Judge Judy / Feline

[Zanny Willson]

Haven't been to RB in a minute. Always been a fan of rap but only recently took a shot at making my own. In need of some feedback so here I am. I'm still new at this so go nuts

Judge Judy
[sc]https://soundcloud.com/st-c-1/judge-judy[/sc]

Feline
[sc]https://soundcloud.com/st-c-1/feline-v1[/sc]

made a few different songs but I'll start with these two

[Zanny Willson]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...nest-criticism
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...al-Music-Video

[PatricBernier]

not bad! not at all
i like your lyrics and how you peice them together
your voice sounds similiar to some white rappers i have heard
good quality track, you can brag about
you match the beat and deliver what you were trying to showcase

[Pair-A-Dyce]

I think Feline was dope but it could've been better with a hook because you were getting a little off towards the end. I didn't like the mix on it though

Judge Judy was good quality wise but to me it just sounds like a mess of words, I didn't get a sense of there bein a point to all of the words. That's cool though, not saying everything has to be deep but it just sounds like a bunch of intricate lines being read and I found it hard to get into.

[Zanny Willson]

I think Feline was dope but it could've been better with a hook because you were getting a little off towards the end. I didn't like the mix on it though

Judge Judy was good quality wise but to me it just sounds like a mess of words, I didn't get a sense of there bein a point to all of the words. That's cool though, not saying everything has to be deep but it just sounds like a bunch of intricate lines being read and I found it hard to get into.

Thanks man, the quality thing is spot on for sure because I've gotten a new mic since recording Feline. Judge Judy was more or less a throwaway but for some reason it's been my most popular song among my friends. Even online it fetches the most listens, maybe because of the name?

[Oxymoron]

wrong thread, will edit with feed later soon.

[Ace the Prophet]

Listening to Judge Judy....first thought is you sound a ton like my boy so I'm immediately brought in, lol....I dig the flow. I wanna hear a little more switch ups within it though. That's switch up the delivery too and peak more interest from people. I think you got some small switch ups in this that are cool though.

Feline- I like the effect but I want it to die out to increase its effectiveness...your flow's filthy on this. Switch up isn't as necessary in this one IMO...dope delivery too. I dig this one more than Judge Judy I think.

Cool shit man! Check out my Curtains Freestyle when you get a chance!