10 Lines
You Spit First
No D.r
no crew
no free post
no bitin
no bullshit
no recyclin
no vote swaying
check in b4 u spit
Intuit
Calda Merda
10 Lines
You Spit First
No D.r
no crew
no free post
no bitin
no bullshit
no recyclin
no vote swaying
check in b4 u spit
My Check In.. waitin For You
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checkin in. but yo whens it due and y do i gotta write 100 characters fro my post to go up????????????????????????????
30 minutes its due..
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quick key blah!!
Pullin punches swift cant say this kid aint fuckin deservin it/
shit, how can i pull a punch on a name so wack..... u already "merda" it/
And i agree "What was once fallen, shall rise again" so no need to be trippin/
Damn i was talkin bout his career while he was thinkin bout when the viagra kick in/
Gotta keep tellin urself thinkin tough thoughts dont make u into a killer/
Shit we aint even at christmas yet and his verse is "stockin filler"/
its on u fool, even ur homies disrespectin u cos they know u rhyme weak/
the only reason this bitch came face to face with me is cos he had to turn the other cheak/
So ill admit kid u caused me some problems in a mild way/
WTF am i sayin "junior productions" damn right......this was childs play/
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Whats Funny To Me.. Is That You Called That A Quick Key -
Lets See, 30 Minutes? Started At 11:44 N' Posted At 12:53! -
You Wanna Merkin.. Allow Me To Show You A Key -
I'd Throw In A User Name Diss.. But I Dont Even Know What It Means -
Or Thats What It Seems.. I Dont See Any Talent In-You-Kid -
'specially Wit That Shit You Spit.. You SUCK ! But Thats Gettin To "InTuIt" -
Skills? I Think You Need To Order Them N' Get You Sum -
Dissin Crews? Ure Jealous Cuz You Suck To Much To Get In One -
To See That Weak Shit.. To Me, Its Funny -
How I Can Beat Your Hour Shit, In Less Than Twenty -
WHAT !?
LOL aight cool i thought u might pick up on that shit. I actually did have shit to do tho and when i came back i wrote it in about 25 mins. but nice spot.
celda merda had this... on...
punches personals enjoyment n everything...
other cat was ight...need structure and better flow...
had some ight punches...but no chance
celda ripped it from the beggining
celda... will ya come 2 my crew me n dezyir headin...
newb. rec.... u may not be a newb but u only got 136 post...
so go check it out...i want u in
me n dez...r just elevatin the future of rb
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PUNCHES
SUSTAINMENT
FLOW
STRUCTURE
METAS
VOCAB..........ALL = CALDA
ETC............THIS BATTLE WAS EASY........SORRY INTUIT BUT YA GOT MERKED
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82725
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Doubt Calda got this his verse was better overall and his punches were straight for Int
While Intuit some punches he dropped were senseless and he was better verse wise but he had no big metas for Calda that i could relate to or Feel
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ok seen but i was dissin his sig and his name which was the only info i got on him............................................... ..........................................
Hit It Up N' I Will Hit Yours
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that was a TIGHT line. won it for ya dog. all yo verses are pretty tight. otha cat had nothin. no flow, no punches, no multis, not even a personal. it seemed like for a second you were dissin urself, but i kept readin and it made sense. so good battle dogOriginally posted by Calda Merda
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[I] Whats Funny To Me.. Is That You Called That A Quick Key -
Lets See, 30 Minutes? Started At 11:44 N' Posted At 12:53! -
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