10 lines
u first
15 mins
no dr c h votes
no feeding/biting
15 mins from your check in
pCe
rule
GriM EviL
10 lines
u first
15 mins
no dr c h votes
no feeding/biting
15 mins from your check in
pCe
iight checkin in...g'luck ...40 characters fuckin shit.............................................. ........
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Alright so what the fuck do you exspect to do 10 lines max?
Only gives me five bars to leave you lyrically bitch slapped
Grim Evil, do you chill wit the devil or you just an evil puppet
I could assinate you puppet show but its already gay so fuck it
Free agent? More like "i'll pay you if you let me be on you cd"
Sure you can be on my cd, heres a diss track, its called "wona be"
Now im not gay but i just "cumed" all over you Grem Evil
Your a joke you remind me of'a Jackass movie are you the sequal?
im down to my last bar and your tripping like you overdost on anastedics
Hulisinting like you beat me but im'a tell you thi, calling me out you'll live to regret it
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^^ya ok now await the merking
this cat spit so much "shit" his ass enys his mouth and tongue/
you cant come outta ya dick yet caus you way too young/
this kid blows all men outta the water...i mean litterally/
you need to look over yor prewritten...over alitteracy/
battles aint much different that with ya mmo cuz you always "cum" second/
called him a dumbass and he said "im smart i reckoned"/
i laugh at ya rhymes, chew and spit 'em out like gum/
i could down you with a cup like i was drinkin rum/
this 15 mins is killing him the suspence is soo tight/
its only a 30 second death if you can read alright/
pCe
good ish...g'luck..peace...let the votes in..1............................................. .............................................
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uppin_1_
pCe
bein slept on uppin_2_
pCe
this was a pretty weak battle, but heres my breakdown....
structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-tie
punches-rule
personals-neither
overall-rule
both of u need to elevate but rule takes this....
peace.......
i dunno about that^^...heres my break down
best lines
GRIM
battles aint much different that with ya mmo cuz you always "cum" second/
called him a dumbass and he said "im smart i reckoned"/
^^personal^^
i laugh at ya rhymes, chew and spit 'em out like gum/
i could down you with a cup like i was drinkin rum/
^^aight punch^^
this 15 mins is killing him the suspence is soo tight/
its only a 30 second death if you can read alright/
^^awesome finisher^^
RULE
Free agent? More like "i'll pay you if you let me be on you cd"
Sure you can be on my cd, heres a diss track, its called "wona be"
^^meh...ok punch i guess^^
im down to my last bar and your tripping like you overdost on anastedics
Hulisinting like you beat me but im'a tell you thi, calling me out you'll live to regret it
^^pretty good finsher^^
punches-grim
personlas-grim
flow-both
structure-rule
overall-grim
structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-tie
punches-rule
personals-neither
overall-rule
rule threw better punches and so didnt grim but not as strong as rules
rules got my vote
i dont know how your beating me but aight...uppin_3_
pCe
that was weak no doubt but ima go with grim on this one wit the punches...they hit harder and were all through out...sum of rules wasnt that great or didnt hit hard
no hate
vote-grim evil
to sum it all up^^punches and personals got it for grim..it was a whack nattle no doubt but still i think grim had a bit better...no hateOriginally posted by FATAL_LYRICS
i dunno about that^^...heres my break down
best lines
GRIM
battles aint much different that with ya mmo cuz you always "cum" second/
called him a dumbass and he said "im smart i reckoned"/
^^personal^^
i laugh at ya rhymes, chew and spit 'em out like gum/
i could down you with a cup like i was drinkin rum/
^^aight punch^^
this 15 mins is killing him the suspence is soo tight/
its only a 30 second death if you can read alright/
^^awesome finisher^^
RULE
Free agent? More like "i'll pay you if you let me be on you cd"
Sure you can be on my cd, heres a diss track, its called "wona be"
^^meh...ok punch i guess^^
im down to my last bar and your tripping like you overdost on anastedics
Hulisinting like you beat me but im'a tell you thi, calling me out you'll live to regret it
^^pretty good finsher^^
punches-grim
personlas-grim
flow-both
structure-rule
overall-grim
^^^^are you fucking kidding me..w/e..aiight...lol........................
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i think i won...w/e though good battle and no beef......uppin_5_................................ ..
pCe
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