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InkWell
YoungWhiteThug19
YoungWhiteThug19 vs. InkWell
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I'll set it up in front lines
You spit first
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No Hate
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i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk...
::::CLOSER::::
this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
blah quick keystyle spit up homie
This Nigga Crazy
'Allow' enough 'information' for a 'confrentation' to be discured~
Give me a hook? We aint boxing Nigga I think you confused~
Aint a song neither take an 'electronic' breather-get defused~
26Shells-Fuck im givin you hell-vBcode tags closed Whatsyo style~
Never had one and wont eva get one cuz you steady blushin~
Joey Crack Da Don!Got my loyalty and Im still steady crushin~
Don't 'misplace' this 'face' wit Hip Hop! Check the charts ^Top~
Slugs penetrate to where I can't stop~
Still White Pac and still unfire - (Mis-Aim) a shot bitch please!
You aint eva came close to haveing any talent (EXIT) Juss Leave~
"Emptying Clips On This Fool"old school-Eminem and BustaRhymes Too~
Brain Dead Terror of "Homicide" on Rap Battles~
You don't juss get dick riders you get smacked wit rap pattles~
I don' tattle and no i aint a snitch-The End gave me permission to murda this bitch~
Shit I'll say Im done.... But Yo heres my 'clincher'
Finisher:
Don't even 'think' that this white boy at the 'brink' wont steal yo 'multis' and 'word-play'~
InkWell a 'Herb' - I do it fo a 'career' you do it fo 'play' ~
Go tell your home boys that YoungWhiteThug19 taught you a new word today~
YOU'S A HOE
No Beef
INKWELL ONE HANDS DOWN WHITE THUG IS A BITCH AND INKWELL BLOW HIM AWAY LIKE HE WAS BRANDY AND RAY J IF YOU SMELL WHAT THE ROCK ISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS COOKIN
THE GREAT ONE
^^^
First of all this is ghetto booty your juss changed your name and your vote don't count. Your kid I juss smoked in the other battle. Get The Fuck Out THe Thread than banned you now your back. Leave
Upp'nnnn
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young wins this battle...............................too goood for this newbie, punches, flow, structure etc, were all excelled by young...
The other guy inkwell did well for a newb but young was too good
^Vote Doesn't Count
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; October 15th, 2003 at 08:25 PM
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follow this link and vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=p.stylez
^^^ No doubt thanx man.
1-0 me..
************************************************** ***************************UPp'nnnn*************** *****
i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
Nice mutlis with witty wordplay... nice punch
get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
kinda blah...
you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
second was kinda played....
of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
good punch... strill coming with wordplay....
crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
second line was nice
leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk...
Nice with the punch as well... set up was kinda lacking...
::::CLOSER::::
this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
kinda blah closer
Overall... Average to good verse
'Allow' enough 'information' for a 'confrentation' to be discured~
Give me a hook? We aint boxing Nigga I think you confused~
Piss poor punch... while feeding... weak
Aint a song neither take an 'electronic' breather-get defused~
26Shells-Fuck im givin you hell-vBcode tags closed Whatsyo style~
Seriously... this was wack
Never had one and wont eva get one cuz you steady blushin~
Joey Crack Da Don!Got my loyalty and Im still steady crushin~
wordplay but now punch
Don't 'misplace' this 'face' wit Hip Hop! Check the charts ^Top~
Slugs penetrate to where I can't stop~
This was just bad...
Still White Pac and still unfire - (Mis-Aim) a shot bitch please!
You aint eva came close to haveing any talent (EXIT) Juss Leave~
still weak ass punches.....
"Emptying Clips On This Fool"old school-Eminem and BustaRhymes Too~
Gay... just dumb....
Brain Dead Terror of "Homicide" on Rap Battles~
You don't juss get dick riders you get smacked wit rap pattles~
What are you thinking??? You used to know what a punch was
I don' tattle and no i aint a snitch-The End gave me permission to murda this bitch~
Shit I'll say Im done.... But Yo heres my 'clincher'
gay again........
Finisher:
Don't even 'think' that this white boy at the 'brink' wont steal yo 'multis' and 'word-play'~
InkWell a 'Herb' - I do it fo a 'career' you do it fo 'play' ~
Go tell your home boys that YoungWhiteThug19 taught you a new word today~
lacking..... very blah..
