Inkwell VS Da_Renegade

[Da_Renegade]

10 lines max
all rule applies
no unexplained votes, i dont wanna see no 1-3 lines shit

spit first


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[Inkwell]

Your punches couldn’t be shocking if you used metal gloves to hit electric circuits..
You aint ill, you’ve been lied to ever since ya moms adopted you from the circus..
Your lone fan bops his head to your shit coz he’s an epileptic with a neck twitch..
You think you’re a vet yet you win every poll for title of ‘least ever respected’..
renegade's begging for attention without apprehension but can only get a mention..
By battlin' and feeling the tension - later he’ll be asking for redemption..
renegade you should’ve shown respect and maybe you could’ve avoided death..
Coz dissing IW is like throwin oxygen into the garbage - a ‘waste of breath’ ..
Copy and Paste my threat into your folder and try and learn from this loss..
Smack you in the face and break so many teeth you’ll be using rope to floss..

quik keystyle were u at dawg

[Inkwell]

come on where this no showing bitch at...........................
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[Da_Renegade]

haha my b, i forgot all about dis battle keying now


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[Inkwell]

o iight thas koo hurry up tho i keyed that up pretty quick its not that hard lets go dawg...........

[Da_Renegade]

I'm not the only one being lied to, understand? ask yer fam (family)|
Better check for a prostate gland cuz you aint really a man|
Pop ya skull, snatch ya brain, throw it out da window, you feelin me?|
Now he forgot his "age and place" like he don "lost his memory"|
(get it? & see his profile)
'Least you can "share your thoughts" wit others when I 'blew off your dome|
'N' don' wurr 'bout 'house chores', I already 'cleaned out your home'|
Red Bull gives you wings? so does the chainsaw| This man's soft
Soon as I get on his block watch him make like a 'plane' and 'take off'|
Put you in da 'hearse' with 'biceps' cut off so you can 'ride wit ya guns up'|
Your block couldn't feel your 'heat' if you 'vamp rollin on da 'floor' while da 'suns up'|


btw killer verse, u might even get this one

good shit, liked ur verse

[gotaloveforrap]

aight yall this wasnt a bad battle, but ima have to give this to inkwell...heres my breakdown....

structure-tie
flow-ink
wordplay-renegade
vocab-tie
punches-ink
personal-ink
opener-ink
closer-renegade
overall-ink

props to the both of ya, but ima give this to inkwell, both of u should keep at it cause u got mad ability.

peace......

[Da_Renegade]

ight kool kool uppin this for more votes

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[Da_Renegade]

uppin dis fo more votes


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[Da_Renegade]

come on ppl, dont sleep on this battle


uppin

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