http://i59.tinypic.com/2s8qusg.png @Packed Graves vs @KnowP
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Packed Graves
KnowP
http://i59.tinypic.com/2s8qusg.png @Packed Graves vs @KnowP
Verses due FRIDAY 2MAY14 11:59PM EST
Votes due FRIDAY 9MAY14 11:59PM EST
12 - 16 lines.
ALL FL RULES APPLY.
Last edited by Wordz AhGod.; April 28th, 2014 at 10:36 PM
14 it is, sorry.
Y'all niggas put the wrong name. It's supposed to be me. Wtf y'all doing.
-Has a deaf daughter
-John Dixion
-beat Noquear
fagg0t you got here luckily & i hope you got a gun in the purse
You managed to leave that Quear Fucked, but the contender wasnt your first
His daughters deaf & i feel bad, but to me this herbs a joke
Cuz me & her have something in common .. Neither one of us heard your dope
Know, il curb your hope- then wreck your spine
cuz if we see John Kerry the votes, he's running for office - the 2nd time
Hits make mom nervous, its like your broke - on purpose
Cuz if this bum managed different branches, they're all for a local lawn service
Know, your a vet, But yet still more of the frail type
You've exhausted ur options.. & we hope you keep inhaling from that tail pipe
I'm sorry, but I don't find a way that this male make sense
If we treat champ battles like passwords, youd be locked out for failed attempts
I say stuff ppl are scared to, test me in the gym I dare you
Cuz Me & my boys are curling iron, while your using those for a nice hairdo
you give every hoe your heart, until your chest hurts
so when you struggle with Gal's, it stems a lot further then just a text verse
Last edited by Fresh; April 30th, 2014 at 01:42 PM
What up....
talk a lot of shit like u beast but been getting yo ass beat
u cant be the Alpha mail when he delivered u that ass whoopin last week
u stay runnin from comp in the chats. That’s trippy, odd
way we see soo much bitch in a Pack he could body double as Nikki Minaj
niggas see u duckin n hiding, deny it? Boy stop it.
only time u run up to Spar is so that troll can derail the topic
only ballin u do is tears when u lose. These fist’ll make u cry
n leave soo much black around your eyes it'll make Donald Sterling commit suicide
a Rose in concrete? readin yo bars is like hearing a bitch speak
we know u on that Bull shit… in other words, you’ll be exiting contention this week
raped in gauntlet, murdered in the league, u havin a rough time dude
ure getting blown by soo bad, im surprised these national storms werent caused by you
talkin like u been elite while we see right through this fake
Hall of Fame? U more full of garbage than Shaq during NBA commercial breaks
no one fears u champ. U get clowned like TGF sadly
Graves has become more of running joke than Salamanders robbery avy
Im new to this, but i gotta give my reply to this. This was COMPLETELY dope in my opinion:
"I'm sorry, but I don't find a way that this male make sense
If we treat champ battles like passwords, youd be locked out for failed attempts" - PG
Nice connection, not the best wording from my point of view but the message gets through.
"talk a lot of shit like u beast but been getting yo ass beat
u cant be the Alpha mail when he delivered u that ass whoopin last week" - KnowP
The rhyme itself was too easy, but it was a comfortable start when i continued reading.
Some other parts were jaw-dropping on both sides, but i have to give the battle to...............KnowP. i feel he had a smoother flow and got the job done a little bit quicker than PG. Peace!
Dope battle will vote when I get to my lap top tonight
Name plays on me are old.
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On my phone soo. This all I can do
Opener was nice........heard ya dope was aight but i think you coulda done more, thats major ammo...Kerry was decent...failed attempts n curling iron I liked
Vs
Opener was nice......Spar was decent, coulda worded better. And tue Sterling shit was fire
I got I got 4 quotes to 3 here. But Know had the lotb ....ima have to say that Knows misses were worse then Packed...this was close fa real, but on consistency imo I gotta give it to
V/Packed Graves
Nice battle though
His daughters deaf & i feel bad, but to me this herbs a joke
Cuz me & her have something in common .. Neither one of us heard your dope
Hits make mom nervous, its like your broke - on purpose
Cuz if this bum managed different branches, they're all for a local lawn service
I'm sorry, but I don't find a way that this male make sense
If we treat champ battles like passwords, youd be locked out for failed attempts
you give every hoe your heart, until your chest hurts
so when you struggle with Gal's, it stems a lot further then just a text verse
Vs.
talk a lot of shit like u beast but been getting yo ass beat
u cant be the Alpha mail when he delivered u that ass whoopin last week
raped in gauntlet, murdered in the league, u havin a rough time dude
ure getting blown by soo bad, im surprised these national storms werent caused by you
no one fears u champ. U get clowned like TGF sadly
Graves has become more of running joke than Salamanders robbery avy
^ Almost quoted the Sterling line but I've never seen Packed complain about a loss.
