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  1. October 9th, 2003, 03:58 PM #1
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    The Painter gladiator

    The Invincible
    I scribble paint invisible, spiritual poltergeist rhymer
    Artisitic ghost writer, the drifter mic tounge tier
    Im the horseback flame rider flied by the unicorn guider
    Ring-leader strider gladiator, Im da major arena life-taker
    Frequencies soars ground shakers, the sound barrier breaker
    Opponants get cut like tokens, bleeping forgive me
    Like old aged modems
    You cant compete with my band of broadband liquid swords
    You get tangled within my cables and locked within my fluid force
    Titan lion jaws, I clash horns with taurus with brute force torture
    I mute shit-talkers by drowning them in atlantis's deep waters
    Reappearing air-merging, transporting at high turbulance
    Turning the earths crust with my holy verse cursing
    I be the meta-physical person
    I take flight beyond the margin, I'll be bombarding
    The target on A4 with my brainstorm arsenal
    If my pen's empty, that means my thoughts are at full



    RoA - Reformation of Artistery
    Painting pictures with words
    Last edited by /:Ayura:\; October 9th, 2003 at 04:50 PM
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  2. October 9th, 2003, 04:51 PM #2
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    uppin dis
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  3. October 9th, 2003, 05:34 PM #3
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    nice

    Structure was good,...and ur inner mesage was nice man , ...wit some hot vocab , combined wit a nice flow this was a decent drop

    Props my homie.

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  4. October 9th, 2003, 05:51 PM #4
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    thanx, stillin w8in for replies
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  5. October 10th, 2003, 02:52 AM #5
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    I LIKED IT A LIL SHORT BUT STILL A GROOD DROP AND THE MESSAGE WAS THERE
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  6. October 10th, 2003, 03:39 AM #6
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    True, the message really got across in this drop, shit was mos def hot. Keep it up and if you could PLEASE peep my new post " Wondering mind"...it would be most appreciated, 1
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  7. October 10th, 2003, 10:57 AM #7
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    thanx, kinda not feeling the one liner replys lol

    upping this piece
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  8. October 10th, 2003, 12:09 PM #8
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    ok, flow was hot, structure was good, vocab was good, multies, again good...overall all it was a hot drop...everything was on point...nothing really bad to say about it...keep dropping...

    o yea, if you get a chance. could you peep my latest open mic. i could use some more feedback.
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  9. October 10th, 2003, 04:52 PM #9
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    its iight to me, wasnt really feeling the whole concept, flow was on point, vocab was there, just aint feelin the concept
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  10. October 10th, 2003, 05:22 PM #10
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    lol k

    uppin
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  11. October 10th, 2003, 05:36 PM #11
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    nice
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  12. October 10th, 2003, 06:20 PM #12
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    shit was tight...
    short and sweet... maybe a bit too short... lol...
    vocab was strong here dawg... no doubt...
    strong, yet understandable...
    flow was descent... it could have been a bit better...

    I'm feeling your style man.... keep that shit coming...

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  13. October 10th, 2003, 06:37 PM #13
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    thanx, uppin though
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  14. October 10th, 2003, 06:43 PM #14
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    This Was Real Nice, Really Got A Message Across
    Had Vocab, Structured Flow, It Was Really On Point
    I Like The Significance Of It Though, Keep It Up
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  15. October 11th, 2003, 01:01 AM #15
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    hey nice drop yo keep elevatin and postin i look forward to readin more
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