LM vs MC Bizkit

[LM]

Any length
No d/r and stuff
Due 2morrow (10/10/03)
All votes must be explained


Here's my verse:

I'm gonna spit first to provide you with some inspiration/
Even if you copied my verse you'd be in a completely different dimension/
You see, your not as talented as me and you never will be/
To get in the same room as me you need an entrance fee/
And just coz you live in the same city as me dont think you can come visitin me/
I dont need herbs near my house, crawlin about like a woodlouse/
I'll stamp on you bitch, trap you and keep you as a pet like a fuckin field mouse/
Maybe it'll benefit you if i lock you in a cage/
Coz then you'll build up with rage, then all you gotta do is put in on a page/
But at the moment you'd struggle battlin someone half your age/
See i know what i'm doin with this verse/
I'm usin words and flow to put you under a curse/
I'll make you feel so small you can fit in your moms purse/
Speakin of your mom, tell her she looks great dressed as a nurse/
Haha, hey yo. In this battle i've just played with you/
But if you want round two then that's when i'll really blaze at you/.



REMEMBER dead line 2morrow

[MC Bizkit]

well well well arnt we very calm
rappin like a bitch with a little cut on her arm
you see what you dont know is you dont affect me
but you really pissin me off to a new degree
so im gonna give you to the count of 3
to log out, log off and get off RB
coz if you dont im gonna add another missin guy
and im gonna be laughin about it when im high
and if you want to bring my family in to this thats fine
but when you get home ask your mum if your mine

[LM]

Good verse man. That was pretty cool. Uppin for votes............................................. .......................

[MC Bizkit]

thanx................ all freestyle...............so are we gonna do this again some time????????????

[LM]

Like i said I'm up for round two some time. I'll look forward to it................................................ ..............................................

[Prince Adem]

LM took this hands down. Even though he still needs to elevate, hes getting better, but MC Bizkit has some SERIOUS problems. Half your verse doesnt even make sense mate. And no, its not a freestyle, its a rap battle. So this is gonna be on your record mate. Elevevate and get better, thats all I can tell you.

Flow = LM
Lyrics = LM
Punches = LM (even though both were weak)

vote = LM

[LM]

Thanks man. I appreciate it. I'm glad to see that you think i'm improvin.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[LM]

Can we get some more votes in here please............................................ .................................

[LM]

C'mon people don't sleep on this. Lets get some more votes in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[El Chapo]

No need for Explanation MCB verse was newbiesh and beginneers Lm came harder overall and everything
Vote=Lm

[LM]

Thanks. Finaly we got more than one vote on this. Thanks for votin.
Peace!!!

I hate the 100 character shit, blahblahblahblahblah

[LM]

This is my last uppin for votes so please don't sleep on this battle. Get this battle finished with and vote.
Thanks

[*MoF*]

aight LM took this cuz of more punches.....sum better verses.....

u both have to be more creative.....then it will be harder and the delivery would be better....

vote: LM

i need honest votes on my battles.....please look at it!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81852

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=78934

thanks, peace!

[LM]

Ok so i was wrong. I have one more uppin left so here it is....uppin for votes............................................. .

[LM]

*MoF* thanks for the vote. It's appreciated. I'll check out your battles too and vote honestly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Peace!!!