This was a close battle. I thought it was nice for a Champ match and KnowP stepped it up a bit. I think Packed came with the W here with harder punches, but justttt barely. Know had a nice verse. Had he executed a couple lines better this could have been his victory. Good battle, fellas.
V/Packed
uppp
His daughters deaf & i feel bad, but to me this herbs a joke
Cuz me & her have something in common .. Neither one of us heard your dope
Hits make mom nervous, its like your broke - on purpose
Cuz if this bum managed different branches, they're all for a local lawn service
you give every hoe your heart, until your chest hurts
so when you struggle with Gal's, it stems a lot further then just a text verse
Know, il curb your hope- then wreck your spine
cuz if we see John Kerry the votes, he's running for office - the 2nd time
vs.
talk a lot of shit like u beast but been getting yo ass beat
u cant be the Alpha mail when he delivered u that ass whoopin last week
only ballin u do is tears when u lose. These fist’ll make u cry
n leave soo much black around your eyes it'll make Donald Sterling commit suicide
a Rose in concrete? readin yo bars is like hearing a bitch speak
we know u on that Bull shit… in other words, you’ll be exiting contention this week
This was a dope battle, KNow P this is what i expect from you more often. Last battle i voted on i wasn't a fan of your verse. Now this verse was cool. I just have PG taking this on stronger hits. He is improving since i was last on here.
v/PG harder lands less misses
3TC
you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world
Aero the Black Pegasus
3-0 uppin for more.
fagg0t you got here luckily & i hope you got a gun in the purse
You managed to leave that Quear Fucked, but the contender wasnt your first
Pretty nice
His daughters deaf & i feel bad, but to me this herbs a joke
Cuz me & her have something in common .. Neither one of us heard your dope
That's foul play but dope
Know, il curb your hope- then wreck your spine
cuz if we see John Kerry the votes, he's running for office - the 2nd time
Yup nice again
Hits make mom nervous, its like your broke - on purpose
Cuz if this bum managed different branches, they're all for a local lawn service
Iight
Know, your a vet, But yet still more of the frail type
You've exhausted ur options.. & we hope you keep inhaling from that tail pipe
Lol, clean feelin this
I'm sorry, but I don't find a way that this male make sense
If we treat champ battles like passwords, youd be locked out for failed attempts
Again nice
I say stuff ppl are scared to, test me in the gym I dare you
Cuz Me & my boys are curling iron, while your using those for a nice hairdo
Damn that's dope
you give every hoe your heart, until your chest hurts
so when you struggle with Gal's, it stems a lot further then just a text verse
Nice...
Dope verse^^^
Vs...
talk a lot of shit like u beast but been getting yo ass beat
u cant be the Alpha mail when he delivered u that ass whoopin last week
Nice
u stay runnin from comp in the chats. That’s trippy, odd
way we see soo much bitch in a Pack he could body double as Nikki Minaj
Iight nice concept
niggas see u duckin n hiding, deny it? Boy stop it.
only time u run up to Spar is so that troll can derail the topic
Iight
only ballin u do is tears when u lose. These fist’ll make u cry
n leave soo much black around your eyes it'll make Donald Sterling commit suicide
Iight
a Rose in concrete? readin yo bars is like hearing a bitch speak
we know u on that Bull shit… in other words, you’ll be exiting contention this week
Nice
raped in gauntlet, murdered in the league, u havin a rough time dude
ure getting blown by soo bad, im surprised these national storms werent caused by you
Iight
talkin like u been elite while we see right through this fake
Hall of Fame? U more full of garbage than Shaq during NBA commercial breaks
Lol, I like this, lmao
no one fears u champ. U get clowned like TGF sadly
Graves has become more of running joke than Salamanders robbery avy
Iight
Well for me this is a easy desicion cuz this prolly the dopest verse I seem pack write.. IMO nobody really missed but knowP had some soft hits n was off a bit on his wifi g at points to where packed was basically solid throughout wit no misses, n good wording n creativity here.. Very enjoyable read from both but gotta go graves here
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