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Things niggas say i don't mind it
Say they lost respect for me..
Who the fuck is asking you to find it - Joe Budden
actually did mine in 19 mins.. funny how ur ducking the check in.
pre-write away, u will need it.
ima savage that beasts shit, ur wack for a reason
deifys' known to keep it 100..
..u need to drop that many verses b4 1's actually decent
his intelligence is optimistic, by his spelling ud never know the difference
he skipped the hooked on phonix method.. by realizing that u can right click to fix it
i kno ur gonna hate this, gf says ur not someone she will stay with
but im someone she finds comfort inn.. now im taking her there on a regular basis
tho its only cus i feel bad for the geek, if id say she was fine id lie through my teeth
being from the south i drive a 'widebody cutless'.. & thats also how i would describe her physique
why you think ur a gangster?.. no one in the hoods ever heard of ya
see i got my ion the prize.. ur just known to drive ur satarn through white suburbia
Things niggas say i don't mind it
Say they lost respect for me..
Who the fuck is asking you to find it - Joe Budden
Blah blah, keystyling so hard this faggot wishes he wasn’t born
Swing to the face, watch him eat bat like he was Ozzy Osbourne
Murder bars, killer music, bitch quit rapping, please, just stop
Just like your drinkin limits, I leave you out with one shot
From the top, against me you're a pinprick, a bitch kid
You're out sucking dick and guzzling cum to have a stiff drink
You sick shit, probably fucking LOVES Limp Bizkit, go die
Remindin me of cardiac arrest way you only come with flatlines
Wack guy, heard ''You are what you eat'', well not this tootsie
Because he fucking loves dick, and still manages to be a pussy
Uppinggggg
ima savage that beasts shit, ur wack for a reason
deifys' known to keep it 100..
..u need to drop that many verses b4 1's actually decent
his intelligence is optimistic, by his spelling ud never know the difference
he skipped the hooked on phonix method.. by realizing that u can right click to fix it
i kno ur gonna hate this, gf says ur not someone she will stay with
but im someone she finds comfort inn.. now im taking her there on a regular basis
tho its only cus i feel bad for the geek, if id say she was fine id lie through my teeth
being from the south i drive a 'widebody cutless'.. & thats also how i would describe her physique
why you think ur a gangster?.. no one in the hoods ever heard of ya
see i got my ion the prize.. ur just known to drive ur satarn through white suburbia
vs
Blah blah, keystyling so hard this faggot wishes he wasn’t born
Swing to the face, watch him eat bat like he was Ozzy Osbourne
Murder bars, killer music, bitch quit rapping, please, just stop
Just like your drinkin limits, I leave you out with one shot
From the top, against me you're a pinprick, a bitch kid
You're out sucking dick and guzzling cum to have a stiff drink
You sick shit, probably fucking LOVES Limp Bizkit, go die
Remindin me of cardiac arrest way you only come with flatlines
Wack guy, heard ''You are what you eat'', well not this tootsie
Because he fucking loves dick, and still manages to be a pussy
VERDICT: Easy vote to deify. The outpatient had some decent attempts, but this was basically a land slide no hate.
vs
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ima savage that beasts shit, ur wack for a reason
deifys' known to keep it 100..
..u need to drop that many verses b4 1's actually decent
his intelligence is optimistic, by his spelling ud never know the difference
he skipped the hooked on phonix method.. by realizing that u can right click to fix it
i kno ur gonna hate this, gf says ur not someone she will stay with
but im someone she finds comfort inn.. now im taking her there on a regular basis
vs.
You sick shit, probably fucking LOVES Limp Bizkit, go die
Remindin me of cardiac arrest way you only come with flatlines
n00b battle here. nah im just kidding. Deify started off strong from the beginning and never fell down. Good punches, I was diggin your flow too. OutPatient your lines weren't bad either, but your punches were way off. Both need to elevate.
v - deify
ima savage that beasts shit, ur wack for a reason
deifys' known to keep it 100..
..u need to drop that many verses b4 1's actually decent
i kno ur gonna hate this, gf says ur not someone she will stay with
but im someone she finds comfort inn.. now im taking her there on a regular basis
vs.
Blah blah, keystyling so hard this faggot wishes he wasn’t born
Swing to the face, watch him eat bat like he was Ozzy Osbourne
lol never heard this b4
good battle here, deify was more complex with his lines though, and although top was pretty consistent with his lines d matched him and was a lil better... no hate top you're almost there fam..
V- D
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Deify:
ima savage that beasts shit, ur wack for a reason
deifys' known to keep it 100..
..u need to drop that many verses b4 1's actually decent
his intelligence is optimistic, by his spelling ud never know the difference
he skipped the hooked on phonix method.. by realizing that u can right click to fix it
i kno ur gonna hate this, gf says ur not someone she will stay with
but im someone she finds comfort inn.. now im taking her there on a regular basis
tho its only cus i feel bad for the geek, if id say she was fine id lie through my teeth
being from the south i drive a 'widebody cutless'.. & thats also how i would describe her physique
why you think ur a gangster?.. no one in the hoods ever heard of ya
see i got my ion the prize.. ur just known to drive ur satarn through white suburbia
Lmao i enjoyed the verse from begiining to end i loved how u put ur humor into ur punches and wordplay concepts.
T.O.P.
