he had the more presentable verse. Both lacked presence but dave's was better. Both lacked any real hard hitting bars and I'd say they tied in this area. Delivery? I'd have to say Dave took it with a more stiff laid back no type of emotion feel as oppose to Letterman's 15 second delay, so wasn't sure where the fuck his delivery and presence was. Seemed like he was talking about cleaning house and making the motions of pumping a shot gun and shooting it. It was terrible, tbh. I'll just say, I enjoyed Dave's verse slightly more...
v/Dilly...
letter man. okay, could be a little more decisive on the intro lol. But that dont bother me. kinda a bit too many pauses for too long in it. Lines were solid though. I thought you had some cool concepts but the way they got delivered took some of the sting out. Overall i thought you had not bad delivery, at times i was like cool. But other times the delivers lackwed a little. need to bring hard it the whole time. Flow wise. not bad either. But without the pauses would have been better.
first off, lol @ the freestyle? i'll assume that might be a free at the end and the first bit was written.
okay dave not bad. Flow wise. seems all good. Nothing special. No real quotables hit me off the top on a first listen. IUt was solid, but i wasnt hearing hard hitters. Nothing is really sticking out to me as a line that kills your opponent, its mostly glancing blows. delivery is a little lethargic too.
ok, both came pretty even to be honest. Nothing really stuck out, but i wasnt dissapointed, i think i liked the way DD flowed better and delivered his verse, just, but i had letter taking this on the written side. since a battle is about punches and letter wasnt far behind on the consistant flow ima give my vote to letter. I liked his verse more. Keep it up dudes.
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