JoeBoston (0-2) vs. Skepto (0-2) Joe

[Token]

LLL Season 15, Week 3

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm PST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
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[Joe Boston]

check

[Joe Boston]

Fuck it going 10

Im swimming in ur girls pussy breaking away at the particles
Only time she be handling Ske Balls is at the yearly carnival
This Bronco Buck in a battle cuz dudes be riding him Cowgirl Reversal
Got Dreams of Beatin Joe "I Doubt it" like Deans Home Furniture Commercials
After i take this W he'll make a Skeptical about it but ill end all Controversy
I dont even need to torture the french the way i got em begging for the L sayin Merci
Dont fuck with Joe ill be quick to step foot on ur doormat
This kid aint hard Constucting a Crew with gay YMCA members rocking a toolbelt and hardhat
This battle wont go ur way no matter how many Bumps u Post
I'll throw punches that will Hospitalize TO and im not talking a Pill Overdose

[Joe Boston]

No Show???

[The Archetype]

Im swimming in ur girls pussy breaking away at the particles
Only time she be handling Ske Balls is at the yearly carnival
not bad...
This Bronco Buck in a battle cuz dudes be riding him Cowgirl Reversal
Got Dreams of Beatin Joe "I Doubt it" like Deans Home Furniture Commercials
no clue what Deans is... lmao... but at face value, the set up doesn't work with the punch... completely different...
After i take this W he'll make a Skeptical about it but ill end all Controversy
I dont even need to torture the french the way i got em begging for the L sayin Merci
Make a skeptical is nonsense... the french part seems like a random closer... i see where you were trying to go, but it doesn't really flesh out...
Dont fuck with Joe ill be quick to step foot on ur doormat
This kid aint hard Constucting a Crew with gay YMCA members rocking a toolbelt and hardhat
this was better... bit of a wording issue cuz the crew is Construct and not Constructing... but not bad...
This battle wont go ur way no matter how many Bumps u Post
I'll throw punches that will Hospitalize TO and im not talking a Pill Overdose
not bad... bit wordy... but not bad...

overall, you're improving a lot...

[Aye Wun]

I'll edit my vote [here]