Onslaught-X VS Dirty Sally

[Wakiyan]

Rules
10-20 lines max
No Crew DR votes etc
You spit first
Must post 45 minutes after check in or your DQ'd

[Onslaught-X]

checking in now ill post it in 45 check in check check in check in damn 100 characters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Onslaught-X]

onslaught solider im a knight in shinning armor
ill leave you shoeless ,broke, and dirty like a farmer
whats your name dirty sally
i had more fans at my school pep rally
my vocabulary will definitly send u back to elementary
this is gonna be your second loss just wait-and-see
my skills are like the horizon u getting closer still miles away
just keep your distance if you value life okay
the probability of hostility be constatly getting higher
onslaughts here to take your place when u retire
im the king of rap you can call me the apocalypse
battling me? dirty sally u make me sick
u staring at me like u want lasers to come out of my eyes
boom another man down what a suprise

[Wakiyan]

checking in////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

starting keystyle now.....typing typing typing

[Wakiyan]

I'll hit u with an onslaught of xxx's 1 and 2 connect but u don't fall
The 3rd x strikes u and now your out like the fat kid in dodgeball
I'll be your waitress for this evening here's what I have to offer u
A healthy portion of gunclap with a side of bitchslap it's all for you
I'll son you then rename you something supergay like Bloom
Your like deja vu with repeated lines prepare to meet your doom
The Reaper lurks nearby that means one of us shall soon perish
And it's not going to be me so say goodbye to all that you cherish
It's my pleasure that I was chosen to get to break your ass in
You stood no chance poor dude your fucking stupid for clashing

[e.coli]

sally took this

punches=sally
creativity=sally
structure=tie
flow=sally

my vote=sally

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[e.coli]

yo can u hit this wit a honest vote

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=85999

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[Onslaught-X]

vote already someone suspense is being bult already !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!11

[Wakiyan]

^^^uppin (2) come on people vote i'd like to get this done and over with so i can move on thank you how is everybody doing this saturday nite? i'm just typing to get to 100 characters ok that should do it

VOTE!!!

[Dope Wax]

^You're fat and ugly. Therefore

V - Dirty Sally

She gets grimey. . When you talk about her lunch like that. NuCCa

[spitit]

punches............sally
flow................sally
metaphors..........sally
vocab.............sally
similes............both
overall.............my girl sally

Sally please hit this up honestly, sorry I cant poll yet but u wont this babe.........PM me sumtime

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86410

[SmokaJoka]

decent battle....Onslaught had this in flow....the rest just goes to Sally....no need for a breakdown i don't think.....the verses pretty much explain themselves....Sally had better vocabulary, punches, and wordplay......which is all it takes to win a battle...

peace
4:20

[Wakiyan]

^^^^uppin (3)

come on.............................just...need...two.. .more...votes..................................... .................................................. ..................................

[Onslaught-X]

good for a first try i guess but kee votin it aint over !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VOTE VOTE VOTE

[cutastraphe]

aighttt---onsalught aight flow, ok scheme, suma ight disses buthin too shabby---dirty ya had an ok flow, shitty scheme, couple aight punches--first line was complete crap and ya bit off eminem besides---but ya get my vote here cuz ya had betta disses then onslaught---vote=dirty