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with that being said, solidus missed by less and attempted wordplay
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with that being said, solidus missed by less and attempted wordplay
v/ sol
btw "kick ass" it would help you out alot if you stopped using that green font tbh
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Everywhere I go, always see Kick Ass again;
Spittin piles of weak shyt like an oral laxative.
vote->soli for the better attempts. other dude had bad structure n weak hits
il turn solidus into solids, so he can realy understand the essence of evolving
ten lines he wanna go, so like kimbo; my guns il let em show.
tearing a new asshole in a whole different meaning,his words have no type of meaning.
its like he's in a greeting, been turned over alot. cooked over easy.
his mask on voo-doo moves, when he tryin-ta toss cards, BOY u stuck in those doo-doo shoes.why rap when when u feeling 2 lose, get a + to ya back like a crucify do ?
elevate before u fuck with a monster, id car crash the whip, but he still driving in a Honda! Solidus, the underground ghost, lame ass name is gonna get his ass roast!
have him fleeing from the scene, like he seen the holy ghost? cause when the moves come to place its like checkers 1 jump take u out now ya gotta now ya gotta go!
DayumNation
^ sorry about that... here is my vote
il turn solidus into solids, so he can realy understand the essence of evolving
ten lines he wanna go, so like kimbo; my guns il let em show.
rhyme scheme was off, should have a rhyme at the end of the lines,
other than that, no punch here, just filler
tearing a new asshole in a whole different meaning,his words have no type of meaning.
its like he's in a greeting, been turned over alot. cooked over easy.
eh, statementish... not a strong concept... try making a flip that will shock the
reader...
his mask on voo-doo moves, when he tryin-ta toss cards, BOY u stuck in those doo-doo shoes.why rap when when u feeling 2 lose, get a + to ya back like a crucify do ?
This bar made absolutely no sense... try to use the first bar to set up the punch...
second line is where you want the flip to be... i.e. (one punch I have used)
I'm fucking solids girl casually, so now this mother fucker is mad at me,
most parents ponder the sex of the child... solids wonders who the dad will be.
^see how the first bar set up the flip and it came together into a punch that had some sting to it? That is how each bar should be... be creative
elevate before u fuck with a monster, id car crash the whip, but he still driving in a Honda! Solidus, the underground ghost, lame ass name is gonna get his ass roast!
Once again, rhyme scheme was off... no punch here either
have him fleeing from the scene, like he seen the holy ghost? cause when the moves come to place its like checkers 1 jump take u out now ya gotta now ya gotta go!
Could have been developed into a punch. best attempt here
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Everywhere I go, always see Kick Ass again;
Spittin piles of weak shyt like an oral laxative.
nah... wayyy too simple
Need a doctor in the house, get this kid his medication;
Ritalin, Prozac, whatever causes his resignation.
no, you need to be witty with this... see the advice I gave above
Yet I remain to maintain regulation;
This kid's a One-Floor den, will never achieve elevation.
could be twisted into a punch... this was very statementish though
The fuck is with the avatar? Tron in Ninja Turtle pajamas?
He couldnt even make 'sense' writin a dollars worth of stanzas.
best attempt so far, but gotta come wittier than this.
Normally I aint the type to add insult to injury;
But that outfit & style is enough for me to give you my sympathy.
could be developed into a decent punch as well, but worded horribly
Overall, this was a very weak battle... both of you need to try to be more creative
with the disses and learn how to make a good flip that will translate into a punch.
keep elevating fellas, no hate.
vote- Solidus for better attempts
DayumNation
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this battle wasnt good, And kick ass you should structure your verse better. But my vote goes to Solidus, for actually having decent punches.
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