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48hrs.
Odd Ways
Noquear
10 lines
House rules
48hrs.
Here.. Will be dropping in a few
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See you can label my actions "terrorist" the way ill wreck this snobbish bitch..
Cuz ur styles so ' tied up ' , it came w/ a mega phone and a group of hostages.
My crew could snatch ya hoe n hit her raw till that twat is diminishing..
That chick'll take enough ' shots on her stomach ' to revolutionize sniper positioning.
I came in w/ grace. When Noq started we knew you weren't dope w/ it..
U've had a ' rocky start ' bad enough to avalanche an entire remote village.
I slay these fuck w/ ease, trust it. Somebody better warn the kid..
Cuz if No shows then I'll leave him beaten n wishing that he never did.
I lead Boss Status like I'm Derrick Rose n killin cats like you so shameless..
I'll give him a ' shot behind the head ' that makes Boozers jumper look like the greatest.
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Fuck your spiritual journey, I'm sick with the pen,
I'm here so Odyssey I'm on a tare to bring his to an end.
You don't keep Coroners in business, You're not a killer, Capiche,
If you're responsible for Deadlifts, It's to gain a Bodybuilders physique.
Gun talk?.. If you won't pull it don't lie or bullets gon fly,
&they'll sit inside Ways.. with out a Paul Wall hook from 05
Bring your "Goons", They'll be shaking without you knowing it Odd,
Get it twisted &your Comrade'll.. Rattle calm!, When I'm approachin ya squad
He got awful wording & all those Poor Scripts he's provided,
Got Dermatologist using his drops as prescriptions for clients.
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Punch had- opener I fuck with it, that shot behind the head I've heard in URL before or something very similar. Besides your opener you came pretty lack luster nothing to direct or harsh, the rocky start was a decent flip but a really played concept & feel wording could've made it hit.
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Unfukwitable had- Odyssey was nice I fuck with the nameplay, sit inside ways was fucking fire my nigga just feel the setup could've made that bar fucking classic, that closer was pretty funny. I liked this every other bar hit home which makes the quotes 3-1.
Fuk takes this pretty convincingly.
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See you can label my actions "terrorist" the way ill wreck this snobbish bitch..
Cuz ur styles so ' tied up ' , it came w/ a mega phone and a group of hostages.
dope concept, wording was mehhh tho..
My crew could snatch ya hoe n hit her raw till that twat is diminishing..
That chick'll take enough ' shots on her stomach ' to revolutionize sniper positioning.
I fuck with it. nice.
I came in w/ grace. When Noq started we knew you weren't dope w/ it..
U've had a ' rocky start ' bad enough to avalanche an entire remote village.
nahh, starting to see a trend with your wording.
I slay these fuck w/ ease, trust it. Somebody better warn the kid..
Cuz if No shows then I'll leave him beaten n wishing that he never did.
think I did a no show line when I first got to the site, this wasn't that good.
I lead Boss Status like I'm Derrick Rose n killin cats like you so shameless..
I'll give him a ' shot behind the head ' that makes Boozers jumper look like the greatest.
this was ok but I don't like the fact you had two "shot" concepts in one verse.
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Fuck your spiritual journey, I'm sick with the pen,
I'm here so Odyssey I'm on a tare to bring his to an end.
cool nameplay, could have been harsher
You don't keep Coroners in business, You're not a killer, Capiche,
If you're responsible for Deadlifts, It's to gain a Bodybuilders physique.
cool but could've been seen as a compliment.
Gun talk?.. If you won't pull it don't lie or bullets gon fly,
&they'll sit inside Ways.. with out a Paul Wall hook from 05
dope.
Bring your "Goons", They'll be shaking without you knowing it Odd,
Get it twisted &your Comrade'll.. Rattle calm!, When I'm approachin ya squad
not feeling.
He got awful wording & all those Poor Scripts he's provided,
Got Dermatologist using his drops as prescriptions for clients.
not feeling it either.
well, I thought Odd had a pretty dope verse here but he was outshined by Noquear who came with some fire. other then his last two lines his verse was dope.
v/Noquear.
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See you can label my actions "terrorist" the way ill wreck this snobbish bitch..
Cuz ur styles so ' tied up ' , it came w/ a mega phone and a group of hostages.
