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Thread: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

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    Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    Check
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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    hey u didn't include the stipulations i'm not contractually obligated to check in for this battle until the terms of our agreement are explained in detail
    GO FOR BROKE

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    check
    GO FOR BROKE

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    Mister Write = Storyteller

    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Write View Post
    Man I'm here got caught up with my newborn son got my punch ready man damn just noticed I didn't check in

    Sorry verb... Been at the hospital with minimal Internet time man to do anything

    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Write View Post
    Yea man my third son but I'm still able to drop shut just need to get the time frame down cause I'm like 4 other leagues and I am running another league on the other site plus admining as well psh... Plate is full

    props on the newborn, but it kinda seems the kid's causin' a problem
    cuz admit it, ur real bundle of joy..is the 5 leagues & that admin job ur involved in
    surprised ur able to drop wit an infant & all, but it prolly hurts to picture it
    so instead of signin' out of leagues, u should just sign out of his birth certificate
    22 yrs old wit at least 3 mouths to feed & his sons hardly get mentioned
    if Mr.'s plate is full, it means his poor family hungry as shit & starved for attention
    it's awful sad truly, left the hospital then logged in tryin' to get off of dad duty
    now the only time he'll see Baby Boy again, is when he's watchin' that movie
    between workin' & text battlin' how's he keep his youngin's close..
    ..when every night at Bedtime, Stories never around to read them one of those?
    the children need a father figure to watch them & ur girl hesitates to choose u
    so she gave the job to Mrs. Doubtfire, cuz she got a stronger resume than u do
    ur respected by voters bc of ur medals, plus ur classy & the type that's shy
    after I rape the shit up out u, they'll say it couldn't of happened to a nicer guy
    ur opinions are fuckin' horrible & if u say anymore I might snap
    remember the dumb faggot who said I sucked? well, here's the Story behind that
    GO FOR BROKE

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    I gave you a ton of personals for a creativity purpose,
    THAT 16 is all you came with just shows your weak and worthless.
    Hammered and pressed this coffin case in publicity,
    Is not much of secrecy cause lance bass wants to Ryan seacrest B.
    No one rhymes the sickest but we all have some gay jokes,
    But with him being broke...
    ... he can't afford nothing better except a gay croaked.
    He is illiterate with not much sense going through,
    Truly wishes to be a bitch to gain a chance to double his IQ.
    He aint no champ talkin bout he a 1-2 battler, dude
    Check ya crew app.  NOBODY seems to wants YOU!

    Quote Originally Posted by BROKE LESNAR View Post
    I can't hold this feelings in anymorehttp://i55.tinypic.com/29o4j79.jpg
    On NC you expressed some love for blue bayou homie you SICK,
    So let blues balls tap ya chin while you stroke clean tims dick!
    Talk all that shit it just helps roast ya own teeth,
    Resembles Ben Wallace not color but strength- they post weak.
    Ya rhymes be nasty yes cause they a trashy disgrace freak!
    Only time he drops texts worth a read... He's holding the space key.

    Weak
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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    Told you I don't text anymore lol..

    I'll edit in my links
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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    props on the newborn, but it kinda seems the kid's causin' a problem
    cuz admit it, ur real bundle of joy..is the 5 leagues & that admin job ur involved in

    surprised ur able to drop wit an infant & all, but it prolly hurts to picture it
    so instead of signin' out of leagues, u should just sign out of his birth certificate
    22 yrs old wit at least 3 mouths to feed & his sons hardly get mentioned
    if Mr.'s plate is full, it means his poor family hungry as shit & starved for attention
    between workin' & text battlin' how's he keep his youngin's close..
    ..when every night at Bedtime, Stories never around to read them one of those?




    vs.


    notta





    very-one sided, story dropped some bland unfunny shit. broke..
    ..had a few funny personals, and some solid creativity
    easily winning this over for him. no hate to story..
    ..but that verse was very weak overall.



    broke wins.

