Ya get 30 mins max after check in
No feedin, hatin/ crew votes etc....
We both start after you check in
_WISH_
K-Dubb
Ya get 30 mins max after check in
No feedin, hatin/ crew votes etc....
We both start after you check in
Yo im checking in...........30 mins i will have my verse up............... good luck....................
Hey Wish, i never heard of you before, i think you was tha whore I was lookin' for in the hardware store,
that's right, you was the one takin more money than you could allow for, damn it's like a trojan war when I see you on the floor//
I don't know if you male, i dont know if you female, but ya did go into detail about humping that blue whale//
That was fuckin sick, that when i found out you had no dick,
I bet you was just usin a stick!//
Hey no hard feelings right? I'm sure ya dont wanna fight,
despite, that you have ya undawear on too tight, alright?//
Do ya know what I heard about ya mate? I heard ya debate on whether or not to masturbate,
is that ya only fate, is it because ya dont know how to impregnate, man, get a date//
Isn't it frustrating to be lubricating while punitrating,
man why are you lucubrating about your puberating?//
Fuck this rhyme is stupid, makes me feel like fucking cupid//
Doesn't it make you want to lick my ass? I'll let ya, I promise I won't pass gas//
If I ever see you at night, im gonna fuckin throw in a fight, just for you alright?
If ya win though, i'll let you stick ya finger up my ass hole,
then i'll make ya lick it ya hoe//
Do you got a punchline, do you know how ya gonna say it? Fuck it, your a faggit, your like that fuckin rabbit i saw with an open slit waitin' for your dick, ya nit wit//
Shit dawg I haven't even begun, doesn't matter i already won, so ya betta run or imma shoot u wit my gun,
fuck it, I'll just chop off ya tongue with ya left lung and stick it in cow dung//
Are you almost done with your line, do ya even got a good rhyme?
Doesn't matter we both outta time, I hope your able ta beat mine//
30 mins not an hour and 30 mins man, post your shit plz............................................... .................
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Yo man i gotta go to work i will post when i get the chance to......
i aint gunna no-show i will spit my verse.......
just hold on
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........dont fuckin accept then damn man, wait til you fuckin have time i coulda battled some1 else.
This kid couldnt top me if he had stilts measuring 12-feet..
Im bout to switch my style.. so kid get ready for your defeat...
SWITCH-STYLE....
My punches dig deep into your skin..inflicting-pain..
A filthy syringe shooting-hard-crack in your-weak-veins..
Like a hit-of-cain.. my style is slowly decaying-your-brain..
Do you like the-rhymes-that-you-read...now you finally see..
You aint no G... so how could your wack rhymes ever compete-with-me..
Fuck this shit... There wasnt any line length rules or nutting...
so lets just get some votes on this....
yo wish completely took this one even tho his verse was short. ur style switch was tight good flow. k dubb nice try but i dont think any lines really stuck out too much and all the rhymes were so elemntary cept for maybe a couple...use more flow and dont just try to cram in as many words as u can in each line.
my vote: _WISH_....but i cant vote. ha. so if anybody wanna do it for me. peace out his up my battles.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84560
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84152
UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES ON THIS.........
YO POST LINKS TO YOUR BATTLES N WE WILL RETURN THE FAVOUR...........
Yo wish took this one better flow and was just overall better even tho it was short, k-dubb you really need to elevate if you expect to gain wins.
^^^who the hell is this guy? anywho ima say wish took this, but heres my breakdown.....
structure-tie
flow-wish
vocab-wish
wordplay-tie
punches-wish
personals-wish
overall-wish
props to the both of ya, but ima say wish takes this.
yo if u have the time can u hit up my battle against yog dogg
peace.......
Yo uppin for some votes !!!............................................... .................................................. ...............
MY VOTES TO WISH THAT K DUBB SHIT WAS WACK FOO UR GARBAGE!! but keep practin ull get better...............................
dis wad sort of lop sided like bad breast implants
ma vote goead ta Wish
da nigga was betta overall im ma eyes, nice punchlines is what won him it, puches are everything
pizzle niggaz
Vote wish.
His verse was short but it stood out more than k-dubbs. It was a good effort by both.
Can somebody vote on this aswell. It only needs one more vote and it's bein slept on:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84407
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