severe lyrics Vs OLI_DOGG(MUST SEE)

[severe lyrics]

uppin(2).......................................... ...........................................
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[Lethargic]

OLI took this...no doubt about it. Neither verse had any REALLY hard hitting punches. OLI threw a lot more though. Structure wasn't bad from both. Both had somewhat choppy flows. You guys are close to each others level...so it was a good battle in that aspect.

Vote ~ OLI_DOGG

Elevate and keep it up.

[nolonger]

ITE LETHARGIC THX MAN PM ME 4 A BATTLKE CUS WE NEED 2 DO DIS............................................... .................................................. ...............PZ

[nolonger]

ITE UPPIN (5) LST 1 PLZ PLZ VOTE ON DIS DNT LET IT DIE PLZ..................................THX YALL.............................................. ....PZ

[pedro nok]

I think oli took this, sorry severe but he was a litttlt too good for you, although you wasn't brilliant oli


Flow=oli
punches=oli
Structure=oli


close shit but oli dogg wins

hit this up with an honest vote, and If svere gonna vote, don't beef with me, I don't wa\nt beef, just elavate a little and you'll be aiiiight

[nolonger]

THX MAN............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ................................PZ

[menolin]

severe
i'll tell u now i got the magic stick like harry potter and his magic wand
ur a fake, like a black girl thats a natural blonde
~second line made me laff 5/10~

u need to elevate, step ur rhymes up a notch
ur whiter then those dudes on malibus most wanted....B-Yatch
~u need to elevate 3/10~

ur verses are like lil kids nersery rhymes bout the a-b-c's
i rhyme better then eminem, and he rocs the mic with E's (eaze)
~nursery ryhmes line are played, 3/10~

like my lyrics were in brail, the way people feal-my-rhymes
people think ur a jealous fishermen the way u wanna steal-my-lines
~nice line better than the rest of ya verse, 7/10~

Oli dog:
ok severe lyrics im gna injure you *severly*,
ill pounce with my lyrics boy, so you better fuckin *fear me*,
~not the best of openers 5/10~

ill spit my lynes twice, so i make sure you fuckin *hear me*,
after i finnish my rap i sign it of, with im "sorry i beat you" and i meen that *sincerly*,
~aiight 5/10~

this peadophile likes to do stupid shit, like merkin lil *kids*(check profile),
he takes them home and, produces them in his porno *vids*,
~lol, nice personal 7/10~

*syke*, fuck that im up for a *fight*,
oh and *right*, i dont throw punches ill just hit you, on the *mike*(mic).
~nah 3/10~

Severe:18/20
Oli:20/20


severe: u need to elevate, jus keep battlin an doin wat ya doin, try to come up wit lines that arent played dawg, like 'nursery ryhmes' lines.

Oli:i seen some of ur other battles, that are aiight, this is probs ur weakest, u need to work on ur openers an finishers.


hit this up wen ya hav a chance plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84191