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    props on the newborn, but it kinda seems the kid's causin' a problem
    cuz admit it, ur real bundle of joy..is the 5 leagues & that admin job ur involved in

    surprised ur able to drop wit an infant & all, but it prolly hurts to picture it
    so instead of signin' out of leagues, u should just sign out of his birth certificate
    22 yrs old wit at least 3 mouths to feed & his sons hardly get mentioned
    if Mr.'s plate is full, it means his poor family hungry as shit & starved for attention
    between workin' & text battlin' how's he keep his youngin's close..
    ..when every night at Bedtime, Stories never around to read them one of those?




    vs.


    notta





    very-one sided, story dropped some bland unfunny shit. broke..
    ..had a few funny personals, and some solid creativity
    easily winning this over for him. no hate to story..
    ..but that verse was very weak overall.



    broke wins.

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    props on the newborn, but it kinda seems the kid's causin' a problem
    cuz admit it, ur real bundle of joy..is the 5 leagues & that admin job ur involved in
    surprised ur able to drop wit an infant & all, but it prolly hurts to picture it
    so instead of signin' out of leagues, u should just sign out of his birth certificate
    22 yrs old wit at least 3 mouths to feed & his sons hardly get mentioned
    if Mr.'s plate is full, it means his poor family hungry as shit & starved for attention
    it's awful sad truly, left the hospital then logged in tryin' to get off of dad duty
    now the only time he'll see Baby Boy again, is when he's watchin' that movie
    between workin' & text battlin' how's he keep his youngin's close..
    ..when every night at Bedtime, Stories never around to read them one of those?
    the children need a father figure to watch them & ur girl hesitates to choose u
    so she gave the job to Mrs. Doubtfire, cuz she got a stronger resume than u do
    ur respected by voters bc of ur medals, plus ur classy & the type that's shy
    after I rape the shit up out u, they'll say it couldn't of happened to a nicer guy
    ur opinions are fuckin' horrible & if u say anymore I might snap
    remember the dumb faggot who said I sucked? well, here's the Story behind that

    vs.

    Nothin'

    This was the most one-sided battle I've ever read. Broke went HAM on a bitch. That was one of the most solid/personal FL verses I've read in a long-ass time. Props homie. Storyteller, I thought you had this shit in the bag before it started. You definitely underestimated Broke but honestly I would've done the same damn thing, he surprised the fuck outta me with that shit.

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    Swaying is not allowed.
    Warned.
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    Last edited by A.T.; July 9th, 2011 at 03:58 AM
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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    it's awful sad truly, left the hospital then logged in tryin' to get off of dad duty
    now the only time he'll see Baby Boy again, is when he's watchin' that movie
    between workin' & text battlin' how's he keep his youngin's close..
    ..when every night at Bedtime, Stories never around to read them one of those?
    the children need a father figure to watch them & ur girl hesitates to choose u
    so she gave the job to Mrs. Doubtfire, cuz she got a stronger resume than u do
    ur respected by voters bc of ur medals, plus ur classy & the type that's shy
    after I rape the shit up out u, they'll say it couldn't of happened to a nicer guy

    vs.

    nothing

    like others have said, this battle is completely one-sided. Broke went hard as hell in his piece and was consistant throughout. Story didn't have many punches at all to be honest. Broke came harder in this one.

    v - broke

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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

    props on the newborn, but it kinda seems the kid's causin' a problem
    cuz admit it, ur real bundle of joy..is the 5 leagues & that admin job ur involved in
    surprised ur able to drop wit an infant & all, but it prolly hurts to picture it
    so instead of signin' out of leagues, u should just sign out of his birth certificate
    22 yrs old wit at least 3 mouths to feed & his sons hardly get mentioned
    if Mr.'s plate is full, it means his poor family hungry as shit & starved for attention
    between workin' & text battlin' how's he keep his youngin's close..
    ..when every night at Bedtime, Stories never around to read them one of those?
    ur opinions are fuckin' horrible & if u say anymore I might snap
    remember the dumb faggot who said I sucked? well, here's the Story behind that

    vs.

    not much at all

    it's obvious write hasn't text battled in a while, all he had were attempts at punches, nothing really hit. broke had a comical verse, that had some very solid connections. props.

    V/ broke lesnar
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    Re: Broke Lesnar Vs. Storyteller

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