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  1. October 17th, 2003, 11:13 PM #1
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    He Who Is Me

    "He Who Is Me"

    [VERSE 1]
    My hypothesis is you'll die upon hearin' this
    I'll affect you mentally with psychokinesis
    I have more pistols than a developed plant
    Only way you're comin' is wit' a penile implant
    Poetic lyricist that wasn't received through genitics
    I'll take away your ability to be kinesthetic
    The Pacific Ocean don't compare to my flow
    I glow with more skill than a celebrity talent show
    I don't need a flame cuz I'm equivalent to smolder
    Handin' you my verse would earn you the title fire holder
    I'm skitzsofrenic and both sides join to be confluent
    People say my raps are unfit, that's why I do it
    A stray bullet's on its way through earth's gravity
    J to the D is sure to cause a Cavalry tragedy
    Grab a map to see how I became a legend
    This is how my life's forever and always has been

    [CHORUS]
    I was the first to earn the title, "Heavyweight MC"
    I'm so assured of my skills, enjoyment is guaranteed
    And while you ask who is this guy?, who could he be?
    The Answer was right in front of you, this is he who is me

    [VERSE 2]
    After digestin' this track I know y'all will overreact
    Me on the mic is more arousin' than a lesbian sex act
    You and me are the definition for the word contrast
    I play all the important parts, you're only a name in life's cast
    If I were to describe my flow I'd say it's hardcore
    I'm more the center of attention than the earth's core
    I know what you're thinkin', "How did he get this way"?
    But I don't even know, it just came to me one day
    And don't try to clone me cuz it ain't worth the risk
    To join me at this level would cost you your spinal disk
    I eat away at emcees like they're a full course meal
    Seein' me live is like a dream, it's that unreal
    And don't come around after seein' me on T.V.
    Cuz if you weren't with me before, you never will be
    So go pay the ten dollars and buy my audio C.D.
    It's weird, I'm so dope that drugs now smoke me

    [CHORUS]
    I was the first to earn the title, "Heavyweight MC"
    I'm so assured of my skills, enjoyment is guaranteed
    And while you ask who is this guy?, who could he be?
    The Answer was right in front of you, this is he who is me

    [VERSE 3]
    As we move on to verse three it's comin' to a close
    I know I've pissed off all the guys and aroused all the hoes
    Believe me when I say that my reign will last forever
    There ain't nobody with a mind this clever, whatsoever
    But if you are my dogg then I'm with you till the end
    I'm one of the few who comprehends the meanin' of "true friend"
    When hearin' this you're experiencin' a lyrical genius
    And simultaneous is a personality that's spontaneous
    I'm just dealin' out the facts to see how you'll play the hand
    Just so you understand, I cop souls upon demand
    So be careful if you're ever within my presence
    The shit I invent is sure to cause a turn of events
    I'm not even gon' label my work with an advisory for the parental
    Let your kids be experimental before you get judgemental
    I think my chest has got off everything I wanted said
    Play this song over and over till your brain cells shed

    [CHORUS]
    I was the first to earn the title, "Heavyweight MC"
    I'm so assured of my skills, enjoyment is guaranteed
    And while you ask who is this guy?, who could he be?
    The Answer was right in front of you, this is he who is me
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  2. October 17th, 2003, 11:25 PM #2
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    WOW! I was feeling this from beginning to end. You got some mad skills, dogg. Are you planning on turning this into an audio peice? Or have you already? Either way, let me know cause I think this would do for a dope audio. Holla!
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  3. October 17th, 2003, 11:25 PM #3
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    I really really like this open mic dude great fukkin flow and great rhymes. I really like your chorus its tight and just the message in ur rhymes is fukkin crazy. I don't know what else to say except this shit was fukkin mad tight. Most people don't get this good of a response from me cuz a lot of people suck but damn that shit was mad. Nice work.
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  4. October 18th, 2003, 12:38 AM #4
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    this was a nice flow my nigga i felt u could have upped the vocab in the first verse but i was still feelin this piece. nice drop my nigga. keep elevatin and doin yo thang

    holla
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  5. October 18th, 2003, 08:12 AM #5
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    Shit was foreva..
    start ta finish you mos def held ya shit down...
    N i'd like ta hear this as n audio 2...
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  6. October 18th, 2003, 10:01 AM #6
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    nice topic, the whole peice had nice flow, pretty tight drop.. thought the hook was good aswell, it just brings the whole thing together.......keep droppin....peace
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  7. October 18th, 2003, 10:48 AM #7
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    Thanks y'all. And for the people sayin' they'd like to hear this as an audio, I'm workin on that right now. I'll post the link when it's done.
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  8. October 18th, 2003, 12:02 PM #8
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    OK, but can you PM me the link because I doubt I'll be back to this thread?
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  9. October 18th, 2003, 12:29 PM #9
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    ^Yeah I will man. Anyone else gon' hit this up?
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  10. October 18th, 2003, 02:52 PM #10
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    It was nice, ...

    But,.i think its better, ..when u not tellin ,

    like:
    My hypothesis is you'll die upon hearin' this
    I'll affect you mentally with psychokinesis
    I have more pistols than a developed plant
    Only way you're comin' is wit' a penile implant

    Its maybe me personal , ...but al and all this was an avarage, drop, ..u need to work on some aspects, ...it flowed ok, ...but the inner structure, ...looked to me ,..kinda ...messy....but still nice drop ..

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  11. October 18th, 2003, 06:47 PM #11
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    ^What do you mean by when I'm not tellin'?
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  12. October 18th, 2003, 07:20 PM #12
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    Yo man, this was dope as hell. Are you up for a collaboration wit' me on a song I just started?
    Arrest me, sentence me and lock me away,
    So the streets can be safe for mc's to play

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  13. October 18th, 2003, 08:06 PM #13
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    PM me some of your work first dogg then I'll let ya know.

    STILL UPPIN!!!
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  14. October 18th, 2003, 10:14 PM #14
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  15. October 18th, 2003, 10:31 PM #15
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    nice song you mos def have some good vocab..
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