same here man i know i got the fucking concepts then u lay it down and then it comes out fucked up lol
same here man i know i got the fucking concepts then u lay it down and then it comes out fucked up lol
lol, the deliveries seem to be the hard aspect because afterall..thats how ur presenting the punch, right? but ye, i hear you. helps to keep spittin it over and over (the idea) then the lil bit of creativity seems to come out and add a few things..also the filler is usually what stretches or prolongs the sting factor.
lol, keep replyin and i'll be able to vote soon.
just make friends with the people in here and your punches will go from wack to awesome in a few battles
Wording takes practice.
Ultimately, it's like a joke. You want to lead the reader to think one thing and then say something they aren't expecting.
A recent punch I used...
Ima hit your lungs like air, all body shots... Punch em till they tear,
So when I see you inhale... Remember who the fuck sent you there.
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lol, i hope not.Originally Posted by Rhyme Schemes
so ur telling me alot of dick ridin or buddy votes come up in battles huh?
thanks for lettin me reply to somethin now, lol..i can vote.
Well... You're welcome...
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concept is almost all the way there..
like saying when i see u inhale/in hell..saying u sent him there doesnt seem relevant with the inhale part..i get that u added it into the opener but its not all the way there g. that one part is a lil off but the punch itself is pretty solid.
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ma hit your lungs like air, all body shots... Punch em till they tear,
So when I see you inhale... Remember who the fuck sent you there.
clever punch here man ill ass setup too i get where ur coming from AT
That is called a flip, John J
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well..not you..that thanks was meant for joe.
lol, but thanks for the input i...guess?
lmao.
And here go the Newbs, cleaning they want to elevate...
Instead of paying attention and learning, they believe they know better...
*shoulda listened to Arch*
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lol i know its a flip...basically what i mean is this..that flip has to be used both ways right? connect on both levels so if u say
"so when i see u inhale..remember who sent u there"
its almost there, obviously i get the point..but like im saying the end wording isnt really matchin up..thats all A.T
lol.
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No... It doesn't.
There are multiple ways to formulate a punch... The way I provides is THE SIMPLEST WAY...
If y'all could do that ^ you'd be far better off than where you are now.
Simplicity helps for understanding. Smfh
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i am tryna elevate, really. and i wasnt ignorin what u said the only thing is i didnt see what u wrote previously..
so really all i seen was a "your welcome" post..lol
i get what u mean and i am workin on punches..as well as flow, creativity, and cuttin down the filler so bars smooth out more. im lookin for honest criticism..i hope its not like rhyme scheme said where friends are just votin for each other but who knows, i'll see how it goes..
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