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I know this guy well, lemme tell you a thang or too
this is what you get when an aborigine fucks a kangaroo
When's the last time something good came from australia?
everything after crocodile dundee has been a failure
huh? is really the only thing an audience can say
to your wack ass rhymes..
even your avatar has to drink the memories away
can someone explain to me how he has 25 victories?
his matches must have no showed or chugged listerine
this man and his mates play rugby naked, a painful sport
that's why his crew's penz are infekted with anal warts
i'll grab some links in a bit
Iron thinks he’s tough and thinks that he can spit fire,
But he sure ain’t livin a dream cause he’s makin men take off their attire
He needs braces the way his teeth and mouth are deformed
But his lyrics are droppin jaws the way he’s always making ‘em yawn
You will remain bein’ a make-believe character stuck inside a video game
You don’t stand a chance in real life when you’re throwin punches at minimal range
Live while you last, right now you have a lot of resemblance with Shaq
People wanna hang your jersey from the ceiling & you’re awfully fat
Light a match n blow some smoke, you’re a stoner, people mistaken you for a statue
That way haters ain’t comin near you so therefore they can’t match you
Uppin'
Opener: Both Lmao good
Closer: IT personal attempt good
Punches: IT
Personal: IT
Metas: Damn None????
Multis: N/A
Vocab: Vinzr
Wordplay: N/A
Flow: IT
Creativity: IT
Complexity: IT
Delivery: IT
V/IT
Just thought he came a little harder and had some funny personal jabs at his opponent.
I know this guy well, lemme tell you a thang or too
this is what you get when an aborigine fucks a kangaroo
weak opener. way too played.
When's the last time something good came from australia?
everything after crocodile dundee has been a failure
decent punch here
huh? is really the only thing an audience can say
to your wack ass rhymes..
even your avatar has to drink the memories away
decent punch
can someone explain to me how he has 25 victories?
his matches must have no showed or chugged listerine
not a great punch
this man and his mates play rugby naked, a painful sport
that's why his crew's penz are infekted with anal warts
oooh good closer, good punch
vs.
Iron thinks he’s tough and thinks that he can spit fire,
But he sure ain’t livin a dream cause he’s makin men take off their attire
wording was off but dece punch
He needs braces the way his teeth and mouth are deformed
But his lyrics are droppin jaws the way he’s always making ‘em yawn
ehh...sort of stretched here
You will remain bein’ a make-believe character stuck inside a video game
You don’t stand a chance in real life when you’re throwin punches at minimal range
good punch
Live while you last, right now you have a lot of resemblance with Shaq
People wanna hang your jersey from the ceiling & you’re awfully fat
This line won the battle
Light a match n blow some smoke, you’re a stoner, people mistaken you for a statue
That way haters ain’t comin near you so therefore they can’t match you
good closer.
Both had good, not quite great but good punches. Good battle here in my opinion. Tager you surprised me a bit because in my mind i thought you were going to spit weak lines, but you didn't. Tags you had some good punches, but I would suggest you work on your vocab a little more. Vinz you had some punches that were stretched but you had the best bar of the battle and I believe you came harder in this battle.
v - vinz
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I know this guy well, lemme tell you a thang or too
this is what you get when an aborigine fucks a kangaroo
weak opener. way too played.
When's the last time something good came from australia?
everything after crocodile dundee has been a failure
decent punch here
huh? is really the only thing an audience can say
to your wack ass rhymes..
even your avatar has to drink the memories away
decent punch
can someone explain to me how he has 25 victories?
his matches must have no showed or chugged listerine
not a great punch
this man and his mates play rugby naked, a painful sport
that's why his crew's penz are infekted with anal warts
oooh good closer, good punch
vs.