Overall.... Below average to bad verse...
Vote- Inkwell
AI
Basically Chrit Said Everything Needed To Say.
Young, That Verse Was below Average, It Was Something I Can Compete On...So You Kow Its Bad. InkWell Had Some Nice Punches, And His Wordplay Was Shining Throughout His verse...
Vote-Inkwell..
Hence Forward.. BURR!
[YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
Just watch My Back, I got the front.
::~BreakDown~::
Punches-Pretty Close
Wordplay-Tie
Flow-YWT *Choppy Tho*
Multies-YWT
Creativity-Close....I Say Tie
Vocab-YWT
Overall Vote-YWT
Close Battle Tho......
But YoungWhiteThug19 Came A Lil Harder
Crew Vote... Gone
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; October 15th, 2003 at 08:41 PM
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i wasn't feelin this battle much---inkwell ya has a good flow, good wrdplay, couple aight punches---young ya had ok structure but ya flow was weak---the punches were pretty weak too----vote=inkwell
^^^ First of all InkWell can't vote fo you in your battle so you shouldn't even leave links cuz he only has 24 posts lol.
Uppp'nnnnnnnn
Originally posted by Chrit
i'll rip this fuck.. and to put it blunt.. bitch, you suck..
and i'm known to raise the bar, but you can't even lift it up..
Nice mutlis with witty wordplay... nice punch
get ripped and stuff - gats aimed.. so you can't hurt me..
cuz i'm puttin '23' in ya stomach, like Jordan jerseys..
kinda blah...
you just ain't worthy.. i toss punches that's swarmin' dudes..
but your spit is just bananas.. and apples, and oranges too..
second was kinda played....
of course your through.. i set trends when my tracks repent..
but you'll never 'pave the way'.. cuz you steady lackin' cement..
good punch... strill coming with wordplay....
crackin' him bent.. you can't write.. just give it a look..
'n i'll jab you up with a ''verse'' and even give you the Hook..
second line was nice
leavin' him shook.. and my lyrics are steamin' with funk..
and dawg you ain't got a shot.. lay-up, or even a dunk...
Nice with the punch as well... set up was kinda lacking...
::::CLOSER::::
this doode is horrible; n it seems he can't throw shit at me
but the fact of the matter is; he couldn't take me if he kidnap'd me
kinda blah closer
Overall... Average to good verse
'Allow' enough 'information' for a 'confrentation' to be discured~
Give me a hook? We aint boxing Nigga I think you confused~
Piss poor punch... while feeding... weak
Aint a song neither take an 'electronic' breather-get defused~
26Shells-Fuck im givin you hell-vBcode tags closed Whatsyo style~
Seriously... this was wack
Never had one and wont eva get one cuz you steady blushin~
Joey Crack Da Don!Got my loyalty and Im still steady crushin~
wordplay but now punch
Don't 'misplace' this 'face' wit Hip Hop! Check the charts ^Top~
Slugs penetrate to where I can't stop~
This was just bad...
Still White Pac and still unfire - (Mis-Aim) a shot bitch please!
You aint eva came close to haveing any talent (EXIT) Juss Leave~
still weak ass punches.....
"Emptying Clips On This Fool"old school-Eminem and BustaRhymes Too~
Gay... just dumb....
Brain Dead Terror of "Homicide" on Rap Battles~
You don't juss get dick riders you get smacked wit rap pattles~
What are you thinking??? You used to know what a punch was
I don' tattle and no i aint a snitch-The End gave me permission to murda this bitch~
Shit I'll say Im done.... But Yo heres my 'clincher'
gay again........
Finisher:
Don't even 'think' that this white boy at the 'brink' wont steal yo 'multis' and 'word-play'~
InkWell a 'Herb' - I do it fo a 'career' you do it fo 'play' ~
Go tell your home boys that YoungWhiteThug19 taught you a new word today~
lacking..... very blah..
Overall.... Below average to bad verse...
Vote- YOUNGWHITE THUG
Vote deleted for this kid being retarded and quoting my vote...
Then changing the winner to young...
Fucking herb.
Jesus
-Chrit
Last edited by Chrit.; October 14th, 2003 at 11:44 PM
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