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Demosthenes
OLI_DOGG
normal rulez.8 linez.u spit 1st.1
10 Lines dude, no mroe and no less, that good for you? I hate doing below, so 10 lines?...........................
alrite man set dis shit da fuck of.1.............................................. .................................................. .......................
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OLI-Yes, sir I am studying to be a Chef.
Demo-Well your not that good.
OLI-Well all my other teachers said I was.
Demo-And why do you think that is?
Mastermind, confind to my mind, battleing to be refined in time/
He spit a deal, told his warden to fuck him for a 3 course meal/
Made me spit first, dead body soon to be squeezed into a hurst/
We got Chef Boy R D, please you couldent even make rave"oli"/
Soon To Die, STD victem spit when he high, he start wit slow flow/
Little lady wearin pearls, clams to play B-Ball, gets shook my girls/
Battling cold in tears, I entered the thread, worst fears appeared/
I'm started spit worse then eating a girl out and she pussy farted/
Retreated into a corner, I'm just about finished, call a couriner/
Gonna no show, little homo, rewind, want me to spit in slow-mo/
OLI-Well my first teacher was a warden.
Demo-Yes...
OLI-My second teacher was a Elton John.
Demo-Yes...
OLI-I can't remember why they liked me so much...
Demo-You let them fuck you, dident you?
OLI-Yeah that was it.
Alright guys I took your advice and shortened my lines. Quite a bit actually, tell me what you think about it now.
EXPLANATION: In his profile he said that he is a Chef.
Ok so bitch im a chef, and you think thats *funny?*
wel how bout this for a laugh, atleast i got some *money*,
look at this poor begger a bitch ass fuckin *broke*,
outa the bin he picked up a fag end, jst to have the last *toke*,
this kid went to a gay bar to ask for a *job*,
and he jumped at the chance of sucking the bosses *nob*,
so dnt give dis faggot points for punches give him points for *slaps*,
and dis *ho* aint rly got no *flow* so diss his fuckin *craps*,
oh shit im sorry i meant his poor excuse for *raps*,
oh fuck it im so bored of Demosthenes spitting im of to take a *nap*.
Demo- and y did u do dat hunny?
Oli- cus i saw u doing it to your boss.
Demo- oh deer Oli dat wasnt my boss.
Oli- it wasnt?
Demo- no love dat was my dad.
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Man, why do you noobs have to feed off of someones verse, plus you stole by closer, come on now, your just not cool, try not to do that in anymore of your battles, peeps get mad over that.
ha i didnt steel shit man i jst continued ur shit ass little story.lol.u cnt win it thru da ryhme so u have to put ur fantasyies in der aswell.lol.
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It's called an Opener and a Closer asshole, I doubt you can win with those rhymes anyway. You only had the last word rhyme, just shut the fuck up and let the people decide, no mroe talk, just uppin for votes from now on.
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Vote-Demo
Better punches and similes
Other dude had nun, and fake personals
Demo feedin off a battle is normal dude, thats how emcees audio battle all the time
Jus watch 8 mile
"SO IM A GERMAN EH" thats okay u look like a fuckin worm wit braids/
Or the miss clever line
Its kinda like defending urself, but the other dude sucked at it and it got him no where
Mearly another murk
[1] Uppin for some vtoes, drop your link and I will get to your battles...........................................
cyrpt = stupid
feeding is NOT a normal thing to do. Actually its against normal rules set up. If people do it in audio, who the fuck cares? Is THIS audio? This is text.....dont get it twisted. Oh wait, never mind u already did.
Alright, enough ranting, on to the battle....
To be honest, ive seen Demosthenes come a lot stronger than that. His spit wasnt horrible, but it lacked really hard punches...your flow wasnt bad though. Oli, you feed off his verse which was bad. Then u put a gay punch in there, which is played out. You had no originality, and u copyed his closer dialog thing. All of that equals a sucky verse. So even though Dem didnt come strong, he didnt have to.......vote = Dem.
peace.............................
Truth.
Another vote for me...
[2] Uppin for some votes.
Drop you link and I will get to your battle.
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