Female Kat!

[MiZzLinda]

a lot of MCs talk like they wanna be me
so imma clear this board like it was a Ouija
yes Linda is 5'2 but what you gonna do?
im no tailor but ill cut any measurement foo
i spit that fire so i dont need a cigarette
givin you lung cancer see im the bigger threat
yes imma female kat but i don't hang with pussys
i got dawgs chasin' me so you better not push me
a pretty mouth that you would love to stuff
but i know its a "small thang" - MiZz is callin the bluff
you can call me the badass version of Tombraider
with an ego that is bigger than the moon playa
a virgin on this site so try poppin' this cherry
question is...whos gonna end up bloody like Mary
a tight lil body thats bangin' like loaded pistols
but you aint gettin any till im givin those love signals


PS: fuck hatin ass foos like Pharoahe Spanjche, i dont need to hear your bitching. they need to recruit better admins or this site is gonna die :\

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/piece-my-soul-456981/index.html?p=8222304#post8222304

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/only-dream-455118/index.html?p=8222301#post8222301

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/rk-assassin-chronicles-p8222297/index.html#post8222297

[Nohbody]

kind of ironic actually. . after reading the feed you gave to one of my verses, i came into this thinking "well, since this chick is so critical of flows and metaphors, she must have a really good grasp on incorporating these types of transitions into her work . . . "

its was actually quite opposite.

your flow, is actually pretty basic. No use of internal rime schemes, no multis in sight. . the attempt at word play was very elementary, the ideas were thin and repugnant

And just some advice, stop trying to sound tough. Dont get offended by that, i only say this because nobody is going to take it serious no matter how tough you might be. .

"Linda is 5'2 but what you gonna do?"
"see im the bigger threat"
"female kat but i don't hang with pussys"
"you better not push me"
"whos gonna end up bloody like Mary"

none of it is believable.

You are on the level of a novice. The one thing you have going is at least you can manage a structured format . . . not much going on in the content. . but its structured

You attempt wordplay, its just not very good, its extremely obvious and predictable

you should try digging a little deeper as your contents repetitiveness simply amounts to alot of self gloating and arrogance that the lyrics fail to back up

keep elevating

[MiZzLinda]

wow, very detailed critique! thanks youuu. i was actually kinda pissed off so a lot of it was my ego talking :]

[Express'on]

This is a ok...starter piece...but any piece imo that uses foo'...isnt going to b very deep nor creative...but just stating this critique simply; this was basically rhyming and a lil swag nothing more can be drawn from this...keep writing

[Extinctor Draconis]

PS: fuck hatin ass foos like Pharoahe Spanjche, i dont need to hear your bitching. they need to recruit better admins or this site is gonna die :\

no one's hating. It's just that, on this site, we encourage our members to leave proper feedback, so that others can progress in their writing.


btw url's are not html code, imbecile.

if you have any questions, feel free to message me.