5 bars, no feeding, due 48 hrs
BigZee
Packed Graves
5 bars, no feeding, due 48 hrs
consider this my Check
Pointing a finger at you, ''You Suck''! bitch That's your avatar image
Slit your throat with a bullet, that's how I break a nigga in a minute
Get rid of you bitch, I haven't even taken it to the limits
Address you to a grave packed with vicious crowd spirits
''The Champ Is Here'' that's me hoe, your title is a fiction
You're unsighted in this game, you need to be given the directions
You're full of mistakes, bitch you need a lot of corrections
This Front-Line section will help me to express my perfection
Your mother is the first bitch that I'm gonna fuck without a protection
this is election, Packed grave's lost connection, yet BigZee is resurrecting
sorry bout this but in the 4th bar the word ''express'' is to be ''describe'' *
lol didnt take this serious, but here.
bet me & il take your salary bro
with how good im Rob & Big, MTV might make a reality show
you are not Ill, or hard for shit
cause anything we see Z-Pak, is meant to be far from sick
i took the battle & felt badly kid
when i noticed your bars are Dragon, more then that avy is
you wont get a W trying to sound slick
& hand out this Manziel, cleveland will use their 1st rnd pick
your moms a drunk, hows this loser worthy
she takes SHOTS & gets banged by the team in a BOOZER jersey
Last edited by Fresh; May 14th, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Pointing a finger at you, ''You Suck''! bitch That's your avatar image
Slit your throat with a bullet, that's how I break a nigga in a minute
You could have formed a punch with the avy but this went nowhere
Get rid of you bitch, I haven't even taken it to the limits
Address you to a grave packed with vicious crowd spirits
No
''The Champ Is Here'' that's me hoe, your title is a fiction
You're unsighted in this game, you need to be given the directions
No punch here
You're full of mistakes, bitch you need a lot of corrections
This Front-Line section will help me to express my perfection
no punch here
Your mother is the first bitch that I'm gonna fuck without a protection
this is election, Packed grave's lost connection, yet BigZee is resurrecting
Ehh?
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bet me & il take your salary bro
with how good im Rob & Big, MTV might make a reality show
Meh slight jab
you are not Ill, or hard for shit
cause anything we see Z-Pak, is meant to be far from sick
cool
i took the battle & felt badly kid
when i noticed your bars are Dragon, more then that avy is
nice little personal wordplay
you wont get a W trying to sound slick
& hand out this Manziel, cleveland will use their 1st rnd pick
a little bit forced but its iight
your moms a drunk, hows this loser worthy
she takes SHOTS & gets banged by the team in a BOOZER jersey
lol lame but funny
Obvious bigzee needs to check some other battles and see how to properly form a punch using wordplay and personals and shit.. PG slipped in an easy win here.
v/PG
bet me & il take your salary bro
with how good im Rob & Big, MTV might make a reality show
nice opener
you are not Ill, or hard for shit
cause anything we see Z-Pak, is meant to be far from sick
cool line here
i took the battle & felt badly kid
when i noticed your bars are Dragon, more then that avy is
nice use of opponents profile
you wont get a W trying to sound sick
& hand out this Manziel, cleveland will use their 1st rnd pick
good punch off current events
your moms a drunk, hows this loser worthy
she takes SHOTS & gets banged by the team in a BOOZER jersey
lmao dope closer
Vs
No real punches, just a couple of self hype bars. Gotta go more vicious than that against the champ. Better luck next time
Vote - PG
Nothing
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you are not Ill, or hard for shit
cause anything we see Z-Pak, is meant to be far from sick
i took the battle & felt badly kid
when i noticed your bars are Dragon, more then that avy is
Even tho those concepts are played as fuck & I've seen them flipped a million times, you tied them in as personals, so I quoted them because they were your best NON played/forced bars. BZ needs to work on structuring some concepts and wording them in a harsh insultish manor and he'll be straight.
v/PG
3-zip
Originally Posted by BigZee
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Out of both verses those were the only quotable lines, IMO! Packed you were sleeping foreal I've seen you battle and this was hella weak compared to ur usual.
Big you just need to work on ur bars a little like It was a harder read it didn't flow that well also work on using multi syllables.
Vote packed
4-zip lets finish this possibly?
nothing
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i took the battle & felt badly kid
when i noticed your bars are Dragon, more then that avy is
you wont get a W trying to sound slick
& hand out this Manziel, cleveland will use their 1st rnd pick
one sided battle here.Big needs to check out other battles here. packed came soft but enough to exicute a win. that z pak was nice
v/PG
v. PG
I think Packed had the overall harsher verse here. BZ needs to work on fresher concepts, and wording for better execution.
Very one-sided.
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this will be seen as feedback, add more details for it to count -Wordz
Last edited by Wordz AhGod.; May 17th, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Big Zee-
Your mother is the first bitch that I'm gonna fuck without a protection
this is election, Packed grave's lost connection, yet BigZee is resurrecting
Packed Graves-
you are not Ill, or hard for shit
cause anything we see Z-Pak, is meant to be far from sick
Well, I just highlighted your best bars. PG easily took this one by a mile. No disrespect Big Zee, but you got throw my punches and jab, better worded metaphors, wordplay, and if possible personals. Read up on other battles and try to apply that to your own style and technique. Keep elevating, BZ.
vote - PG
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@fresh @Wordz AhGod. Someone fix this.
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