Iron thinks he’s tough and thinks that he can spit fire,
But he sure ain’t livin a dream cause he’s makin men take off their attire
wording was off but dece punch
He needs braces the way his teeth and mouth are deformed
But his lyrics are droppin jaws the way he’s always making ‘em yawn
ehh...sort of stretched here
You will remain bein’ a make-believe character stuck inside a video game
You don’t stand a chance in real life when you’re throwin punches at minimal range
good punch
Live while you last, right now you have a lot of resemblance with Shaq
People wanna hang your jersey from the ceiling & you’re awfully fat
This line won the battle
Light a match n blow some smoke, you’re a stoner, people mistaken you for a statue
That way haters ain’t comin near you so therefore they can’t match you
good closer.
Both had good, not quite great but good punches. Good battle here in my opinion. Tager you surprised me a bit because in my mind i thought you were going to spit weak lines, but you didn't. Tags you had some good punches, but I would suggest you work on your vocab a little more. Vinz you had some punches that were stretched but you had the best bar of the battle and I believe you came harder in this battle.
v - vinz
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opener - IT (personal punch wins over just punch)
flow - Vinzr
punches - IT
complexity - IT
personals - IT
vocab - Vinzr
wordplay/nameplay - N/A
metas - N/A
creativity - IT
closer - IT
IT came swingin more with harder punches, flow got choppy at times but the personals i think is what made u win this easily, cats wise. vinzr some shit didnt have to do with IT, felt too indirect. on top of that ur creativity was jus weak, didnt see anything that told me i should send my vote to u, jus bein honest.
vote - Tager
good drop IT, if i was to say anything its work on the flow for now.
elevate, both of u.
drop some feed when ya can tho, 1
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huh? is really the only thing an audience can say
to your wack ass rhymes..
even your avatar has to drink the memories away
vs
Live while you last, right now you have a lot of resemblance with Shaq
People wanna hang your jersey from the ceiling & you’re awfully fat
im disappointed with vinzr's verse. ive seen him drop millions better than this. I got tager on this battle with a quotable that landed just a tad more. vin's gotta incorporate more sting. no hate to either.
v/tager
I know this guy well, lemme tell you a thang or too
this is what you get when an aborigine fucks a kangaroo
Nahh
When's the last time something good came from australia?
everything after crocodile dundee has been a failure
Decent
huh? is really the only thing an audience can say
to your wack ass rhymes..
even your avatar has to drink the memories away
Decent
can someone explain to me how he has 25 victories?
his matches must have no showed or chugged listerine
Nahh
this man and his mates play rugby naked, a painful sport
that's why his crew's penz are infekted with anal warts
Nahh
vs.
Iron thinks he’s tough and thinks that he can spit fire,
But he sure ain’t livin a dream cause he’s makin men take off their attire
Nahh
He needs braces the way his teeth and mouth are deformed
But his lyrics are droppin jaws the way he’s always making ‘em yawn
Okay
You will remain bein’ a make-believe character stuck inside a video game
You don’t stand a chance in real life when you’re throwin punches at minimal range
Nahh
Live while you last, right now you have a lot of resemblance with Shaq
People wanna hang your jersey from the ceiling & you’re awfully fat
Okay
Light a match n blow some smoke, you’re a stoner, people mistaken you for a statue
That way haters ain’t comin near you so therefore they can’t match you
Nahh
Vin, if you would've thrown one more good punch, you could have taken this. This was a very close battle. IN the end Tiger beat the Aussie.
V/IT
uppin. get your links in tager
I know this guy well, lemme tell you a thang or too
this is what you get when an aborigine fucks a kangaroo
lmfao
huh? is really the only thing an audience can say
to your wack ass rhymes..
even your avatar has to drink the memories away
lol again
vs.
Live while you last, right now you have a lot of resemblance with Shaq
People wanna hang your jersey from the ceiling & you’re awfully fat
LOL
this was a funny battle, always more enjoyable to read.. Tager was more consistent, even the lines I didn't quote were decent enough, Vinz you had a few nice bars but your wording at the moment is too basic, it makes it look like you ain't really tryin sometimes, no hate bro..
V - Tager
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