Front Lines Chat

[Joe Boston]

o ty arch

[The Archetype]

im just fucking around man all of sudden my punch aint good in the 1-2 league agaisnt him some motherfuckers dont get creativity agaisnt a hose(hoes)wordplay yall can opt me the fuck outta that league

creative doesn't equal good... signing out cuz you lost won't help you get better... problem is you're using similies... it's EXTREMELY hard to make a punch seem hard when you use "you're ________ like _______" use metaphors instead... that's the problem w/ a lot of you... similies = weak as fuck 99% of the time... if you read through LLL, you'll hardly ever see them...

[A.T.]

creative doesn't equal good... signing out cuz you lost won't help you get better... problem is you're using similies... it's EXTREMELY hard to make a punch seem hard when you use "you're ________ like _______" use metaphors instead... that's the problem w/ a lot of you... similies = weak as fuck 99% of the time... if you read through LLL, you'll hardly ever see them...

^ this

[Joe Boston]

i guess people got their diffrent styles n opinions then

[A.T.]

Yes... But I'd pick a played punch that was worded good over a new concept that involves acronyms of names.

J is for jackass, o is for only ... Fucking blah.

Those types of punches NEVER hit hard

[The Archetype]

it's a wording thing... similies come off passive... you're just comparing someone to something... if i say you're soft like clouds and kittens, it's just a comparison... now if i say you're cloud and kitten soft, it's more aggressive cuz i'm stating you're the epitome of being soft, not just comparable to it...

[The Archetype]

Yes... But I'd pick a played punch that was worded good over a new concept that involves acronyms of names.

J is for jackass, o is for only ... Fucking blah.

Those types of punches NEVER hit hard

true... i'm not a fat of pulling a random syllable out... i can take a J or a Joe or a Boss maybe even a 'ton... but flipping B or ost or something is corny...

[Joe Boston]

yeah i getchu man A is for Austistic T is for tool

[The Archetype]

yeah i getchu man A is for Austistic T is for tool

while we're on the subject, that's not a name flip either... it's just subbing shit in... there was a guy on here named Compa... he'd get bars thrown at him like

I don't see him as Compa-tititon

that's not a name flip... lmao... i did some shit like

So if I'm seeing Competition... it's just him trying to get a restraining order

that's a nameflip... it takes his name and has a double meaning

[A.T.]

On that note, I'm outta till tonight. Y'all have fun

[Joe Boston]

aight cool

[Rapstyles]

Peace out AT

Ya dumb bitch

jk lol

[#PrimeTime]

anyone wanna do an OM collab?

[Joe Boston]

im down jeff send me a topic through pm

[Rhyme Schemes]

why swift is always online, use that one.