Blah blah, keystyling so hard this faggot wishes he wasn’t born
Swing to the face, watch him eat bat like he was Ozzy Osbourne
Murder bars, killer music, bitch quit rapping, please, just stop
Just like your drinkin limits, I leave you out with one shot
From the top, against me you're a pinprick, a bitch kid
You're out sucking dick and guzzling cum to have a stiff drink
You sick shit, probably fucking LOVES Limp Bizkit, go die
Remindin me of cardiac arrest way you only come with flatlines
Wack guy, heard ''You are what you eat'', well not this tootsie
Because he fucking loves dick, and still manages to be a pussy
Opener was nice had a little humor. the drinking limits line was good as well. after that u kinda fell off with ur punches.
v/ Deify
Thought he was more creative and i enjoyed his verse. No hate T.O.P. but u gotta come more harder and use creativity and concepts such as personals and metaphores.
ima savage that beasts shit, ur wack for a reason
deifys' known to keep it 100..
..u need to drop that many verses b4 1's actually decent
Concept is played...not feeling this at all. 1/5
his intelligence is optimistic, by his spelling ud never know the difference
he skipped the hooked on phonix method.. by realizing that u can right click to fix it
Weak punch attempt 1/5
i kno ur gonna hate this, gf says ur not someone she will stay with
but im someone she finds comfort inn.. now im taking her there on a regular basis
Ok decent punch 3/5
tho its only cus i feel bad for the geek, if id say she was fine id lie through my teeth
being from the south i drive a 'widebody cutless'.. & thats also how i would describe her physique
Stretched but decent 3/5
why you think ur a gangster?.. no one in the hoods ever heard of ya
see i got my ion the prize.. ur just known to drive ur satarn through white suburbia
Weak closer...I know where you were trying to go with this but the punch just didnt connect. 2/5
Total: 10/25
Blah blah, keystyling so hard this faggot wishes he wasn’t born
Swing to the face, watch him eat bat like he was Ozzy Osbourne
Ok decent opener...the ozzy line could've been worded better but it wa original. 3/5
Murder bars, killer music, bitch quit rapping, please, just stop
Just like your drinkin limits, I leave you out with one shot
Ok decent flip but the concept is played 2/5
From the top, against me you're a pinprick, a bitch kid
You're out sucking dick and guzzling cum to have a stiff drink
Not feeling this...it could've been better but the wording messed it up. 1/5
You sick shit, probably fucking LOVES Limp Bizkit, go die
Remindin me of cardiac arrest way you only come with flatlines
Hmmmm...ok! 2/5
Wack guy, heard ''You are what you eat'', well not this tootsie
Because he fucking loves dick, and still manages to be a pussy
Ok closer, nothing special. 2/5
Total: 10/25
Well according to the scoring, it was a tie battle between you two. The punches were pretty much right there together. But I think TOP was more consistent with his punches. There was not much to judge from but the deciding factor would have to be the structure. TOP's structure & flow was mch better than Deify so that's the reason why my vote goes to TOP.
v/TOP
No hate Deify...it was a close battle IMO but work on your structure because that is what edged the battle in his favor.
ima savage that beasts shit, ur wack for a reason
deifys' known to keep it 100..
..u need to drop that many verses b4 1's actually decent
Concept is played...not feeling this at all. 1/5
his intelligence is optimistic, by his spelling ud never know the difference
he skipped the hooked on phonix method.. by realizing that u can right click to fix it
Weak punch attempt 1/5
i kno ur gonna hate this, gf says ur not someone she will stay with
but im someone she finds comfort inn.. now im taking her there on a regular basis
Ok decent punch 3/5
tho its only cus i feel bad for the geek, if id say she was fine id lie through my teeth
being from the south i drive a 'widebody cutless'.. & thats also how i would describe her physique
Stretched but decent 3/5
why you think ur a gangster?.. no one in the hoods ever heard of ya
see i got my ion the prize.. ur just known to drive ur satarn through white suburbia
Weak closer...I know where you were trying to go with this but the punch just didnt connect. 2/5
Total: 10/25
Blah blah, keystyling so hard this faggot wishes he wasn’t born
Swing to the face, watch him eat bat like he was Ozzy Osbourne
Ok decent opener...the ozzy line could've been worded better but it wa original. 3/5
Murder bars, killer music, bitch quit rapping, please, just stop
Just like your drinkin limits, I leave you out with one shot
Ok decent flip but the concept is played 2/5
From the top, against me you're a pinprick, a bitch kid
You're out sucking dick and guzzling cum to have a stiff drink
Not feeling this...it could've been better but the wording messed it up. 1/5
You sick shit, probably fucking LOVES Limp Bizkit, go die
Remindin me of cardiac arrest way you only come with flatlines
Hmmmm...ok! 2/5
Wack guy, heard ''You are what you eat'', well not this tootsie
Because he fucking loves dick, and still manages to be a pussy
Ok closer, nothing special. 2/5
Total: 10/25
Well according to the scoring, it was a tie battle between you two. The punches were pretty much right there together. But I think TOP was more consistent with his punches. There was not much to judge from but the deciding factor would have to be the structure. TOP's structure & flow was mch better than Deify so that's the reason why my vote goes to TOP.
v/TOP
No hate Deify...it was a close battle IMO but work on your structure because that is what edged the battle in his favor.
bump.
Things niggas say i don't mind it
Say they lost respect for me..
Who the fuck is asking you to find it - Joe Budden
bump
flow: deify
multies: deify
punches: deify
complexity: deify
wordplay: top
nameplay: deify
delivery: deify
personals: top
v-deify for an overall better drop no hate it was a descent battle
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