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No D.R
No Crew
No Bitin
No Freepost
No Recycling
No Pre Writes
No Bullshit
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You Spit First
15-20.. Check In
Before You Spit
Nitemarre
Calda Merda
12 Lines
No Feedin
No D.R
No Crew
No Bitin
No Freepost
No Recycling
No Pre Writes
No Bullshit
Explain Votes
You Spit First
15-20.. Check In
Before You Spit
Checkin in....15-20min............................................. .......
*The Dark Choir*
He's Comin.............
He's Comin..............
He's Comin.......................
Lol U Do That
Check In.....
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It's begun....
Come and get "laid to rest" like a "insensitive husband"
You gon be C. Murdered, you didn't think I be bustin?
Dont start no "fussin" cuz I be whoopin dat tail/
My lyrics like "evil spirits", twist ya life into "hell"/
I fist yo girl, she dont tell cuz she be lovin this nigga/
I blow bullets that make dat ass "jump around" like "tigga"/
I'm ahead of my time you can just gimmie the title/
Insane but I dont lie 'do, questionably homicidle/
It's yo worst Nitemarre, fucka, it's gon' be sick and scarry/
My fire just flows from me so gon' get yo' dictionary/
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Ight Tough Guy..
Keyin My Shit Now..
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NiteMarre : I'm Comin
NiteMarre : I'm Comin
NiteMarre : I'm Comin
NiteMarre : I'm Comin
** Nite Gets Suddenly Smacked In The Head Wit A Brick **
Calda Merda : God Your Gay ...
[I] Your Pathetic.. Bite From You? No1 Would Ever Stop To Use It -
Its Useless.. Ya Dark And Suck Ass.. Like Gothic Music -
Make The Excuses, This Kat Will Curse N' Fall -
I Suck? Coming From A Guy Who Used "C.Murdered" As A Personal? -
Damn Your A Joke, Like Your Chances To Bomb Me -
Like You Cast A Bad Spell On Yourself And Missed It On Me -
This Kid talkes Hard Durin The Day.. With The Light Bright -
Only Time He's A NiteMarre, Is When He Turns Off His Night Light -
Sucks Right ? I'd Laugh To See You Stack A Friend -
And Laugh Even Harder To See If You Ever Rap Again - [/B]
Hmmm...yeah...upppin fo the votes
Even you said no feedin though...seemed like some good examples of feedin but thats straight..............................
yo my bad.. just got caught up in it
if i could edit that shit i would, but i
aint gotta 100 posts.. tho my bad mayne
Its straight lez just get some votes on this piece............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................
Your Pathetic.. Bite From You? No1 Would Ever Stop To Use It -
Its Useless.. Ya Dark And Suck Ass.. Like Gothic Music -
Make The Excuses, This Kat Will Curse N' Fall -
I Suck? Coming From A Guy Who Used "C.Murdered" As A Personal? -
Damn Your A Joke, Like Your Chances To Bomb Me -
Like You Cast A Bad Spell On Yourself And Missed It On Me -
This Kid talkes Hard Durin The Day.. With The Light Bright -
Only Time He's A NiteMarre, Is When He Turns Off His Night Light -
Sucks Right ? I'd Laugh To See You Stack A Friend -
And Laugh Even Harder To See If You Ever Rap Again
^^^^^^^ YOU TOOK IT!
Multis- Cala Merda!
Punches-Cala merda!
structure-Nitemarre
Vocab-Nitemarre
Metaz-Cala Merda!
I was feelin Merda!
well
not much of a battle
keep elevatin'
VOTE=Cala Merda!
QueenStyle
Nite - You have good structure. Your flow is okay. You're punches are very weak though. You could work on your flow a little bit and you definitely need to work on your punches. Even keepin your flow the way it is, if you just up the power behind your punches, you could rack up a lot of wins.
Calda - Very nice verse man. I'd almost be tempted to ask you what your alias is. If you are a new member, it's nice to have another decent person on the site. They're always welcome. You had some nice punches with good wordplay and a pretty good flow to it. Very nice verse.
Up your level and elevate Nite....Calda, just keep workin on gettin better. After you get a few more wins under your belt...request permission to enter into the LLL. You keep those type of verses up and you could probably make it in. Good battle...
Vote ~ Calda
Please hit this up with honest votes(Even if you can't poll):
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Thanks Appreciate It..
No Alias Man
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Multis- Cala Merda!
Punches-Cala merda!
structure-Nitemarre
Vocab-Nitemarre
Metaz-Cala Merda!
killed it.......1
I aint mad at all i am jus bothered
I'll get honest for real, i aint been the best father
Like...Toys R Us, Chuckie Cheese...
You know a lil boy grow up wit these needs
New Years and Christmas, even the birthday
At least bring the nigga to his school on his first day
I cant believe it, this is the same way i was treated
So maybe its history repeated
-Joe Budden
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