salvation - "hands in the air" .. upbeat .. catchy

[Salvation]

salvation - "hands in the air" (snippet)

its still 2:30 .. so listen .. your reaction is what tells me if i should finish this or not .. so, give honest critiques .. i was basically just seeing how far i could go "commercial" w/o being considered a sell out .. listen to the lyrics .. its not that car / money / ice shit .. i kept the lyrics grimey .. just did some shit different .. lemme know ..

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...ID=626671&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...ID=626671&q=Hi

www.soundclick.com/bands/1/lesalvationmusic.htm

pz..1

[Jae Cyph]

it is nice, i havnt listened yet, but it is nice. . i`ll tell you on AIM paley.

[Otherwordz]

the flow was good...but I ain't really feelin' those Neptunez style commercial keyboard sounding beatz...

[Jaywalk]

pretty cool, really need to upgrade ya mic homie, chorus is hype and would definitly sound dope in the club. Verses maintain the hypeness but lose a certain feel it needs to seperate it from the chorus and it just doesnt have that due to the quality. Not really my type of song here, but flow delivery and purpose are done exactly how it should be done for this type of thing.

[Sal-V]

^sup buddy =)

i completely understand .. ima toy with it a tad bit more .. im just seeing where i can and cant step right now first off jaywalk .. =) .. how's shit goin' for you bro? lol
cant say much its only been a few days, lol

ill get at you dog

stay up bro
pz..1

[Otherwordz]

yo Sal...we still layin' down that collab that we talked about??????

[Sal-V]

Yeah man .. Drop your email .. I'll get at you

[Otherwordz]

holla at me on aim when ya get a chance...you know my sn...

[Romulus]

this track is pretty good....chours ok...flow was good..lyrics was good...gotta get hype track..it feals like..ya know boucin in tha club...quality of ya mic wasnt all that..but other than that dope drop..good job sal-v

[MaNyIcAlMiNd]

yea this was a nice drop,i was fealing it,had me moveing a little bit,,and i know it is to have a shitty mic,cauze well,i got one..butit didn't sound bad at all dogg and the beat was on point to man,..good drop man..

[MR. LEGEND]

yeah nice Lyricz, nice beat, bu thtey don't match man. I got a tip for you buddy. When ever people purposly try to make a party jam, they suck at it. Most Party Jams become party jams, cause they are good songs. Word of advice..they was throwin their hands in the air back in 77 dawg!!! lol Plus when you rock a beat like this it's not technical/lyrical, they need to understand easy what your sayin, cause they will want to sing along, you know "that's my favorite part of the song" parts. When it comes to dancin and partyin, you gotta let yo soul glow more than the lyrics, that the catch

Good drop anyway though man...