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Thread: What The Future Will Bring...FT. WORD~PERFECT

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    Otherwordz
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    What The Future Will Bring...FT. WORD~PERFECT

    WORD~PERFECT:

    What will the future hold? Try this dick-
    Fantacy will be reality we’ll be living most sci fi flicks.
    The quest for doe-wil equal to the thirst for show-
    Since we treat women like them their 9 to 5 will be hoe.
    Love will no longer exsist-we’d all be invoked by Satanist exorcist.
    Callen himself a pope, man will assassinate ghandi-breath calmly…
    Im not a devil worshipper honestly-
    but what you gonna do when your Masonic seal~
    on your dollar bill~ is replaced with illuminattis’?
    probably except it as slaves did falls religions-
    when they transported from the life they knew~
    to a life that’s a new~ dominion.
    A street government would invade parliament-
    The world would still crumble but we’d assault –
    the former senate screaming that it was their fault.
    That’s what happens when we get what we wanted-
    We realize we never wanted it and leave the dream discarted.
    That’s the way it was before so it will be in the next years-
    Until the president confesses he was the chief leading us down the trail of tears.
    Micro chips_ installed in our retena slips.
    Life has more riddles then the sphinx-
    What are you gonna do when you hack THE BEAST computers website blink-
    And realize that your name is on its’ links-or we been living in the matrix?
    I believe at a penny for thoughts If I jot my beliefs to page….
    It would take 6,000 idea an hour to die from minumum wage.
    so what does the future hold?
    anothe ice age as cold as the north pole.
    technology evolves_ enough not to need man so we disolve.
    another holocaust-humens clones firying molitoff.
    how will it end you tell me in hell after i fell from my own pain.
    and welcome things to come with open arms and open veins

    King of Thievez:

    soakin' brainz in laboratoriez for cloning projects...
    mind control in progress...unidentified floating objects...
    computers and clonez...
    future dronez that won't hesitate to shoot at ya home...
    Rugerz that's chrome still will put 2 in ya dome...
    and robotic leechez will suck out all the fluidz you own...
    government overpowered by the cyborgz they build...
    blood spilled...on the street from all the people they killed...
    my memory'z short... a giant plasma ball is the energy source...
    we hunt prey with gamma rays...fuck these 21st century sports...
    attack of the clonez...dronez try to capture the throne...
    grown men get kidnapped from they homez...
    as robots try to snack on they bonez...
    the government liez but we don't know the reason...
    no more seasonz...earth stayz hot cause of ozone depletion...
    global heatin' melts icebergz causing the ocean to deepen...
    humanz in space...
    the moon is placed in the spot that we flew to when we raced...
    lunar chase...carz are out...rocketships are what we use in they place...
    satillite probez...
    scatter across the globe in hopez that Saturn might show...
    Orian'z belt has been unbuckled in hopes that an orbital pattern might glow...
    cyborg cops and test tube babies...the most gruesome of thingz...
    false prophets predict apoclypse...this is what the future will bring...
    Last edited by Otherwordz; October 2nd, 2003 at 07:28 AM

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    N.D.eva
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    some ill shit dawgs, thought ya flow way really good, word play good, structure good, SHIT man it was all fuckin good, ya make a tight team, keep the lyrics flowin..............HOLLA!!!!

    check my latest thread in open mic, if ya got time, its only the first verse the rest is on its way......

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    thnks pop that meant alot twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    yeah...I know we make a dope team...WORD~P is my prostitute...

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    I really felt King's flow, i got a little repetitive though and near the end the structure loosened... anyway the lines were pretty much bang on throughout the verse...

    On the other hand i don't mean to hate but....

    WP I could not get into this verse of yours.... I don't see where some of the rhymes came from maybe i need to hear you say it... oh well tighten it up and learn some structure from King and you will get better....

    {Peace}
    Hence Forward

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    sLiCaD3n'u
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    Yo' you aint playin kid...WORD-P and yurself make an excellent team!!!!!!
    I was feelin W.P.'s verse da most when he said...
    "I believe at a penny for thoughts If I jot my beliefs to page….
    It would take 6,000 idea an hour to die from minumum wage."
    In verse I was feelin dat shyt when he said...
    "humanz in space...
    the moon is placed in the spot that we flew to when we raced...
    lunar chase...carz are out...rocketships are what we use in they place..."


    Good read stay togetha yah!!!!!!

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    Yeah this was a good piece, it was worth the read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece, good vocab, and the content was good, structure was good as well, overall id say it was a good piece, keep dropping.

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    ...> Word Up...Was Good <....


    Wack INtro Tho:


    What will the future hold? Try this dick-
    Fantacy will be reality we’ll be living most sci fi flicks.

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    that's some futuristic shit, good drop you guys. It was well structured, it has good wordplay and vocab. It was deep. You guys did good.
    we are what we are, what we never think we are.

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    ^^^thank you sweetie...and thank the rest of y'all too...but Dirty Sally is my future wifey...

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    Dope up..
    Keep it together.

    ~G FuNK

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    ^^^thanks...I guess...

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    Otherwordz
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    uppin'...

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    KING SHEIS ALREADY MY WIFE SO BOUNCE SON THAT WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU RAP WITH A KID AHEAD OF HIS TIME EVERY THING HE LIVES IS HIS CURRENT FUTURE SO SHE IS MINE YOU JUST MIME HER IN SHADOW PUPPET GIVING YOU BRAINS...LOL
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    ^^^lol...no...

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