No shows was almost but it's been done so much, more on KnowP, but this wasn't that great of a flip.
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Fuck your spiritual journey, I'm sick with the pen,
I'm here so Odyssey I'm on a tare to bring his to an end.
Gun talk?.. If you won't pull it don't lie or bullets gon fly,
&they'll sit inside Ways.. with out a Paul Wall hook from 05
NoQuear doesn't look too rusty, this was actually a decent verse. I've definitely seen better from Odd, he didn't bring too much heat this battle.
v/No
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See you can label my actions "terrorist" the way ill wreck this snobbish bitch..
Cuz ur styles so ' tied up ' , it came w/ a mega phone and a group of hostages.
Not a fan of the whole "Cuz/Cause/Cos" thing. I think it's stupid and lazy, fro ma writing perspective, plus I don't think it's needed, tbh. I like the concept and feel the executuion was good and all, but the wording could have been brushed up on. It came off choppy at 1st glance.
This is a prime example of what I explained above. This was dope and executed nice and cleanly. Props.My crew could snatch ya hoe n hit her raw till that twat is diminishing..
That chick'll take enough ' shots on her stomach ' to revolutionize sniper positioning.
I came in w/ grace. When Noq started we knew you weren't dope w/ it..
U've had a ' rocky start ' bad enough to avalanche an entire remote village.
Played concept. I like the execution, tho.
I slay these fuck w/ ease, trust it. Somebody better warn the kid..
Cuz if No shows then I'll leave him beaten n wishing that he never did.
Again, played concept but a play off of his name, so I liked it, tbh. But as I explained in your 1st bar, look for an alternative, rather then "Cuz/Cause/Cos". It's lazy and an eye sore, tbr.
I lead Boss Status like I'm Derrick Rose n killin cats like you so shameless..
I'll give him a ' shot behind the head ' that makes Boozers jumper look like the greatest.
This was cool. I don't think all the decoration to make your concept stand out is needed, tho.
OVERALL: I don't think I've ever read anything from you, ODD but this was a pretty solid verse, IMO. Shots on her stomach was fire, so props for that. Everything else was ok, at best due to it's playedness and/or wording issues. But overall, I'd say a pretty solid drop man. I'd like to read more from you. Keep writing.
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Creative, I liked it.Fuck your spiritual journey, I'm sick with the pen,
I'm here so Odyssey I'm on a tare to bring his to an end.
You don't keep Coroners in business, You're not a killer, Capiche,
If you're responsible for Deadlifts, It's to gain a Bodybuilders physique.
This isn't an insult, IMO. Especially for some one like myself, who goes to the GYM. I'd take this as a compliment, tbr. Could have worded it different, to make it harsh enough to pass for an insult.
Fire.Gun talk?.. If you won't pull it don't lie or bullets gon fly,
&they'll sit inside Ways.. with out a Paul Wall hook from 05
Bring your "Goons", They'll be shaking without you knowing it Odd,
Get it twisted &your Comrade'll.. Rattle calm!, When I'm approachin ya squad
No.
He got awful wording & all those Poor Scripts he's provided,
Got Dermatologist using his drops as prescriptions for clients.
No.
OVERALL: Other then your last 2 bars, solid drop as usual, bro. I'd say clean up/brush up on your wording/executions and you know what the deal is. OPening bar was nice and a good way to set the tone, that Paul Wall shit was off the hook, like retired prostitutes, my dude, lol. Anyways, solid drop.
This battle was actually good. I liked both verses, however there has to be a winner. And IMO, I got NoQ w/ 2 Solid punches vs Odd w/ 1 Solid punch. Everything else was either, weak, wack, played and/or a miss for me. So w/ that being said...
v/@NoQuear
See you can label my actions "terrorist" the way ill wreck this snobbish bitch..
Cuz ur styles so ' tied up ' , it came w/ a mega phone and a group of hostages.
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Fuck your spiritual journey, I'm sick with the pen,
I'm here so Odyssey I'm on a tare to bring his to an end.
Gun talk?.. If you won't pull it don't lie or bullets gon fly,
&they'll sit inside Ways.. with out a Paul Wall hook from 05
I thought odds verse was decent. No just came with a smoother and harder verse IMO
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